Minecraft User Name:Nico756
Age: 17
Character Name: Flit
Character Age: 19
Character Gender: male
Character Bio: Hailing from a tribe of underwater nomads, Flit has also been an outcast, while others spent their days gathering seaweed to make seaweed foo-foo, he would run off and go on marvelous adventures fighting giant squids, sharks, alligators, everything! He would always return a few days later and catch up with his tribe, only to be met with scorn and disapproval, but recently he got caught in a storm swell, and is now trapped on land (he is able to breath air as well as water) it is now time for his greatest adventure yet, exploring this new found land and finding his tribe once more!
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RP Ability (Advanced/Intermediate/Beginner): Beginner
Why I want to join: I've Rped one before and had a blast so I wanna try it again
RP Sample: Flit walked into the lighted building, hoping to find something to drink, he sure got thristy fast out of the water! However, as soon as he walked in, all conversation stopped, everyone turned to look at the new, blue, intruder...
Type out a paragraph about what your character would do after waking up in the hut with little memories. flit burst awake, his first move being to whip out the dagger from his shoulder sheath, he looked around, the surroundings seemed beneign enough. Slowly standing up as to not collapse again, flit eventually was standing, albeit leaning on a wall. He slowly made his way to he door of this strange building, but just as he reached it, it flung open with a bang!
Oh and by the way, pillows don't count!
Minecraft User Name:Nico756
Age: 17
Character Name: Flit
Character Age: 19
Character Gender: male
Character Bio: Hailing from a tribe of underwater nomads, Flit has also been an outcast, while others spent their days gathering seaweed to make seaweed foo-foo, he would run off and go on marvelous adventures fighting giant squids, sharks, alligators, everything! He would always return a few days later and catch up with his tribe, only to be met with scorn and disapproval, but recently he got caught in a storm swell, and is now trapped on land (he is able to breath air as well as water) it is now time for his greatest adventure yet, exploring this new found land and finding his tribe once more!
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RP Ability (Advanced/Intermediate/Beginner): Beginner
Why I want to join: I've Rped one before and had a blast so I wanna try it again
RP Sample: Flit walked into the lighted building, hoping to find something to drink, he sure got thristy fast out of the water! However, as soon as he walked in, all conversation stopped, everyone turned to look at the new, blue, intruder...
Type out a paragraph about what your character would do after waking up in the hut with little memories. flit burst awake, his first move being to whip out the dagger from his shoulder sheath, he looked around, the surroundings seemed beneign enough. Slowly standing up as to not collapse again, flit eventually was standing, albeit leaning on a wall. He slowly made his way to he door of this strange building, but just as he reached it, it flung open with a bang!
Character Name: Archon (I know, it's pretty much the same as my IGN, but I have always used that name on RPs).
Character Age: 22
Character Gender: Male
Character Bio: "[i]Life in the village isn't easy, my child..." .. Those words echoed in Archon's mind every now and then. After all, his uncle was [i]right[/i], living in a village was very difficult. Having lost his parents during an attack on his former village, Archon was taken by his Uncle and Aunt to live on a village by the coast.
But despite the occasional storms and other natural disasters, everything was quite good; After all, everything could have been worse, sharing the same fate as his parents.
Though, as days passed, the same routine, day after day, started to make Archon's life a bit dull.. and boring.
[i]"I wonder if those lands and stories told in the tales my uncle used to tell me about are true.."[/i], thought Archon one day, while sitting by a tree.. That was it, his sedentary life was over.. It was time to explore the lands, far away from his home!.
3 days later, after a brief goodbye, he started his journey.. What would happen to him was now on the hands of Destiny..
RP Ability (Advanced/Intermediate/Beginner): Intermediate/Advanced. I've RPed before, though this is my first time on Minecraft.
Why I want to join: Basically, because I've never tried RP on Minecraft. I feel like getting a new experience aswell as broaden my knowledge on Minecraft roleplaying.
RP Sample: After 3 days of traveling, it was time to take a rest. While looking for wood in the surroundings, Archon noticed a clearing in a pine forest which was perfect and comfy to sleep during the night.
Though, he had to be aware. He didn't know what kind of dangers roamed this forest. He carefully carved a wooden sword out a log, using a knife he had taken with him before leaving his home.
