Denied.
This has happened for a few reasons.
1. You are missing multiple parts of your application. Reread the rules and continue where it cuts off on the end.
2. Your grammar is lazy. This is easy to correct.
3. You posted it. 10 times. If we do not review it right away does not mean we did not see it.
1. The bombs fell over 400 years ago so your character would have to be over 400 years old and since he seems pure human that isnt possible.
2. It's like 3 am so im not saying denied, but i am pointing some things out to help you so you can edit it then possibly get accepted as my eyes open and close like a fish.
3. If there were not any people around when he got out of the cellar then how did he have friends? you can put more detail as in maybe... some refugees or wandering caravans found him and took him in or something.
4. For the skin thing try Miners Need Cool Shoes, upload the skin, copy paste the http on the top of the screen from the skin's page onto there and then we can possibly see it.
5. How can a cellar survive a nuclear blast, keep radiation from seeping in and killing him from radiation sickness?
Out of Character
MineCraft account name: bigi555
Country of Residence and Time Zone: Bulgaria, GMT +2
Define roleplaying in your own words, do you have any past roleplaying experiences? Yes, I played in Massivecraft which is mainly RP server and I think I'm pretty experienced
What is your reason for applying to this server?I have played in another wasteland server, but after long time it looks like its down... I love wasteland servers, they give me more hardcore gameplay
Have you been banned before, if so why? I have been banned in one server because killing some dudes that were friends with the admins, not because i broke any rules.
Do you agree with our rules? Yes
Will you use the server's official texture pack? Yes
In Character
Character name: (Last names aren't required)Bigi
What is your character's race?: Human
Your character's story so far: Bigi lived with his family unlike the most of the other survivors... He lived with his parents and 2 brothers in the middle of nothing, in an underground shelter. Unfortunately he and his family were getting attacked every single week by raiders and one day they didnt made it. In the last moment, when the raiders were going to break in, Bigi's mom hid him in a small hole with a trapdoor under the ragged carpet. After the raiders took all the food and tools from the chests, Bigi went out. There was blood everywhere. His parents and brothers were dead.From then on he is forced to survive by his own.
Does or did your character have any companions or family? They were killed by raiders.
How old is your character? 21
Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features? Bigi wears ragged shirt, greenish pants and leather boots.
How does your character act? Bigi is realy serious and doesnt like strangers, but also he is not agressive and dislikes conflicts. Deeply inside he feels alone, sad and helpless.
Character's occupation: Bigi doesnt have any job, he is forced to survive
Does your character have an education? (Read or write) His parents taugh him how to write and read.
Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced: Bigi's dad taught him the basics of surviving, toolmaking and scavenging.
Does your character hate or fear anything? Bigi doesn't fear anything but hates Fuelbots,Raiders,Mutants...
Describe an example of your character in great suffering and pain (RP): Bigi is walking in a desert... A desert of ruins,decayed trees and grayish dirt... The big bleeding scar on his stomach slowers him down and making him lose blood quickly. The fight between body and soul... But after time his mind betrayes him too... He is lost in the middle of nothing. He is forced to survive alone, to fight againts mighty enemies... but he will not surrender.
Country of Residence and Time Zone:
Norway, GMT +1
Define roleplaying in your own words, do you have any past roleplaying experiences?
I've RP'ed for many years, and I define roleplaying as acting. And living throu your character, it should never get too-over-the-edge heavy. As heavy RP only works for games intentionally made for heavy RP in my opinion.
What is your reason for applying to this server?
Used to play on a fallout server, it went to dust. So I'm looking for a new post-apocalyptic server.
Have you been banned before, if so why?
Been banned for stealin from un-protected chests on servers where people could easily protect chests.
Do you agree with our rules?
No, **** your **** rules, I've got a mustache, and I dont need to obey any.
Will you use the server's official texture pack?
Love last days, and I use the soundpack ofcourse aswell.
In Character
Character name:
Kagen ''The Wrench''
What is your character's race?:
Human
Your character's story so far:
-Making a story without knowning key points or locations on a server is a tad bit hard, and I dis-like writing the ''fate'' for my character before I've even started, I'm also a big hater on all the ''my parents died / sacrificed bull'' so, I'll start out with a nice and easy backstory and then extend it later on.
