Previous Role-Playing Experience: I do a TON of forum role-playing, and have been role-playing for 2 years in all sorts of games and what not
Previous Minecraft Experience: I've played Minecraft for about a year, and been to more servers than I can count. Of course my favorite type of server is role-playing, so far I haven't found a good one, this may be it.
What you can bring to Aswein: A whole new character with fun traits, and I can always help with any redstone projects/ big thinngs that take forever.
Why you wish to join: I was always intrigued by history, and this looks like a nice mix of it. I've also just been looking for a good server, with good people. I think it will have some great stories to tell, I'd love to just help make this server even better than what it already is.
ICC- ICN: Adam Rithe
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Appearance: Dark brown hair, about 6 feet tall, has redish eyes (very faiint, and hard to tell) (If you can't see it, I'll fix that.)
Personality: Always kept to himself, didn't trust most people. He also likes objects, lots and lots of objects. Too bad he doesn't have money.
Background: Adam was never in a rich family. He had two groups of parents, each died, so he went to the next, all three of them were poor, with almost nothing to their name. Adam couldn't live like this, he dreamt of a land, filled with people, riches, and gold. Now all he has to do is achieve this wealth and become the ruler of this magical place. At the age of 15 he ran away he was going to find this place, wherever it might be. He searched and searched.
Finally at the age of 21, he found it, Aswein. Where could he go? Egypt? Greece? Maybe Rome? The world was his oyster. He decided upon the great land of Greece, worshiped Hermes, the Greek god of thievery for good luck, and began his journey.
(There. Finished.)
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My old signature was stupid and outdated. It's gone now.
Ok, I'll fix it when I have time, but the parents thing was because they were adopted parents, I should've mentioned that... But anyway, thanks for looking at it, I'll add to it later
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My old signature was stupid and outdated. It's gone now.
Previous Role-Playing Experience: I do a TON of forum role-playing, and have been role-playing for 2 years in all sorts of games and what not
Previous Minecraft Experience: I've played Minecraft for about a year, and been to more servers than I can count. Of course my favorite type of server is role-playing, so far I haven't found a good one, this may be it.
What you can bring to Aswein: A whole new character with fun traits, and I can always help with any redstone projects/ big thinngs that take forever.
Why you wish to join: I was always intrigued by history, and this looks like a nice mix of it. I've also just been looking for a good server, with good people. I think it will have some great stories to tell, I'd love to just help make this server even better than what it already is.
ICC- ICN: Adam Rithe
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Appearance: Dark brown hair, about 6 feet tall, has redish eyes (very faint, and hard to tell) (If you can't see it, I'll fix that.)
Personality: Adam didn't like most people, honestly, he hated the most of them. There was a select few that he liked. The rich, the royalty, and the fools. He enjoyed the many items that these people had, and had his ways of getting them. He couldn't buy such things because he was poor, but he could take them. This is when the fools came in. Adam was nice to the poor, but he despised the middle class. Weren't pitiful enough to be poor, and weren't foolish enough to be rich, why do they exist?
Background: As a child Adam had three family's total, only one were his actual family. The other two were adopted family's. Why does he have three you ask? His first parents were died of old age (They had him late), The second were killed by a group of thieves. Good, he hated them. The fourth were nice people, but he didn't like them all too much either. It wasn't his life, he wanted riches beyond his wildest dreams, he wanted the ability to want and have things. He couldn't do that in middles class, and he can't do it without money. The only way he could get that money was by taking it, he remembered the thieves that killed his second family.
That's when he decided, he was going to travel to the land of Greece, to Aswein. How would I get there? He first tried asking his parents. Of course they turned this down. So, at the age of 19, he began to search for these great lands. A "Friend" Gave him a little tip. "I heard there was a boat, taking shipments to Greece, go to Layaway port, tomorrow at 3:45. Don't miss it" This was his chance. This was how he'd get to Aswein. The next day he traveled to Layaway port. He found an empty box, got inside, and was off. Off to Greece.