Once the campfire was ready, he decided to sleep, until it was dawn to resume his journey. But, while trying to sleep, he started to feel pain, adding to the feeling that someone or something was asphyxiating him.. After some struggling, he blacked out..
Type out a paragraph about what your character would do after waking up in the hut with little memories. :
Darkness. That was all he could see, until he opened his eyes. Feeling weak, he took a look at the place where he was..
"[i]A hut?..[/i]" was all he managed to mutter, after realizing he was at a rather abandoned hut, with some forgotten pieces of wood laying on the floor. He also noticed some strange lightning for a while, though he didn't care much about it, as it dissappeared after a while.
After resting for a while, Archon decides to stand up, taking part of the wood with him; as he realized all the items he brought with him were missing.
Upon leaving the hut, a small, moss-covered sign was standing in front of him. The writing seemed to have decayed over time, though he managed to read the words [i]Survivor[/i] and [i]Colony[/i].. It was time to go to that place, after all, answers could be there..
Minecraft User Name: MrCarraway Age: 18 Character Name: Rildar Character Age: 23 Character Gender: Male Character Bio: Rildar is a hitman for big cities. With how his life has been filled with blood, he has adapted to a life of killing. He is not afraid to put a knife in the back of his family members, however this does not mean he hates everybody. He only hates those who think they're above everyone else or think they're on top of the world. He has friends in every town he visits, and they help him carry out contracts on the ones who deserve it. As his job hints, he is skilled with sword and bow, yet he knows the general ideas for every other job there is because of his travels and lodging. RP Ability (Advanced/Intermediate/Beginner): Intermediate Why I want to join: I want to join a server where the community is nice and has that flare to keep it alive. RP Sample: Rildar was in the town if Hertfordshire, where he recently put an arrow through the head of a rich executive who ruled his city with an iron fist. As he was prepared to leave, he is confronted by a guard. He knew how to smooth talk the guards, so he asked what was wrong. The guard said he saw him kill the executive, and wanted him in jail. Ridlar used his silver tongue to fool the guard, but this guard was the chief of defense for the town. The guard stated what his position was, and began to attack Rildar. Rildar managed to kill the man, but knew it was only a matter of time. He began to run out of the city, with 100 guards flagging him down. Rildar managed to escape by using a creeper to blow up the bridge. He knew that his career was on the ropes, so he decided to start living in the middle of nowhere. Type out a paragraph about what your character would do after waking up in the hut with little memories.
Rildar awoke from what seemed like a deep sleep. He was startled to see that he was in the hut near the pond where he drank a foul tasting water. He only remembered his name, and that he had a note in his pocket that read "Be sure to carry the task we have assigned for you at ." He has no idea what the note says. He sees a town in the distance, and decides to head there. He sees a chest with supplies, and takes them. after he is situated, he heads towards the town, hoping to get some answers.
Minecraft User Name: MrCarraway Age: 18 Character Name: Rildar Character Age: 23 Character Gender: Male Character Bio: Rildar is a hitman for big cities. With how his life has been filled with blood, he has adapted to a life of killing. He is not afraid to put a knife in the back of his family members, however this does not mean he hates everybody. He only hates those who think they're above everyone else or think they're on top of the world. He has friends in every town he visits, and they help him carry out contracts on the ones who deserve it. As his job hints, he is skilled with sword and bow, yet he knows the general ideas for every other job there is because of his travels and lodging. RP Ability (Advanced/Intermediate/Beginner): Intermediate Why I want to join: I want to join a server where the community is nice and has that flare to keep it alive. RP Sample: Rildar was in the town if Hertfordshire, where he recently put an arrow through the head of a rich executive who ruled his city with an iron fist. As he was prepared to leave, he is confronted by a guard. He knew how to smooth talk the guards, so he asked what was wrong. The guard said he saw him kill the executive, and wanted him in jail. Ridlar used his silver tongue to fool the guard, but this guard was the chief of defense for the town. The guard stated what his position was, and began to attack Rildar. Rildar managed to kill the man, but knew it was only a matter of time. He began to run out of the city, with 100 guards flagging him down. Rildar managed to escape by using a creeper to blow up the bridge. He knew that his career was on the ropes, so he decided to start living in the middle of nowhere. Type out a paragraph about what your character would do after waking up in the hut with little memories.