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Kagen has just arrived in the new region of the grand wasteland, and with only some basic tools and his dog he ventures into the new undiscovered areas of the wasteland.
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Does or did your character have any companions or family?
Kagen does have a dog.
How old is your character?
23
Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features?
Kagen is a weathered scavenger, he wears rags of clothes that he have found in ruins and a pair of goggles on top of his head (In-case of dust storms) He's wearing a bandana and almost his entire body is covered up in rags to protect him.
How does your character act?
Kagen is a survivor, and he uses everything available to survive, he do not go as far as cannibalism. But stealing, and robbing. Even killing, if it is needed.
Character's occupation: Scavenging the old world for goods, roaming and selling what've gathered.
Does your character have an education? (Read or write)
After many years of scavenging Kagen has learnt how to read after finding countless books. He enjoys reading stories of old when he've got the time.
Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced:
Re-construction / Gunsmith
Does your character hate or fear anything?
He despites alien races.
Describe an example of your character in great suffering and pain (RP):
Kagen stretched out his arm trying to reach for his last cigarette as he sees the Radiation Sweep coming, there is no shelter nearby, no caves, nothing. All hope is lost, and he simply give into death as it comes. He moves to the nearby rubble, sits down and lights a cigarette. After only a few moments, he starts feeling the searing heat and pain. After moments, all that is left of Kagen is a scorch mark on the spot he sat.
Forever engraved to the spot, as a memory of his demise.
Provide an image of your character's skin: http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/steampunk-boy-for-skin-contest/
1. Thats why you read the lore we are what has been determined before as around the european area.
2. I guess you got the secret message.
3. just write details on who your character is and how they act
4. You dont have to have a preset death
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People say Beauty is in the eye of the Beholder. So let's cut that eye open right now, gimme a knife.
Out of Character MineCraft account name: hardcoreelement Country of Residence and Time Zone: United States Eastern Define roleplaying in your own words, do you have any past roleplaying experiences? Roleplaying is when a person pretends to be a fictional character that is most likely created through the process of imagination. My past roleplaying experience...sometimes I rub myself in vaseline inside of my kitchen and pretend that I'm a slug. What is your reason for applying to this server? I know the guy that owns it. I'd say we're about a level above acquaintance. Sup Ay Jay Have you been banned before, if so why? I've been banned from Oklahoma for murdering 10 people with a used toothpick in the year of 2003, besides that not really. Do you agree with our rules? Hell yer Will you use the server's official texture pack?
I'm way ahead of you bro. I'm using it right now.
In Character Character name: (Last names aren't required) Boziik Dalmore What is your character's race?: Human Your character's story so far:
Boziik was born in a city that goes by the name of Hokoron. Boziik was dropped at birth because of the doctor's use of "Gloves of Butter" (Made in China). Of course, Boziik's mother Feyn was very displeased, along with Krah. Boziik's father. They both murdered the doctor with the ancient spell of the feared cronks. The spell was made by the feared Cronks themselves. The mother and father were a part of this cult, they were therefore master conjurers of the ancient spell. After realizing the crime they committed they picked up Boziik from the floor and fled from the scene before anyone could see the crime they had committed. Eventually investigators were able to depict and understand who the murderers were. Assassins and hired thugs were sent after the family so that they could be brought in to justice, tortured, murdered and then thrown in to a pit of cow manure.
Feyn and Krah were able to forge a cave in the side of the mountain that was near the town so that they could purchase required food to feed themselves and their just born son Boziik. After a few months of raising their son though, they realized something was very wrong. Boziik had a horrible mental disability. He had trouble with speech. Even after a few years, when Boziik was taught new words, he would always have trouble linking them together to make understandable English sentences. years passed, Boziik was 12. He was extremely powerful and strong. This was because of the hard labor that Boziik always performed at the end of the day, ending up in him being stronger than the average human being. Sadly, his intelligence always brought him down and made people keep distant from him. One day, a disease spread out through the whole city. Everyone in the city had acquired the disease. Inside the city, the disease was given a name that anyone outside of the city never understood. The horrible disease's name was STDs. Even to this day no one that didn't live in Hokoron understood what the name meant and how it was given. Boziik never obtained the disease though, it was believed that because of his forever alone status, the disease would never have been able to reach him. Sadly, the luck that Boziik had didn't last. One day Boziik came back home to the cave after a day of hard work to see that his parents were on the floor. They died through the disease. Horrified and shocked Boziik ran as far as he could from Hokoron hoping to never see it again with the thought of his parent's death.