The boat ride was a long way to Aswein, he never knew where exactly it was. All he knew was he had what he needed to get wealthy. The clothes on his back, and the knife in his pocket. "Watch out Greece. I'm coming."
((Is that better?))
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My old signature was stupid and outdated. It's gone now.
IGN: (The name you have over your head) SpitFir3Tornado
Age: (Be honest) 12
Previous Role-Playing Experience: Fallout: Rocketeers, Fallout: War Never Changes, Skyrim: The Age of War just to name a few.
Previous Minecraft Experience: I've played countless servers, hosted 3-5 myself and moderated/administrated on 5-10.
What you can bring to Aswein: I'm a good roleplayer, especially passive, and tend to have a good attitude when facing roleplay situations. I have a lot of expierence, and can bring lots of knowledge to the table.
Why you wish to join: I'm looking for something more RP-oriented than Skyrim: The Age of War is, and knowing you thought this would be good, after I heard about it from a few applicants.
ICC-
ICN: (You character's name) Cypranus Delvian
Age: (Your character's age) 32
Gender: Male
Appearance: 6', around 170 lbs, mostly muscle. Short brown hair, scar over left eye, roman soldier uniform.
Personality:Generous, kind and caring. Always looking to make a new friend. Talkative and trustworthy.
Background: (4-6 good sentences or else you redo it)
Cypranus was born to a noble family, his father a Centurion. He grew up in the big city in a large manor with his mother, 2 brothers and 1 sister, his father mostly away fighting wars. When his father was home, he taught him to use swords and shields. When he father was away, he and his brothers would have sparring matches in the courtyard to help improve their skills. Cypranus knew he was to be a mighty warrior like his father. His childhood looked like this, until he came of age and was recruited into the army. HE was a simply legionary and fought in many wars, with the skills of his father behind his back and his father's reputation he rapidly rose through ranks and became a great warrior like his father. There was a shortage of blacksmithes in the army, and he was selected to become and Optio fabricae (I hope somebody here knows what that is) and was taught to forge weapons and armour from raw materials. He quickly caught on and learned the skill. This is where Cypranus' story leaves off, for him to be further expanded on the server.
Previous Role-Playing Experience: I do a TON of forum role-playing, and have been role-playing for 2 years in all sorts of games and what not
Previous Minecraft Experience: I've played Minecraft for about a year, and been to more servers than I can count. Of course my favorite type of server is role-playing, so far I haven't found a good one, this may be it.
What you can bring to Aswein: A whole new character with fun traits, and I can always help with any redstone projects/ big thinngs that take forever.
Why you wish to join: I was always intrigued by history, and this looks like a nice mix of it. I've also just been looking for a good server, with good people. I think it will have some great stories to tell, I'd love to just help make this server even better than what it already is.
ICC- ICN: Adam Rithe
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Appearance: Dark brown hair, about 6 feet tall, has redish eyes (very faint, and hard to tell) (If you can't see it, I'll fix that.)
Personality: Adam didn't like most people, honestly, he hated the most of them. There was a select few that he liked. The rich, the royalty, and the fools. He enjoyed the many items that these people had, and had his ways of getting them. He couldn't buy such things because he was poor, but he could take them. This is when the fools came in. Adam was nice to the poor, but he despised the middle class. Weren't pitiful enough to be poor, and weren't foolish enough to be rich, why do they exist?
Background: As a child Adam had three family's total, only one were his actual family. The other two were adopted family's. Why does he have three you ask? His first parents were died of old age (They had him late), The second were killed by a group of thieves. Good, he hated them. The fourth were nice people, but he didn't like them all too much either. It wasn't his life, he wanted riches beyond his wildest dreams, he wanted the ability to want and have things. He couldn't do that in middles class, and he can't do it without money. The only way he could get that money was by taking it, he remembered the thieves that killed his second family.
That's when he decided, he was going to travel to the land of Greece, to Aswein. How would I get there? He first tried asking his parents. Of course they turned this down. So, at the age of 19, he began to search for these great lands. A "Friend" Gave him a little tip. "I heard there was a boat, taking shipments to Greece, go to Layaway port, tomorrow at 3:45. Don't miss it" This was his chance. This was how he'd get to Aswein. The next day he traveled to Layaway port. He found an empty box, got inside, and was off. Off to Greece.