Rildar awoke from what seemed like a deep sleep. He was startled to see that he was in the hut near the pond where he drank a foul tasting water. He only remembered his name, and that he had a note in his pocket that read "Be sure to carry the task we have assigned for you at ." He has no idea what the note says. He sees a town in the distance, and decides to head there. He sees a chest with supplies, and takes them. after he is situated, he heads towards the town, hoping to get some answers.
Oh yeah, A pillow doesn't count
We regret to inform you that your application has been denied. If you care to reapply please post again. Thank you for your interest.
Oh yeah, give me 1 good reason why, and I will reapply. I did everything right, did I not?
Yes, you did, however your character does not fit the mold we're looking for. Your RP sample and application were great, however it's just not what we're looking for. Nothing personal, of course. Take care.
Ok. I'll make a new application Minecraft User Name: MrCarraway Age: 18 Character Name: Mather Character Age: 20 Character Gender: Male Character Bio: Mather is one who feels he has to learn all the knowledge there is. Throughout his life, he has read about 100,000 books and has the answer to anything and everything. His friends share common interests with him, and can never compare to him. This does not mean he can't fight. He trains with combat every now and again and always learns new techniques from books. He is planning to be a scholar for the biggest library in all of the land. RP Ability (Advanced/Intermediate/Beginner): Intermediate Why I want to join: I want a fun, enjoyable, and creative server with flare as a touch. RP Sample: Mather was reading a book on enchanting on a fine, sunny day when he heard a commotion outside. He decided to check to see what was going on. As he got outside, he found himself being choked. He managed to break free, and got a note from the man. He learned that the man was a mercenary hired to kill him because his knowledge would prove to be a pain to the employer's side. Mather gathered his things from his dorm at his college, and decided he would go to the Library of Secrets, where the mercenaries would never find him. As he was walking twoards there, he remembered of a little place where mages resided. He then chose to go there so he can learn magic to defend himself better when needed. Type out a paragraph about what your character would do after waking up in the hut with little memories.
Mather woke up from a strange trance. He found himself in a hut where he rested after drinking water from the nearby lake. He looked out the windows and saw a town. he doesn't know why he came here,but he was determined to find out. He took whatever supplies he could, and ventured out towards the town. he didn't know why he was trying to get there, but he wasn't going to stop, even if the natives are hostile.
Ok. I'll make a new application Minecraft User Name: MrCarraway Age: 18 Character Name: Mather Character Age: 20 Character Gender: Male Character Bio: Mather is one who feels he has to learn all the knowledge there is. Throughout his life, he has read about 100,000 books and has the answer to anything and everything. His friends share common interests with him, and can never compare to him. This does not mean he can't fight. He trains with combat every now and again and always learns new techniques from books. He is planning to be a scholar for the biggest library in all of the land. RP Ability (Advanced/Intermediate/Beginner): Intermediate Why I want to join: I want a fun, enjoyable, and creative server with flare as a touch. RP Sample: Mather was reading a book on enchanting on a fine, sunny day when he heard a commotion outside. He decided to check to see what was going on. As he got outside, he found himself being choked. He managed to break free, and got a note from the man. He learned that the man was a mercenary hired to kill him because his knowledge would prove to be a pain to the employer's side. Mather gathered his things from his dorm at his college, and decided he would go to the Library of Secrets, where the mercenaries would never find him. As he was walking twoards there, he remembered of a little place where mages resided. He then chose to go there so he can learn magic to defend himself better when needed. Type out a paragraph about what your character would do after waking up in the hut with little memories.
Mather woke up from a strange trance. He found himself in a hut where he rested after drinking water from the nearby lake. He looked out the windows and saw a town. he doesn't know why he came here,but he was determined to find out. He took whatever supplies he could, and ventured out towards the town. he didn't know why he was trying to get there, but he wasn't going to stop, even if the natives are hostile.
P.S: Pillows don't count.
Um dude, you might want to be a bit more humble when applying. If you check the other apps, no one is like "I've read 100.000 books and I know the answer to everything"; No, we're just plain villagers who'd gone on adventure.