After a week of traveling Boziik was being pursued by government officials from all over the world. Assassin's and thugs all wanted his head on top of their fireplace. The only reason that this has happened was because of an accidental murder that Boziik had committed. A worldwide famous prostitute. That was the one that suffered the death. This was a display for Boziik though that he was not able to control his huge amount of strength at all. Only few people knew that Boziik was innocent and that he only wanted to hug the prostitute and accidentally squished her too hard making her explode in an amazing explosion of bits, pieces and organs from the once standing prostitute. One day while traveling, a man came up to Boziik. He was holding a blade in his right hand. Boziik immediately realized and started backing up. Upon examining the man with the blade, he realized the man's name was Keizaal. Keizaal was paid to finally kill Boziik and to sel his skin as clothing. Before killing Boziik though, Keizaal understood that Boziik had a strange mental problem. He also figured out that he was not able to control his own strength. A conclusion was made by Keizaal that Boziik was innocent and had not meant to murder the famous prostitute. Keizaal took him in, trained Boziik and gave him appropriate clothing for the element of stealth and silence. An amazing trainer he was too. Boziik was eventually so skilled that he was close to being a master of murder. The only setback he had was his low intelligence. One day, Keizaal was assassinated by the son of one of the men that he had killed. Boziik now sets out to kill the man that had assassinated Keizaal while trying to make new friends to overcome his everlasting loneliness.
Does or did your character have any companions or family? All of them are dead. How old is your character? 27 Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features? Boziik is extremely well built. He's 7 feet and a half. He is stronger than any other being in the world. His eyes and the rest of his upper face are never seen because of his hood. His robes cover all of his body. His clothing is all black except his dark red belt that keeps his pants from falling down and revealing his 10 inch "you know what" How does your character act? His low intelligence makes his speech a bit difficult and likes to pick fights with tiny things Character's occupation: Traveller Does your character have an education? (Read or write) Keizaal taught Boziik how to read, although he has trouble. Boziik never could write though. Too difficult. Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced:Extremely strong, stealthy and good with difficult tasks. Does your character hate or fear anything? Spiders. He HATES spiders. Describe an example of your character in great suffering and pain (RP): Almost everyone he knew died. That's a horrible suffering ;~; Provide an image of your character's skin:
Denied.
This has happened for a few reasons.
1. You are missing multiple parts of your application. Reread the rules and continue where it cuts off on the end.
2. Your grammar is lazy. This is easy to correct.
3. You posted it. 10 times. If we do not review it right away does not mean we did not see it.
Please reapply in a cleaner way.
Ask Quinn Hatrik or another accepted player. Im sure they would be willing to share.
PM HIM! DO NOT POST IT ON THE TOPIC.
We're fixing it right now.
Fallen_Comrades
TornadoAP
If there are any problems, as in my forgetting to whitelist you, or not doing so correctly, please let me know below this post.
I live in Australia and barely anyone ever goes on so I have no idea.
1. The bombs fell over 400 years ago so your character would have to be over 400 years old and since he seems pure human that isnt possible.
2. It's like 3 am so im not saying denied, but i am pointing some things out to help you so you can edit it then possibly get accepted as my eyes open and close like a fish.
3. If there were not any people around when he got out of the cellar then how did he have friends? you can put more detail as in maybe... some refugees or wandering caravans found him and took him in or something.
4. For the skin thing try Miners Need Cool Shoes, upload the skin, copy paste the http on the top of the screen from the skin's page onto there and then we can possibly see it.
5. How can a cellar survive a nuclear blast, keep radiation from seeping in and killing him from radiation sickness?
6. I know you can do better.
Holy crap your up too?!
People say Beauty is in the eye of the Beholder. So let's cut that eye open right now, gimme a knife.
Fantastic hope to see ya on the server then... as for me... ima go tah sleepz
People say Beauty is in the eye of the Beholder. So let's cut that eye open right now, gimme a knife.