The boat ride was a long way to Aswein, he never knew where exactly it was. All he knew was he had what he needed to get wealthy. The clothes on his back, and the knife in his pocket. "Watch out Greece. I'm coming."
((Is that better?))
Hi, I'm panda and I think your app is good enough, I love your character, we needed another villain character.
PANDA APPROVES
IGN: (The name you have over your head) SpitFir3Tornado
Age: (Be honest) 12
Previous Role-Playing Experience: Fallout: Rocketeers, Fallout: War Never Changes, Skyrim: The Age of War just to name a few.
Previous Minecraft Experience: I've played countless servers, hosted 3-5 myself and moderated/administrated on 5-10.
What you can bring to Aswein: I'm a good roleplayer, especially passive, and tend to have a good attitude when facing roleplay situations. I have a lot of expierence, and can bring lots of knowledge to the table.
Why you wish to join: I'm looking for something more RP-oriented than Skyrim: The Age of War is, and knowing you thought this would be good, after I heard about it from a few applicants.
ICC-
ICN: (You character's name) Cypranus Delvian
Age: (Your character's age) 32
Gender: Male
Appearance: 6', around 170 lbs, mostly muscle. Short brown hair, scar over left eye, roman soldier uniform.
Personality:Generous, kind and caring. Always looking to make a new friend. Talkative and trustworthy.
Background: (4-6 good sentences or else you redo it)
Cypranus was born to a noble family, his father a Centurion. He grew up in the big city in a large manor with his mother, 2 brothers and 1 sister, his father mostly away fighting wars. When his father was home, he taught him to use swords and shields. When he father was away, he and his brothers would have sparring matches in the courtyard to help improve their skills. Cypranus knew he was to be a mighty warrior like his father. His childhood looked like this, until he came of age and was recruited into the army. HE was a simply legionary and fought in many wars, with the skills of his father behind his back and his father's reputation he rapidly rose through ranks and became a great warrior like his father. There was a shortage of blacksmithes in the army, and he was selected to become and Optio fabricae (I hope somebody here knows what that is) and was taught to forge weapons and armour from raw materials. He quickly caught on and learned the skill. This is where Cypranus' story leaves off, for him to be further expanded on the server.
P.S. Hai Trompe
You need to add A lot more to apperance, and a ton more to personality try adding more detail maybe put your character in some situations and see how he would react to it in his personality?
Also add a bit more to your back round and past.
PANDA NOT APPROVED
OOC-
IGN: Techno7980
Age: 14
Previous Role-Playing Experience: Normally farmer or trader
Previous Minecraft Experience: Played a bit, however i know a lot from my friends
What you can bring to Aswein: I'm mature, and i dislike griefing/rule breaking. You won't be disappointed in my actions.
Why you wish to join: I've been looking for a good RP server
ICC-
ICN: Audres Barbero
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Appearance: Dark brown hair and eyes, tan skin, moderate height
Personality: Friendly, not very talkative, persistent
Background: My village was lost by a fire started by lightning. Many died including my family. However, I survived and I wander and wander. I hope in this place I look at, may just be the redemption of my damaged life.
OOC-
IGN: Techno7980
Age: 14
Previous Role-Playing Experience: Normally farmer or trader
Previous Minecraft Experience: Played a bit, however i know a lot from my friends
What you can bring to Aswein: I'm mature, and i dislike griefing/rule breaking. You won't be disappointed in my actions.
Why you wish to join: I've been looking for a good RP server
ICC-
ICN: Audres Barbero
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Appearance: Dark brown hair and eyes, tan skin, moderate height
Personality: Friendly, not very talkative, persistent
Background: My village was lost by a fire started by lightning. Many died including my family. However, I survived and I wander and wander. I hope in this place I look at, may just be the redemption of my damaged life.
This is very...