Ok. I'll make a new application Minecraft User Name: MrCarraway Age: 18 Character Name: Mather Character Age: 20 Character Gender: Male Character Bio: Mather is one who feels he has to learn all the knowledge there is. Throughout his life, he has read about 100,000 books and has the answer to anything and everything. His friends share common interests with him, and can never compare to him. This does not mean he can't fight. He trains with combat every now and again and always learns new techniques from books. He is planning to be a scholar for the biggest library in all of the land. RP Ability (Advanced/Intermediate/Beginner): Intermediate Why I want to join: I want a fun, enjoyable, and creative server with flare as a touch. RP Sample: Mather was reading a book on enchanting on a fine, sunny day when he heard a commotion outside. He decided to check to see what was going on. As he got outside, he found himself being choked. He managed to break free, and got a note from the man. He learned that the man was a mercenary hired to kill him because his knowledge would prove to be a pain to the employer's side. Mather gathered his things from his dorm at his college, and decided he would go to the Library of Secrets, where the mercenaries would never find him. As he was walking twoards there, he remembered of a little place where mages resided. He then chose to go there so he can learn magic to defend himself better when needed. Type out a paragraph about what your character would do after waking up in the hut with little memories.
Mather woke up from a strange trance. He found himself in a hut where he rested after drinking water from the nearby lake. He looked out the windows and saw a town. he doesn't know why he came here,but he was determined to find out. He took whatever supplies he could, and ventured out towards the town. he didn't know why he was trying to get there, but he wasn't going to stop, even if the natives are hostile.
P.S: Pillows don't count.
Only 20 years old and 100,000 books? Sigh, try making a character that isn't a overly stupid please. The godmod esk nature of your characters are also a reason why you are getting rejected. So we regret to inform you but this application has also been denied. Take some thought and plan out a character that is not some godly all powerful all knowing being. Thank you.
Um dude, you might want to be a bit more humble when applying. If you check the other apps, no one is like "I've read 100.000 books and I know the answer to everything"; No, we're just plain villagers who'd gone on adventure.
Just a small suggestion.
Yes, this person is right. That's bordering on metagaming I believe.
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I'll try one last time. Hope this does the trick. Minecraft User Name: MrCarraway Age: 18 Character Name: Etash Character Age: 27 Character Gender: Male Character Bio: Etash is a humble guard for his hometown. He wanted to pursue the medical field, but because of his inability to remember things quickly, he was stuck being a guard for his home. He hates his job, but has no other choice. He has adept combat skills, but can't compare to the other guards. He has supporting friends who help him get by, and that makes him happy. He does have the advantage of being able to be a good negotiator, but even that is not looked upon in his city. RP Ability (Advanced/Intermediate/Beginner): Intermediate Why I want to join: I want to join a fun, engaging, and interesting server. RP Sample: Etash was patrolling the streets on a snowy night, when he saw a robbery taking place. He runs over to the robber and tries to stop him, but the thief is too quick for him, and gets away. A nearby guard comes to help, but decides to scorn Etash for his weak physical attributes. The next day, he is called the the Hall of Leaders. When he gets there, he is stripped of his weapon and forced to sit in a chair. He learns that the leaders have decided to exile Etash because of his inability to rise to his job. They escort him outside the city with nothing. He then decides to go to another town, where he'll be accepted for being him. He sees a group of raiders preparing to attack the town, and decides not to do anything to help the people who hate him so much. One day, he learns that the attack failed, and he signs and continues his search. Type out a paragraph about what your character would do after waking up in the hut with little memories.
Etash awakes from a very strange dream, only to find himself in a hut. he gets out of the bed and though about the water that he had drank the night before. Did the water do this? He tries to remember what he was doing, but can't remember anything besides his name. He spots a road and questions whether or not to to follow it. He decides to follow it and find out what exactly happened to him.
Minecraft User Name: remi112
Age: 13
Character Name: Dima Kaffov
Character Age: 26
Character Gender: Male
Character Bio: Tall, Handsome, and Strong. Black Hair, Blue Eyes. Wears Goggles, A Leather Tunic with a steel pad on the shoulder, Boots, and Cloth Pants. As a Child, he was a blacksmiths apprentice, and mostly worked on iron forgery. He had ran away 2 years after his start at the smithy because the black smith was beating him. Dima went on to do Courier work and ended up getting into bad situations. He would take jobs to assassinate people, and after some time, Dima began to use that experience to the advantage. He is still a Courier as we speak.
