Here, I'll try something for ya. Mostly cause I'm bored and I think this gives you a chance to have a major point heard. At the end there will be your thesis statement. But before that, any points you bring up, make sure you have a legit source for them. Something your teacher doesn't arbitrarily hate. Always list the positive first, it impresses teachers and makes it look like you believe that more. Also always include more points then what is covered in your thesis.
"There are both positive and negative aspects to being part of a school team, Positively members of the team have a stable base outside of the class room to develop social skills, Negatively being part of a team naturally leads to a sense of elitism."
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Now that being said. Ponies.
''The Positive and Negative points on being in a school team.''
PLZ HELP ME T_T
Negative: There are no negatives
Thanks! I bet i'll get an A on this.
but i need more than that troll.
Now that being said. Ponies.
Yeah i am but im having a hard time thinking of a Thesis statement :/
Ok so you just want some help not for us to do it ok. Are you pro school teams or anti school teams?
EDIT: I used to sell thesis statements and C papers to stoners, so these aren't great but they pass.
Now that being said. Ponies.
uhm What do you mean? if u mean by Pro and cons on being on a school team...its both.
I figure it's like the football team, or similar.
Le derp. My bad.
Pro: it builds a sense of companionship and teamwork.
Con: Increased aggression and elitism.
Now that being said. Ponies.
Yeah its the ''The Positive and Negative points on being in a school team.''
I won't help you any more than that though, you gotta do it yourself.
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"There are both positive and negative aspects to being part of a school team, Positively members of the team have a stable base outside of the class room to develop social skills, Negatively being part of a team naturally leads to a sense of elitism."
Now that being said. Ponies.
It's called a joke, not everyone is a troll.
Now on to helping you.
I've writting out what you should do, it's in the spoiler tags.