Just no.. very little effort was put into this. o-o
( doesn't even deserve panda does not approve )
the application at the bottom only specifies "a good 4-6 sentences" for the background, so many applicants end up trying several times because their appearance and personality are not detailed enough. so im suggesting that you also put a length requirement on those parts also, to help people out.
also, 4-6 sentences can be really short using simple sentences, so perhaps a word count requirement such as 100 or 150 words for the character background.
and a reminder to be creative but realistic simultaneously.
perhaps then we can get more good apps on the first try =)
but you can be a Greek soldier, priest, or worker =D
as wallace said the town is pretty legit lookin and RP functional
IGN: TheMagicBurro
Age: 13
Previous Role-Playing Experience: I do a TON of forum role-playing, and have been role-playing for 2 years in all sorts of games and what not
Previous Minecraft Experience: I've played Minecraft for about a year, and been to more servers than I can count. Of course my favorite type of server is role-playing, so far I haven't found a good one, this may be it.
What you can bring to Aswein: A whole new character with fun traits, and I can always help with any redstone projects/ big thinngs that take forever.
Why you wish to join: I was always intrigued by history, and this looks like a nice mix of it. I've also just been looking for a good server, with good people. I think it will have some great stories to tell, I'd love to just help make this server even better than what it already is.
ICC-
ICN: Adam Rithe
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Appearance: Dark brown hair, about 6 feet tall, has redish eyes (very faiint, and hard to tell) (If you can't see it, I'll fix that.)
Personality: Always kept to himself, didn't trust most people. He also likes objects, lots and lots of objects. Too bad he doesn't have money.
Background: Adam was never in a rich family. He had two groups of parents, each died, so he went to the next, all three of them were poor, with almost nothing to their name. Adam couldn't live like this, he dreamt of a land, filled with people, riches, and gold. Now all he has to do is achieve this wealth and become the ruler of this magical place. At the age of 15 he ran away he was going to find this place, wherever it might be. He searched and searched.
Finally at the age of 21, he found it, Aswein. Where could he go? Egypt? Greece? Maybe Rome? The world was his oyster. He decided upon the great land of Greece, worshiped Hermes, the Greek god of thievery for good luck, and began his journey.
(There. Finished.)
forums.aswein.co.cc
Make sure you post it in the application section.
IGN: TheMagicBurro
Age: 13
Previous Role-Playing Experience: I do a TON of forum role-playing, and have been role-playing for 2 years in all sorts of games and what not
Previous Minecraft Experience: I've played Minecraft for about a year, and been to more servers than I can count. Of course my favorite type of server is role-playing, so far I haven't found a good one, this may be it.
What you can bring to Aswein: A whole new character with fun traits, and I can always help with any redstone projects/ big thinngs that take forever.
Why you wish to join: I was always intrigued by history, and this looks like a nice mix of it. I've also just been looking for a good server, with good people. I think it will have some great stories to tell, I'd love to just help make this server even better than what it already is.
ICC-
ICN: Adam Rithe
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Appearance: Dark brown hair, about 6 feet tall, has redish eyes (very faint, and hard to tell) (If you can't see it, I'll fix that.)
Personality: Adam didn't like most people, honestly, he hated the most of them. There was a select few that he liked. The rich, the royalty, and the fools. He enjoyed the many items that these people had, and had his ways of getting them. He couldn't buy such things because he was poor, but he could take them. This is when the fools came in. Adam was nice to the poor, but he despised the middle class. Weren't pitiful enough to be poor, and weren't foolish enough to be rich, why do they exist?
Background: As a child Adam had three family's total, only one were his actual family. The other two were adopted family's. Why does he have three you ask? His first parents were died of old age (They had him late), The second were killed by a group of thieves. Good, he hated them. The fourth were nice people, but he didn't like them all too much either. It wasn't his life, he wanted riches beyond his wildest dreams, he wanted the ability to want and have things. He couldn't do that in middles class, and he can't do it without money. The only way he could get that money was by taking it, he remembered the thieves that killed his second family.