RP Ability (Advanced/Intermediate/Beginner): Intermediate, Its been 4 years.
Why I want to join: I love role play, I have been doing it for 4 years, and it has been a great 4 years.
RP Sample: Remi walks outside to grab the mail.
Neighbor George walks outside to grab the mail aswell.
Remi waves.
George waves back, saying "Howdy neighbor!"
Remi says "How's it going, George?"
George says "Well, My wife will be gone at 6, wanna come over and watch the game?"
Remi says "Sure!", Grabbing his mail, and waving goodbye.
George nods.
Remi walks back inside his home.
Type out a paragraph about what your character would do after waking up in the (a hut, Sorry, had to correct you.) hut with little memories.
Agh... Where am I? My head... I cant remember anything...Oh god.. Its dark, I cant see. Uhhh.. My name is... I am Dima.. But... How long have I BEEN here? Wheres the door? Here it is. Damn, Its locked. Maybe I can find a key... Would this one work? Aha! Yes! It works! Freedom!Oh, Forgot... Pillows Dont count.
I'll try one last time. Hope this does the trick. Minecraft User Name: MrCarraway Age: 18 Character Name: Etash Character Age: 27 Character Gender: Male Character Bio: Etash is a humble guard for his hometown. He wanted to pursue the medical field, but because of his inability to remember things quickly, he was stuck being a guard for his home. He hates his job, but has no other choice. He has adept combat skills, but can't compare to the other guards. He has supporting friends who help him get by, and that makes him happy. He does have the advantage of being able to be a good negotiator, but even that is not looked upon in his city. RP Ability (Advanced/Intermediate/Beginner): Intermediate Why I want to join: I want to join a fun, engaging, and interesting server. RP Sample: Etash was patrolling the streets on a snowy night, when he saw a robbery taking place. He runs over to the robber and tries to stop him, but the thief is too quick for him, and gets away. A nearby guard comes to help, but decides to scorn Etash for his weak physical attributes. The next day, he is called the the Hall of Leaders. When he gets there, he is stripped of his weapon and forced to sit in a chair. He learns that the leaders have decided to exile Etash because of his inability to rise to his job. They escort him outside the city with nothing. He then decides to go to another town, where he'll be accepted for being him. He sees a group of raiders preparing to attack the town, and decides not to do anything to help the people who hate him so much. One day, he learns that the attack failed, and he signs and continues his search. Type out a paragraph about what your character would do after waking up in the hut with little memories.
Etash awakes from a very strange dream, only to find himself in a hut. he gets out of the bed and though about the water that he had drank the night before. Did the water do this? He tries to remember what he was doing, but can't remember anything besides his name. He spots a road and questions whether or not to to follow it. He decides to follow it and find out what exactly happened to him.
P.S: Pillow's don't count.
That's actually good. You'll have to wait for the owner's though.
Minecraft User Name: remi112
Age: 13
Character Name: Dima Kaffov
Character Age: 26
Character Gender: Male
Character Bio: Tall, Handsome, and Strong. Black Hair, Blue Eyes. Wears Goggles, A Leather Tunic with a steel pad on the shoulder, Boots, and Cloth Pants. As a Child, he was a blacksmiths apprentice, and mostly worked on iron forgery. He had ran away 2 years after his start at the smithy because the black smith was beating him. Dima went on to do Courier work and ended up getting into bad situations. He would take jobs to assassinate people, and after some time, Dima began to use that experience to the advantage. He is still a Courier as we speak.
RP Ability (Advanced/Intermediate/Beginner): Intermediate, Its been 4 years.
Why I want to join: I love role play, I have been doing it for 4 years, and it has been a great 4 years.
RP Sample: Remi walks outside to grab the mail.
Neighbor George walks outside to grab the mail aswell.
Remi waves.
George waves back, saying "Howdy neighbor!"
Remi says "How's it going, George?"
