Alrighty, first of all, you need to post pictures of your map, if you don't, no one is going to try it.
Second, lemme teach you a couple of things about "marketing". It's all about selling your map to the player. It has to make them say : "This looks so awesome I'd sell my mom for it". What you posted? Doesn't do it in the slightest! Your map might be the best out there, but with a post like that, it's going to go unnoticed.
If you space out your sentences, it might already look better.
You can try this for the intro :
You drove them deep into the heart of the reich.
You thought they were dead. <---- Which looks really professional. You were wrong...
This looks HORRIBLE!
NOTICE:Please dont buy any items without the required experience levels.
Doesn't this look better?
NOTICE : Please do not buy any items without the required experience levels.
NEVER and I say NEVEERRR! Use comic sans on ANYTHING. It looks childish and VERY "noobish". You always want to stay with the same style and size throughout all of your post.