Sorry, but most people won't download without screenshots because they think it's a virus, which it probably is. Give us a good reason why you don't have screenshots, or at least attempt to put some on.
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YOU DO NOT UNDER ANY CIRCUMSTANCE EAT THE MIND HONEY
Yeah, I went through the tutorial thing and i'm not a noob (seriously), i spent less than 1 minute and completed it but there were some flaws that i noticed.
First, i got the first part wrong (the "Let's see how well you jump" part) on purpose so that i could see the whole thing, you NEVER say fail to a person trying to learn, it just demotivates them.
Second, when you start the game in your map you already start with 61 Smooth stone blocks which apparently had no use.
Third, there was a part that you asked the player to cut wood, it was so dark that i couldn't even see the wood.
But look these are only constructive comments, your intensions where great and i like the last part where you tell the player to explore their creativity but from that small tutorial you don't learn everything there is to learn, you learn the REAL Basics of minecraft, and even mastering those you do not get the full game so my sugestion would be focussing more on variety =)
P.S: I don't mean to be mean or anything i'm just saying it could be better for complete new player =)
(Add screenshots please, many people won't download if there are no screenshots)