George says "Well, My wife will be gone at 6, wanna come over and watch the game?"
Remi says "Sure!", Grabbing his mail, and waving goodbye.
George nods.
Remi walks back inside his home.
Type out a paragraph about what your character would do after waking up in the (a hut, Sorry, had to correct you.) hut with little memories.
Agh... Where am I? My head... I cant remember anything...Oh god.. Its dark, I cant see. Uhhh.. My name is... I am Dima.. But... How long have I BEEN here? Wheres the door? Here it is. Damn, Its locked. Maybe I can find a key... Would this one work? Aha! Yes! It works! Freedom!
Oh, Forgot... Pillows Dont count.
You might want to fix that, a huge wall of text is kinda hard to read.
I'll try one last time. Hope this does the trick. Minecraft User Name: MrCarraway Age: 18 Character Name: Etash Character Age: 27 Character Gender: Male Character Bio: Etash is a humble guard for his hometown. He wanted to pursue the medical field, but because of his inability to remember things quickly, he was stuck being a guard for his home. He hates his job, but has no other choice. He has adept combat skills, but can't compare to the other guards. He has supporting friends who help him get by, and that makes him happy. He does have the advantage of being able to be a good negotiator, but even that is not looked upon in his city. RP Ability (Advanced/Intermediate/Beginner): Intermediate Why I want to join: I want to join a fun, engaging, and interesting server. RP Sample: Etash was patrolling the streets on a snowy night, when he saw a robbery taking place. He runs over to the robber and tries to stop him, but the thief is too quick for him, and gets away. A nearby guard comes to help, but decides to scorn Etash for his weak physical attributes. The next day, he is called the the Hall of Leaders. When he gets there, he is stripped of his weapon and forced to sit in a chair. He learns that the leaders have decided to exile Etash because of his inability to rise to his job. They escort him outside the city with nothing. He then decides to go to another town, where he'll be accepted for being him. He sees a group of raiders preparing to attack the town, and decides not to do anything to help the people who hate him so much. One day, he learns that the attack failed, and he signs and continues his search. Type out a paragraph about what your character would do after waking up in the hut with little memories.
Etash awakes from a very strange dream, only to find himself in a hut. he gets out of the bed and though about the water that he had drank the night before. Did the water do this? He tries to remember what he was doing, but can't remember anything besides his name. He spots a road and questions whether or not to to follow it. He decides to follow it and find out what exactly happened to him.
P.S: Pillow's don't count.
Your application is being deliberated, please be patient.
Minecraft User Name: remi112
Age: 13
Character Name: Dima Kaffov
Character Age: 26
Character Gender: Male
Character Bio: Tall, Handsome, and Strong. Black Hair, Blue Eyes. Wears Goggles, A Leather Tunic with a steel pad on the shoulder, Boots, and Cloth Pants. As a Child, he was a blacksmiths apprentice, and mostly worked on iron forgery. He had ran away 2 years after his start at the smithy because the black smith was beating him. Dima went on to do Courier work and ended up getting into bad situations. He would take jobs to assassinate people, and after some time, Dima began to use that experience to the advantage. He is still a Courier as we speak.
RP Ability (Advanced/Intermediate/Beginner): Intermediate, Its been 4 years.
Why I want to join: I love role play, I have been doing it for 4 years, and it has been a great 4 years.
RP Sample: Remi walks outside to grab the mail.
Neighbor George walks outside to grab the mail aswell.
Remi waves.
George waves back, saying "Howdy neighbor!"
Remi says "How's it going, George?"
George says "Well, My wife will be gone at 6, wanna come over and watch the game?"
Remi says "Sure!", Grabbing his mail, and waving goodbye.
George nods.
Remi walks back inside his home.
Type out a paragraph about what your character would do after waking up in the (a hut, Sorry, had to correct you.) hut with little memories.
Agh... Where am I? My head... I cant remember anything...Oh god.. Its dark, I cant see. Uhhh.. My name is... I am Dima.. But... How long have I BEEN here? Wheres the door? Here it is. Damn, Its locked. Maybe I can find a key... Would this one work? Aha! Yes! It works! Freedom!
Oh, Forgot... Pillows Dont count.
