IGN: IamaJayhawk
Age: 16
Role-Play Exp.: The Plague, kingdoms of Aswein, Land of Aeonis
Why Us: I saw your post and read through it. Looks pretty fun.
Time You Can Dedicate: Monday/Wednesday/Thursday/Saturday afternoon and Sunday
I do serve in the United States Air Force Auxiliary so please do not expect me to be able to commit much time. I will be on as much as possible though.
IC
Name: Matt
Gender: Male
Age: 20
Appearance: Rough face features and built body. Obvious sign of wear from many years
spent as a nomad.
Fears: Becoming somehow infected with some deadly disease that turns him into a mutant.
Personality: Mysterious past, the strong silent type.
Occupation: Soldier
Skills: Mining, technology, and marksmanship
Nickname (Optional): Jay *Rarely used*
RP Example (Add Dialogue):
“So, they say you were in the military before this ****?”
“Yes sir, United States Air Force. Trained with the best.”
“Is that so? You see son, out here, we don’t have any plane, we have guns”
“When I said I was trained with the best sir, I mean special forces. I’ve trained with guns.”
“Ha, Air Force pilots with guns, I gotta see this”
*Sergeant Hands over a rifle*
*Matt pick up the rifle and shoot the target 1000 yards away*
*Matt Hits the center of the target*
“**** son”
*Matt Walks off*
“Hm, some Air Force pilot has a better shot than the Infantry.”
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs: I have always had the strange love in death. Since I was 15 I’ve been in the military. Worked my butt off and was recruited into special forces. Although I’m not allowed to say much about my training, its superior to any of those Infantry or “Marines”, but none of that matters anymore. The worlds in a downward spiral to the end and I’m stuck here in the **** of it trying to get out. I know I cant change what’s going on but I can survive, and I can help keep my buddys alive. I’ve been through **** before and I don’t expect to ever get out of it. I’m a soldier, I fight where I'm told and I win where I fight.
I heard of this place called the brotherhood of steel. I went to check it out and looks like the best place for me. Maybe I can even teach them how to build an airplane. Hm, not holding my breath though.
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Hopefully this will work, thanks for reading
Well considering it looks like he didn't have to check wind, bullet drop or other factors and their was no scope him hitting the center of the target, or even hitting the target at all from 1000 yards a way is highly improbable.
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IGN: IamaJayhawk
Age: 16
Role-Play Exp.: The Plague, kingdoms of Aswein, Land of Aeonis
Why Us: I saw your post and read through it. Looks pretty fun.
Time You Can Dedicate: Monday/Wednesday/Thursday/Saturday afternoon and Sunday
I do serve in the United States Air Force Auxiliary so please do not expect me to be able to commit much time. I will be on as much as possible though.
IC
Name: Matt
Gender: Male
Age: 20
Appearance: Rough face features and built body. Obvious sign of wear from many years
spent as a nomad.
Fears: Becoming somehow infected with some deadly disease that turns him into a mutant.
Personality: Mysterious past, the strong silent type.
Occupation: Soldier
Skills: Mining, technology, and marksmanship
Nickname (Optional): Jay *Rarely used*
RP Example (Add Dialogue):
“So, they say you were in the military before this ****?”
“Yes sir, United States Air Force. Trained with the best.”
“Is that so? You see son, out here, we don’t have any plane, we have guns”
“When I said I was trained with the best sir, I mean special forces. I’ve trained with guns.”
“Ha, Air Force pilots with guns, I gotta see this”
*Sergeant Hands over a rifle*
*Matt pick up the rifle and shoot the target 1000 yards away*
*Matt Hits the center of the target*
“**** son”
*Matt Walks off*
“Hm, some Air Force pilot has a better shot than the Infantry.”
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs: I have always had the strange love in death. Since I was 15 I’ve been in the military. Worked my butt off and was recruited into special forces. Although I’m not allowed to say much about my training, its superior to any of those Infantry or “Marines”, but none of that matters anymore. The worlds in a downward spiral to the end and I’m stuck here in the **** of it trying to get out. I know I cant change what’s going on but I can survive, and I can help keep my buddys alive. I’ve been through **** before and I don’t expect to ever get out of it. I’m a soldier, I fight where I'm told and I win where I fight.
I heard of this place called the brotherhood of steel. I went to check it out and looks like the best place for me. Maybe I can even teach them how to build an airplane. Hm, not holding my breath though.
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Hopefully this will work, thanks for reading
I am not a white-lister. This has one or two spelling errors you could fix before a white-lister does look at it for you. The backstory doesn't make too much sense to me. I would read up on the Fallout timeline and check your dates. Also, including some dates in your backstory would help to illustrate your characters age and experience.
EDIT: Oh and the BoS, isn't a place. It's a group.
Note: The rest of this post isn't directed at you.
