Oh, and I couldn't help but think about the finale of Part 2. How Steve died and if he died. It made me think: if, by medical logic, removing an object that is impaling you in the torso kills you, how could he pulled out the sword, and then use that sword to kill Faceless?
So I was thinking, if your lung gets impaled, and you pull the object out, you probably have just a little time before dying (drowning). Okay, that may be completely wrong (since I'm no doctor), but if that so, wouldn't it mean that Steve died by drowning in his own blood?
Just creating theories.
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[16:29] "And lo, the tacos were delicious"
I seem to be getting stupider and stupider... I fell asleep while reading a PM, my laptop was unplugged... My laptop ran out of batteries, and I forgot to save the fifth chapter in the story... here's a hint, the chapter title was Bond.
I had two full fledged paragraphs of twist... i picked a hell of a time to extend the length of my chapters, because I have a lot to rewrite.
Renamed the fifth from 'bond' to 'intervention'.
I hated rewriting it, but looking back, I think losing the original was for the best. I think this came out better than it would have without the whole me-falling-asleep-and-not-saving incident.
I say no to theme song. If you mean an ambience track to match the atmosphere, then go for it. However, NO LYRICS.
I don't know about the high pitched or low pitched. Personally, I think a song that is calm, yet has a sense of foreboding is better for your series.
You thought I was going to add lyrics? No way, I'm a terrible singer. I was thinking about making it calm, high pitched, and eerie. Maybe add a small solo where it goes "BUM BU du bum!' or whatever. It's hard explaining things using only letters sometimes.
Just reread the very first chapter in the very first story... nostalgia from way back when my title was still tree puncher. Sorry i haven't been writing, i got a bit caught up in developing a theme. I shouldn't get ahead of myself, I need a proper microphone first. I'll start writing the next chapter within the hour.
Why, yes. There's a link in the first part of the first story.
That's right... *eye twitch* I only removed it from the announcement thread... However, at the alarming rate I seem to be killing everyone at, it would be good to add another character. Request accepted.
EDIT: Oh man, you can seriously tell that I made that thread within a week of my residence on the forums... People probably read it at first and thought "Newfag..."