Accepted. I have changed my mind.
You sir, are the big silly poop head. Not I.
How dare you make such accusations!
It wasn't me! Ummm... King wrote that book!
P.S. I don't know if you've already had someone ask you, but mcMMO hasn't been working.
MineCraft account name:
ximeeen
Country of Residence and Time Zone:
Norway, GMT +1
Define roleplaying in your own words, do you have any past roleplaying experiences?
I've RP'ed for many years, and I define roleplaying as acting. And living throu your character, it should never get too-over-the-edge heavy. As heavy RP only works for games intentionally made for heavy RP in my opinion.
What is your reason for applying to this server?
Used to play on a fallout server, it went to dust. So I'm looking for a new post-apocalyptic server.
Have you been banned before, if so why?
Been banned for stealin from un-protected chests on servers where people could easily protect chests.
Do you agree with our rules?
No, **** your **** rules, I've got a mustache, and I dont need to obey any.
Will you use the server's official texture pack?
Love last days, and I use the soundpack ofcourse aswell.
In Character
Character name:
Kagen ''The Wrench''
What is your character's race?:
Human
Your character's story so far:
-Making a story without knowning key points or locations on a server is a tad bit hard, and I dis-like writing the ''fate'' for my character before I've even started, I'm also a big hater on all the ''my parents died / sacrificed bull'' so, I'll start out with a nice and easy backstory and then extend it later on.
---------------------------------------------------------------
Kagen has just arrived in the new region of the grand wasteland, and with only some basic tools and his dog he ventures into the new undiscovered areas of the wasteland.
---------------------------------------------------------------
Does or did your character have any companions or family?
Kagen does have a dog.
How old is your character?
23
Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features?
Kagen is a weathered scavenger, he wears rags of clothes that he have found in ruins and a pair of goggles on top of his head (In-case of dust storms) He's wearing a bandana and almost his entire body is covered up in rags to protect him.
How does your character act?
Kagen is a survivor, and he uses everything available to survive, he do not go as far as cannibalism. But stealing, and robbing. Even killing, if it is needed.
Character's occupation:
Scavenging the old world for goods, roaming and selling what've gathered.
Does your character have an education? (Read or write)
After many years of scavenging Kagen has learnt how to read after finding countless books. He enjoys reading stories of old when he've got the time.
Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced:
Re-construction / Gunsmith
Does your character hate or fear anything?
He despites alien races.
Describe an example of your character in great suffering and pain (RP):
Kagen stretched out his arm trying to reach for his last cigarette as he sees the Radiation Sweep coming, there is no shelter nearby, no caves, nothing. All hope is lost, and he simply give into death as it comes. He moves to the nearby rubble, sits down and lights a cigarette. After only a few moments, he starts feeling the searing heat and pain. After moments, all that is left of Kagen is a scorch mark on the spot he sat.
Forever engraved to the spot, as a memory of his demise.
Provide an image of your character's skin:
http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/steampunk-boy-for-skin-contest/
You NEED to have a history, you know that right?
1. Thats why you read the lore we are what has been determined before as around the european area.
2. I guess you got the secret message.
3. just write details on who your character is and how they act
4. You dont have to have a preset death
People say Beauty is in the eye of the Beholder. So let's cut that eye open right now, gimme a knife.
MineCraft account name: hardcoreelement
Country of Residence and Time Zone: United States Eastern
Define roleplaying in your own words, do you have any past roleplaying experiences? Roleplaying is when a person pretends to be a fictional character that is most likely created through the process of imagination. My past roleplaying experience...sometimes I rub myself in vaseline inside of my kitchen and pretend that I'm a slug.
What is your reason for applying to this server? I know the guy that owns it. I'd say we're about a level above acquaintance. Sup Ay Jay
Have you been banned before, if so why? I've been banned from Oklahoma for murdering 10 people with a used toothpick in the year of 2003, besides that not really.
Do you agree with our rules? Hell yer
Will you use the server's official texture pack?
I'm way ahead of you bro. I'm using it right now.