For those of you who did not seem to see it in the original post:
Grammar: Grammar is a big factor into getting accepted. We like that you have a little dictionary in your head to get you out of a spelling pickle. Bad grammar is easy to avoid if you have the correct tools. Which is given to you on this forum while you're posting. It's important that you use the spell-check, and have a vision of what you're trying to say. Give us an image with your words. They are a powerful tool in life and getting accepted. Ol' Pete didn't know grammar from his mother's cactus collection, and he got stabbed by that cactus multiple times.
RP Example: Roleplay Examples are really taken into account. Why? Because we care about who we're taking into the server and how you would roleplay on the server. So we almost always ask for a conversation, or a scenario where you have to make us in-vision what you mean. Words and punctuation are powerful on this server, and when you're lacking the tools to succeed, you'll end up leaving, and not having a good time. Good ol' Pete's application is lacking and/or not showing his ability to roleplay at a steady rate, and that's what usually get's you immediately denied.
Backstory: Your backstory is necessary. It's another key to the lock, which in this case is the way to get accepted/whitelisted. Use this to your advantage, and read the title which says "1-2 LONG Paragraphs". This means we (the staff and whitelisters) are putting our trust onto you so that you can read that simple thing. Use your words wisely. We don't want a backstory, nor do we want something as short as what good ol' Pete made, but we are looking for something that explains your childhood to how you got to the Mojave in a 1-2 paragraph format.
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IGN:twister720
Age:13
Role-Play Exp.:I played on many minecraft role-plays. I try not to break character
Why Us:I love fallout and minecraft.
Time You Can Dedicate:5 days a weed
IC
Name:Jacoby Bowden
Age:17
Appearance:skinny:brown hair: no facial hair.
Fears:Hates spiders and being alone at night
Personality:Nice if you are nice to him. Hurt him he hurts you twice as hard.
Occupation:Bartender
Skills:Can fill a drink perfectly
Nickname (Optional):Ghost
RP Example (Add Dialogue):"Hey, where did you grow up ,Ghost," man asked
"where I grew up don't matter no more," Ghost yelled
[u][i]Backstory (1-2 [b]LONG paragraphs):
Jacoby grew up in a small town. His Mother was a bartender.His father was a mercenary for the Brotherhood. When Jacoby was 7 he knew his guns like the back of his hand. His father taught everything he needed to know about them.His mother never liked it, but she had no say in it. When Jacoby was 8, his father got shot and died. Jacoby started to misbehave. He broke into innocent civilians houses and stole their goods. His friends called him "Ghost" because he could go anywhere without getting caught. When he was 12, his mother got severe radiation poisoning and she couldn't work. Ghost got pissed and started stealing more stuff. One time, he tried to steal from the local bar and got caught.
To make up for it, Ghost had to mop the floors and clean the dishes for 2 years. After his sentence was finished, he was offered a full time bartender. He did that until he was 17. His mother died when he was 17. Ghost was full of emotions and didn't show up for work for 2 weeks. Ghost's boss fired him for it. Of course, Ghost wasn't too happy about it. He murdered the bar owner, then the town officials were after him. Ghost pulled out his 9mm and shot 3 of them. After this, he booked it to the town gates. A guard started to close the gate, but Ghost shot him before he could. He sprinted out the gates and shut it behind him. Finally, his adventure begins.
Alecwillis00, NEED WHITELISTIN, dude I already put my profile. So yeah, can you put me back in? Or is this gonna get ridiculous?
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I am Corporal Corpse! NCR, line up you frackin' worms! Make that Bear proud of you, sloppy uniform?! Scrub the toilets, Private Dip! Damn recruits...
If we are asking canon questions, in this server Freeside was bombed by the Enclave, no? If so then how since the last remnants of the Enclave were killed off ~2244. (that is when Fallout 3 takes place right?)
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If we are asking canon questions, in this server Freeside was bombed by the Enclave, no? If so then how since the last remnants of the Enclave were killed off ~2244. (that is when Fallout 3 takes place right?)
Then why were there Remnants in Vegas? It's called having a child, Arcade could've done it.
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You look like you cast dark magic and eviscerate babies.
That could work, but weren't there like six people in the Bunker? The Enclave faction would have to be small. :/
They got REALLY busy afterwards :smile.gif:
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*whispers* Hey, can I join you? Here I even have a troll whistle *blows whistle* "Faggot!" *blows again* "FAAGGOTT!" See thats my troll whistle.
Age: 16
Role-Play Exp.: The Plague, kingdoms of Aswein, Land of Aeonis
Why Us: I saw your post and read through it. Looks pretty fun.
Time You Can Dedicate: Monday/Wednesday/Thursday/Saturday afternoon and Sunday
I do serve in the United States Air Force Auxiliary so please do not expect me to be able to commit much time. I will be on as much as possible though.