That's when he decided, he was going to travel to the land of Greece, to Aswein. How would I get there? He first tried asking his parents. Of course they turned this down. So, at the age of 19, he began to search for these great lands. A "Friend" Gave him a little tip. "I heard there was a boat, taking shipments to Greece, go to Layaway port, tomorrow at 3:45. Don't miss it" This was his chance. This was how he'd get to Aswein. The next day he traveled to Layaway port. He found an empty box, got inside, and was off. Off to Greece.
The boat ride was a long way to Aswein, he never knew where exactly it was. All he knew was he had what he needed to get wealthy. The clothes on his back, and the knife in his pocket. "Watch out Greece. I'm coming."
((Is that better?))
IGN: (The name you have over your head) SpitFir3Tornado
Age: (Be honest) 12
Previous Role-Playing Experience: Fallout: Rocketeers, Fallout: War Never Changes, Skyrim: The Age of War just to name a few.
Previous Minecraft Experience: I've played countless servers, hosted 3-5 myself and moderated/administrated on 5-10.
What you can bring to Aswein: I'm a good roleplayer, especially passive, and tend to have a good attitude when facing roleplay situations. I have a lot of expierence, and can bring lots of knowledge to the table.
Why you wish to join: I'm looking for something more RP-oriented than Skyrim: The Age of War is, and knowing you thought this would be good, after I heard about it from a few applicants.
ICC-
ICN: (You character's name) Cypranus Delvian
Age: (Your character's age) 32
Gender: Male
Appearance: 6', around 170 lbs, mostly muscle. Short brown hair, scar over left eye, roman soldier uniform.
Personality:Generous, kind and caring. Always looking to make a new friend. Talkative and trustworthy.
Background: (4-6 good sentences or else you redo it)
Cypranus was born to a noble family, his father a Centurion. He grew up in the big city in a large manor with his mother, 2 brothers and 1 sister, his father mostly away fighting wars. When his father was home, he taught him to use swords and shields. When he father was away, he and his brothers would have sparring matches in the courtyard to help improve their skills. Cypranus knew he was to be a mighty warrior like his father. His childhood looked like this, until he came of age and was recruited into the army. HE was a simply legionary and fought in many wars, with the skills of his father behind his back and his father's reputation he rapidly rose through ranks and became a great warrior like his father. There was a shortage of blacksmithes in the army, and he was selected to become and Optio fabricae (I hope somebody here knows what that is) and was taught to forge weapons and armour from raw materials. He quickly caught on and learned the skill. This is where Cypranus' story leaves off, for him to be further expanded on the server.
P.S. Hai Trompe
http://www.twitter.com/PoopCoolbro/
Hi, I'm panda and I think your app is good enough, I love your character, we needed another villain character.
PANDA APPROVES
You need to add A lot more to apperance, and a ton more to personality try adding more detail maybe put your character in some situations and see how he would react to it in his personality?
Also add a bit more to your back round and past.
PANDA NOT APPROVED
IGN: Techno7980
Age: 14
Previous Role-Playing Experience: Normally farmer or trader
Previous Minecraft Experience: Played a bit, however i know a lot from my friends
What you can bring to Aswein: I'm mature, and i dislike griefing/rule breaking. You won't be disappointed in my actions.
Why you wish to join: I've been looking for a good RP server
ICC-
ICN: Audres Barbero
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Appearance: Dark brown hair and eyes, tan skin, moderate height
Personality: Friendly, not very talkative, persistent
Background: My village was lost by a fire started by lightning. Many died including my family. However, I survived and I wander and wander. I hope in this place I look at, may just be the redemption of my damaged life.
This is very...
Just no.. very little effort was put into this. o-o
( doesn't even deserve panda does not approve )
the application at the bottom only specifies "a good 4-6 sentences" for the background, so many applicants end up trying several times because their appearance and personality are not detailed enough. so im suggesting that you also put a length requirement on those parts also, to help people out.
also, 4-6 sentences can be really short using simple sentences, so perhaps a word count requirement such as 100 or 150 words for the character background.
and a reminder to be creative but realistic simultaneously.
perhaps then we can get more good apps on the first try =)