I like them all, the second to last one the best. The first one looks weird, there are easily definable lines between the pictures on the idge of the image, and it looks bad. But other than that, I like them all!
Look at me still talking
when there's Science to do.
I've experiments to run.
While you're dying I'll be still alive.
And when you're dead I will be still alive.
In all of those, the focal point is a bit undefined, which is a bad thing if you're not intentionally trying NOT to make it stand out. Maybe it's because you used the same color scheme for the background as you did with the render, or the other way around.
But they look nice. I especially like the vector and tech background things you did there. What image editor do you use?
GIMP, as rubbish at that sounds, I get nice results, though.
What would make the focal stand out?
Actually GIMP rivals Photoshop for the most part. I'm too simple minded to learn GIMP's interface :l
Actually, I think the focal issue is only a problem in the black and white signatures since you have no other colors on the render to contrast with the background. Particularly, it's the 4th one that's more obvious. The radial gradient at the top is overlapping most of her head, so you don't really get that outline much. To fix it, I think you could try lowering the opacity of the gradient, or putting it in another spot like the bottom of the render.
I'd actually like some constructive criticism and point out the flaws of each one.
1st signature - Azusa Nakano
2nd signature - Yui Hirawasa
3rd signature (2 versions) - Mio Akiyama
(Version 1 - Full color spectrum)
(Version 2 - Palid/Desaturated Blue & Yellow)
4th and last one
I should also add that I did not put a lot of effort in that last signature, I had no more ideas and was just testing some new smudge tools.
Rate please.
Look at me still talking
when there's Science to do.
I've experiments to run.
While you're dying I'll be still alive.
And when you're dead I will be still alive.
But they look nice. I especially like the vector and tech background things you did there. What image editor do you use?
What would make the focal stand out?
Actually GIMP rivals Photoshop for the most part. I'm too simple minded to learn GIMP's interface :l
Actually, I think the focal issue is only a problem in the black and white signatures since you have no other colors on the render to contrast with the background. Particularly, it's the 4th one that's more obvious. The radial gradient at the top is overlapping most of her head, so you don't really get that outline much. To fix it, I think you could try lowering the opacity of the gradient, or putting it in another spot like the bottom of the render.