IC
Name: Matt
Gender: Male
Age: 20
Appearance: Rough face features and built body. Obvious sign of wear from many years
spent as a nomad.
Fears: Becoming somehow infected with some deadly disease that turns him into a mutant.
Personality: Mysterious past, the strong silent type.
Occupation: Soldier
Skills: Mining, technology, and marksmanship
Nickname (Optional): Jay *Rarely used*
RP Example (Add Dialogue):
“So, they say you were in the military before this ****?”
“Yes sir, United States Air Force. Trained with the best.”
“Is that so? You see son, out here, we don’t have any plane, we have guns”
“When I said I was trained with the best sir, I mean special forces. I’ve trained with guns.”
“Ha, Air Force pilots with guns, I gotta see this”
*Sergeant Hands over a rifle*
*Matt pick up the rifle and shoot the target 1000 yards away*
*Matt Hits the center of the target*
“**** son”
*Matt Walks off*
“Hm, some Air Force pilot has a better shot than the Infantry.”
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs: I have always had the strange love in death. Since I was 15 I’ve been in the military. Worked my butt off and was recruited into special forces. Although I’m not allowed to say much about my training, its superior to any of those Infantry or “Marines”, but none of that matters anymore. The worlds in a downward spiral to the end and I’m stuck here in the **** of it trying to get out. I know I cant change what’s going on but I can survive, and I can help keep my buddys alive. I’ve been through **** before and I don’t expect to ever get out of it. I’m a soldier, I fight where I'm told and I win where I fight.
I heard of this place called the brotherhood of steel. I went to check it out and looks like the best place for me. Maybe I can even teach them how to build an airplane. Hm, not holding my breath though.
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Hopefully this will work, thanks for reading
i belive thats the point...
Still really far, there was NO scope on his rifle as far as I could tell.
Well considering it looks like he didn't have to check wind, bullet drop or other factors and their was no scope him hitting the center of the target, or even hitting the target at all from 1000 yards a way is highly improbable.
I am not a white-lister. This has one or two spelling errors you could fix before a white-lister does look at it for you. The backstory doesn't make too much sense to me. I would read up on the Fallout timeline and check your dates. Also, including some dates in your backstory would help to illustrate your characters age and experience.
EDIT: Oh and the BoS, isn't a place. It's a group.
Note: The rest of this post isn't directed at you.
For those of you who did not seem to see it in the original post:
Check out my guide on how to apply for a server!
AT YOUR SERVICE SIR! SAY THE WORD!
Age:13
Role-Play Exp.:I played on many minecraft role-plays. I try not to break character
Why Us:I love fallout and minecraft.
Time You Can Dedicate:5 days a weed
IC
Name:Jacoby Bowden
Age:17
Appearance:skinny:brown hair: no facial hair.
Fears:Hates spiders and being alone at night
Personality:Nice if you are nice to him. Hurt him he hurts you twice as hard.
Occupation:Bartender
Skills:Can fill a drink perfectly
Nickname (Optional):Ghost
RP Example (Add Dialogue):"Hey, where did you grow up ,Ghost," man asked
"where I grew up don't matter no more," Ghost yelled
[u][i]Backstory (1-2 [b]LONG paragraphs):
Jacoby grew up in a small town. His Mother was a bartender.His father was a mercenary for the Brotherhood. When Jacoby was 7 he knew his guns like the back of his hand. His father taught everything he needed to know about them.His mother never liked it, but she had no say in it. When Jacoby was 8, his father got shot and died. Jacoby started to misbehave. He broke into innocent civilians houses and stole their goods. His friends called him "Ghost" because he could go anywhere without getting caught. When he was 12, his mother got severe radiation poisoning and she couldn't work. Ghost got pissed and started stealing more stuff. One time, he tried to steal from the local bar and got caught.
To make up for it, Ghost had to mop the floors and clean the dishes for 2 years. After his sentence was finished, he was offered a full time bartender. He did that until he was 17. His mother died when he was 17. Ghost was full of emotions and didn't show up for work for 2 weeks. Ghost's boss fired him for it. Of course, Ghost wasn't too happy about it. He murdered the bar owner, then the town officials were after him. Ghost pulled out his 9mm and shot 3 of them. After this, he booked it to the town gates. A guard started to close the gate, but Ghost shot him before he could. He sprinted out the gates and shut it behind him. Finally, his adventure begins.
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I am Corporal Corpse! NCR, line up you frackin' worms! Make that Bear proud of you, sloppy uniform?! Scrub the toilets, Private Dip! Damn recruits...
Killed off? There can't be around 30 Russian men in America?
Then why were there Remnants in Vegas? It's called having a child, Arcade could've done it.
IGN: SeanWhite :biggrin.gif:
That could work, but weren't there like six people in the Bunker? The Enclave faction would have to be small. :/
They got REALLY busy afterwards :smile.gif:
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