If you wouldn't mind re-applying with a format fitting more closely to what we asked for, that would be great. Check out other applicants that were accepted and try to mirror their format. Thank you for your interest.
Application accepted!
Welcome to Dalencourt!
Age: 18
Character Name: Rildar
Character Age: 23
Character Gender: Male
Character Bio: Rildar is a hitman for big cities. With how his life has been filled with blood, he has adapted to a life of killing. He is not afraid to put a knife in the back of his family members, however this does not mean he hates everybody. He only hates those who think they're above everyone else or think they're on top of the world. He has friends in every town he visits, and they help him carry out contracts on the ones who deserve it. As his job hints, he is skilled with sword and bow, yet he knows the general ideas for every other job there is because of his travels and lodging.
RP Ability (Advanced/Intermediate/Beginner): Intermediate
Why I want to join: I want to join a server where the community is nice and has that flare to keep it alive.
RP Sample: Rildar was in the town if Hertfordshire, where he recently put an arrow through the head of a rich executive who ruled his city with an iron fist. As he was prepared to leave, he is confronted by a guard. He knew how to smooth talk the guards, so he asked what was wrong. The guard said he saw him kill the executive, and wanted him in jail. Ridlar used his silver tongue to fool the guard, but this guard was the chief of defense for the town. The guard stated what his position was, and began to attack Rildar. Rildar managed to kill the man, but knew it was only a matter of time. He began to run out of the city, with 100 guards flagging him down. Rildar managed to escape by using a creeper to blow up the bridge. He knew that his career was on the ropes, so he decided to start living in the middle of nowhere.
Type out a paragraph about what your character would do after waking up in the hut with little memories.
Rildar awoke from what seemed like a deep sleep. He was startled to see that he was in the hut near the pond where he drank a foul tasting water. He only remembered his name, and that he had a note in his pocket that read "Be sure to carry the task we have assigned for you at ." He has no idea what the note says. He sees a town in the distance, and decides to head there. He sees a chest with supplies, and takes them. after he is situated, he heads towards the town, hoping to get some answers.
Oh yeah, A pillow doesn't count
We regret to inform you that your application has been denied. If you care to reapply please post again. Thank you for your interest.
We greatly appreciate the comment Archon. :smile.gif:
Yes, you did, however your character does not fit the mold we're looking for. Your RP sample and application were great, however it's just not what we're looking for. Nothing personal, of course. Take care.
Minecraft User Name: MrCarraway
Age: 18
Character Name: Mather
Character Age: 20
Character Gender: Male
Character Bio: Mather is one who feels he has to learn all the knowledge there is. Throughout his life, he has read about 100,000 books and has the answer to anything and everything. His friends share common interests with him, and can never compare to him. This does not mean he can't fight. He trains with combat every now and again and always learns new techniques from books. He is planning to be a scholar for the biggest library in all of the land.
RP Ability (Advanced/Intermediate/Beginner): Intermediate
Why I want to join: I want a fun, enjoyable, and creative server with flare as a touch.
RP Sample: Mather was reading a book on enchanting on a fine, sunny day when he heard a commotion outside. He decided to check to see what was going on. As he got outside, he found himself being choked. He managed to break free, and got a note from the man. He learned that the man was a mercenary hired to kill him because his knowledge would prove to be a pain to the employer's side. Mather gathered his things from his dorm at his college, and decided he would go to the Library of Secrets, where the mercenaries would never find him. As he was walking twoards there, he remembered of a little place where mages resided. He then chose to go there so he can learn magic to defend himself better when needed.
Type out a paragraph about what your character would do after waking up in the hut with little memories.
Mather woke up from a strange trance. He found himself in a hut where he rested after drinking water from the nearby lake. He looked out the windows and saw a town. he doesn't know why he came here,but he was determined to find out. He took whatever supplies he could, and ventured out towards the town. he didn't know why he was trying to get there, but he wasn't going to stop, even if the natives are hostile.
P.S: Pillows don't count.
Um dude, you might want to be a bit more humble when applying. If you check the other apps, no one is like "I've read 100.000 books and I know the answer to everything"; No, we're just plain villagers who'd gone on adventure.
Just a small suggestion.
