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-A Unique Short Minecraft Space Horror/Suspense map

What is going on guys, BowMaster707 here with something a bit different. I decided to make a unique short Minecraft adventure map. This map took me a long time to complete and multiple problems along the way. Downloads would be much appreciated as well as some feedback. Thanks!

This looks like an interesting map. I would suggest posting a recommended difficulty setting in your OP. I'm gonna give this map a shot and let you know what I think.

Just played it. Very interesting. I was hoping it would be a little bit longer, but that's okay. One thing I'd like to suggest though. I played it twice, the first time I completely missed the Living Quarters and went straight to the Cafeteria, and subsequently ended the game early. I deleted the map from my saves and reloaded it and started over again, this time, visiting the living quarters.

I'm suggesting that you should relocate the end of the map to some other area of the station, maybe make the station a bit bigger, and more places to explore. People playing this map could very easily make the same mistake I made the first time.

Ok thank man. I was thinking of sorting out the layout of the buildings. I could fix that in the next update. Sorry it was short. I wanted it to be a quick map for fun. Plus it was my first map. Thanks for playing and the feedback.

No problem dude, happy to help. One other thing is that I've seen some good sci-fi texture packs floating around so maybe you could put together a recommendation list of sci-fi TPs to use with this map.

I actually saw a couple good resource packs that were sci-fi themed. I could pick a couple and put links for them. I can do that when I release a fixed version of the map. By the way, did you, or anyone else find the Easter egg?

No, I didn't. If I did find it, it was probably by sheer luck and I probably didn't understand it.

In the first room where you spawn, go to the air lock. Look outside the window and there should be a sign with some numbers on it. Change the numbers to letters and you will decode it to find a word. Look up that word to find my inspiration for the map. Also, after you find out what the sign reads, the names in the sleeping quarters will make sense.

So I quickly played through this map this morning and have since uploaded a video on my channel.


The map itself, like others have said - was a bit short. But there was a sorta creepy feeling to it all. For a first map its not terrible, I've played much worse that is for sure. I'd say if you make another one, be sure to make it last longer. Perhaps find a texture pack that matches the theme you're going for and build in that (getting permission if needed of course). And maybe work on hiding everything a bit more. Such as using the command block's player detection to announce speech instead of visible pressure plates?

Needs a resource pack that gives it more of a space feel

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Needs a resource pack that gives it more of a space feel

One that I used for my playthrough was called A New World: Futuristic (32x32). It's a really cool pack, but it's really underrated. It makes the map look really awesome.

Loved it! I got all into it! You can definitely expand this map. The idea is awesome!

Yo Dude I think i Will make a video on this
Channel: www.youtube.com/user/thekidkreeper

Wow! thanks for all the feedback dudes! I will fix the map in a update coming within the next few days. I will also add a link to a resource pack I think will suit this map best. I am thinking of making a squeal instead of expanding. I think it could be like in episodes like games like The Wolf Among Us of something.

New version available!

Looks freaking cool im going to try this out and make a video !

If you make a video, post a link and it'll be put under let's plays on the main topic.

DONEEE

Thanks for the map Playthrough man.

I had some free time since I don't need to sleep til an hour from now, but thanks again for asking me to make a trailer for your map ^^