In Character
Character name: (Last names aren't required) Boziik Dalmore
What is your character's race?: Human
Your character's story so far:
Boziik was born in a city that goes by the name of Hokoron. Boziik was dropped at birth because of the doctor's use of "Gloves of Butter" (Made in China). Of course, Boziik's mother Feyn was very displeased, along with Krah. Boziik's father. They both murdered the doctor with the ancient spell of the feared cronks. The spell was made by the feared Cronks themselves. The mother and father were a part of this cult, they were therefore master conjurers of the ancient spell. After realizing the crime they committed they picked up Boziik from the floor and fled from the scene before anyone could see the crime they had committed. Eventually investigators were able to depict and understand who the murderers were. Assassins and hired thugs were sent after the family so that they could be brought in to justice, tortured, murdered and then thrown in to a pit of cow manure.
Feyn and Krah were able to forge a cave in the side of the mountain that was near the town so that they could purchase required food to feed themselves and their just born son Boziik. After a few months of raising their son though, they realized something was very wrong. Boziik had a horrible mental disability. He had trouble with speech. Even after a few years, when Boziik was taught new words, he would always have trouble linking them together to make understandable English sentences. years passed, Boziik was 12. He was extremely powerful and strong. This was because of the hard labor that Boziik always performed at the end of the day, ending up in him being stronger than the average human being. Sadly, his intelligence always brought him down and made people keep distant from him. One day, a disease spread out through the whole city. Everyone in the city had acquired the disease. Inside the city, the disease was given a name that anyone outside of the city never understood. The horrible disease's name was STDs. Even to this day no one that didn't live in Hokoron understood what the name meant and how it was given. Boziik never obtained the disease though, it was believed that because of his forever alone status, the disease would never have been able to reach him. Sadly, the luck that Boziik had didn't last. One day Boziik came back home to the cave after a day of hard work to see that his parents were on the floor. They died through the disease. Horrified and shocked Boziik ran as far as he could from Hokoron hoping to never see it again with the thought of his parent's death.
After a week of traveling Boziik was being pursued by government officials from all over the world. Assassin's and thugs all wanted his head on top of their fireplace. The only reason that this has happened was because of an accidental murder that Boziik had committed. A worldwide famous prostitute. That was the one that suffered the death. This was a display for Boziik though that he was not able to control his huge amount of strength at all. Only few people knew that Boziik was innocent and that he only wanted to hug the prostitute and accidentally squished her too hard making her explode in an amazing explosion of bits, pieces and organs from the once standing prostitute. One day while traveling, a man came up to Boziik. He was holding a blade in his right hand. Boziik immediately realized and started backing up. Upon examining the man with the blade, he realized the man's name was Keizaal. Keizaal was paid to finally kill Boziik and to sel his skin as clothing. Before killing Boziik though, Keizaal understood that Boziik had a strange mental problem. He also figured out that he was not able to control his own strength. A conclusion was made by Keizaal that Boziik was innocent and had not meant to murder the famous prostitute. Keizaal took him in, trained Boziik and gave him appropriate clothing for the element of stealth and silence. An amazing trainer he was too. Boziik was eventually so skilled that he was close to being a master of murder. The only setback he had was his low intelligence. One day, Keizaal was assassinated by the son of one of the men that he had killed. Boziik now sets out to kill the man that had assassinated Keizaal while trying to make new friends to overcome his everlasting loneliness.
Does or did your character have any companions or family? All of them are dead.
How old is your character? 27
Describe what your character looks like, any distinctive physical features? Boziik is extremely well built. He's 7 feet and a half. He is stronger than any other being in the world. His eyes and the rest of his upper face are never seen because of his hood. His robes cover all of his body. His clothing is all black except his dark red belt that keeps his pants from falling down and revealing his 10 inch "you know what"
How does your character act? His low intelligence makes his speech a bit difficult and likes to pick fights with tiny things
Character's occupation: Traveller
Does your character have an education? (Read or write) Keizaal taught Boziik how to read, although he has trouble. Boziik never could write though. Too difficult.
Any special skills that your character has, nothing unbalanced:Extremely strong, stealthy and good with difficult tasks.
Does your character hate or fear anything? Spiders. He HATES spiders.
Describe an example of your character in great suffering and pain (RP): Almost everyone he knew died. That's a horrible suffering ;~;
Provide an image of your character's skin:
**** yo **** I've got a mustache