Only 20 years old and 100,000 books? Sigh, try making a character that isn't a overly stupid please. The godmod esk nature of your characters are also a reason why you are getting rejected. So we regret to inform you but this application has also been denied. Take some thought and plan out a character that is not some godly all powerful all knowing being. Thank you.
Yes, this person is right. That's bordering on metagaming I believe.
The laws of magic are absolute. The laws of physics are optional.
Yes, It is.
Lol @ 100,000/20/365 = this guy's character has read 13 books a day since he exited the womb?! Nice!
Minecraft User Name: MrCarraway
Age: 18
Character Name: Etash
Character Age: 27
Character Gender: Male
Character Bio: Etash is a humble guard for his hometown. He wanted to pursue the medical field, but because of his inability to remember things quickly, he was stuck being a guard for his home. He hates his job, but has no other choice. He has adept combat skills, but can't compare to the other guards. He has supporting friends who help him get by, and that makes him happy. He does have the advantage of being able to be a good negotiator, but even that is not looked upon in his city.
RP Ability (Advanced/Intermediate/Beginner): Intermediate
Why I want to join: I want to join a fun, engaging, and interesting server.
RP Sample: Etash was patrolling the streets on a snowy night, when he saw a robbery taking place. He runs over to the robber and tries to stop him, but the thief is too quick for him, and gets away. A nearby guard comes to help, but decides to scorn Etash for his weak physical attributes. The next day, he is called the the Hall of Leaders. When he gets there, he is stripped of his weapon and forced to sit in a chair. He learns that the leaders have decided to exile Etash because of his inability to rise to his job. They escort him outside the city with nothing. He then decides to go to another town, where he'll be accepted for being him. He sees a group of raiders preparing to attack the town, and decides not to do anything to help the people who hate him so much. One day, he learns that the attack failed, and he signs and continues his search.
Type out a paragraph about what your character would do after waking up in the hut with little memories.
Etash awakes from a very strange dream, only to find himself in a hut. he gets out of the bed and though about the water that he had drank the night before. Did the water do this? He tries to remember what he was doing, but can't remember anything besides his name. He spots a road and questions whether or not to to follow it. He decides to follow it and find out what exactly happened to him.
P.S: Pillow's don't count.
Age: 13
Character Name: Dima Kaffov
Character Age: 26
Character Gender: Male
Character Bio: Tall, Handsome, and Strong. Black Hair, Blue Eyes. Wears Goggles, A Leather Tunic with a steel pad on the shoulder, Boots, and Cloth Pants. As a Child, he was a blacksmiths apprentice, and mostly worked on iron forgery. He had ran away 2 years after his start at the smithy because the black smith was beating him. Dima went on to do Courier work and ended up getting into bad situations. He would take jobs to assassinate people, and after some time, Dima began to use that experience to the advantage. He is still a Courier as we speak.
RP Ability (Advanced/Intermediate/Beginner): Intermediate, Its been 4 years.
Why I want to join: I love role play, I have been doing it for 4 years, and it has been a great 4 years.
RP Sample: Remi walks outside to grab the mail.
Neighbor George walks outside to grab the mail aswell.
Remi waves.
George waves back, saying "Howdy neighbor!"
Remi says "How's it going, George?"
George says "Well, My wife will be gone at 6, wanna come over and watch the game?"
Remi says "Sure!", Grabbing his mail, and waving goodbye.
George nods.
Remi walks back inside his home.
Type out a paragraph about what your character would do after waking up in the (a hut, Sorry, had to correct you.) hut with little memories.
Agh... Where am I? My head... I cant remember anything...Oh god.. Its dark, I cant see. Uhhh.. My name is... I am Dima.. But... How long have I BEEN here? Wheres the door? Here it is. Damn, Its locked. Maybe I can find a key... Would this one work? Aha! Yes! It works! Freedom!Oh, Forgot... Pillows Dont count.
That's actually good. You'll have to wait for the owner's though.
You might want to fix that, a huge wall of text is kinda hard to read.
Your application is being deliberated, please be patient.
If you wouldn't mind re-applying with a format fitting more closely to what we asked for, that would be great. Check out other applicants that were accepted and try to mirror their format. Thank you for your interest.
I told you it was fine, I just didn't want new applicants getting confused. No worries bud.