The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
A humorous map...
Anyways... FEED BACK
Looks: There's a few buildings to look at and it looks pretty decent! There's the usual details like chairs tables etc. It's all spaced out and even, avoiding the feeling of being cramped inside. Nothing that is too impressive but nothing that looks really bad either. Some of the houses shapes are interesting to look at.
Game play: To be honest there isn't much to do along the way. 2/3s of the map is spent just traveling from 1 point to another which can be boring and dull. There's no parkour, puzzles or ANYTHING that you can do. There's little content, maybe make some side quests? parkour? SOMETHING that the user can do that isn't traveling 5 meters from this location to the next every time. Unfortunately, there's not much to say about this unless you add more content
Story: I like the twist at the beginning and how it wasn't ridiculously long or dull, rather it was short and sweet. However there isn't much detail and things were put in the story a bit randomly. It was kind of humorous and I loved the ending!.
There is some grammar mistakes along the way, not enough to hinder the experience but you should check it twice as there is a couple of common misspelled words.
Bug: In the bar, you need to set the fireplace back more.Since it's burning the wood in front of it... MY POOR ROOM D:
There's not much to say about this map. It wasn't the most memorable. When comparing this map the others, it lacks content and replaces it with traveling. A couple of improvements could be made to make this a little better.
(usually out of 5)