was denied anyway... I have no idea why, I just went and reread the entire first post, and couldnt find anything wrong, is it because we are new to minecraft?
Out-Of-Character:
Minecraft Account Name: Doraj9
How old are you? 12-15
Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Eastern Standard Time
What do you know about roleplaying? I know that you have a certain role to do (such as be a king, soldier, that kind of stuff), and you have to act like you would if this happened in real life. Also, you should be serious and not joke around a lot.
What do you expect this server will be like? I think that people will be teaming together and owning the robots! We have to work together to survive!
What is your past roleplaying experience? I have played Roblox before and done roleplay games there. Also, me and my brother would roleplay in games like Runescape.
Have you read the rules? Do you understand them and do you agreed with them?: Yes, i understand them and I agree with everything. They will make this server awesome since there won't be a bunch of idiots running around.
In-Character:
Character Name: Doraj
Background: I was just a baby when my diamond city was taken... A man came, rescued me, and took me into his home... I grew up slowly over the next years, most of the time on the run from robots with the man. But one day we were cornered by mutants... He fought them off while I ran away. My mind is so messed up from the radiation that I don't even remember his name, I can barely remember my name... or my past... Now I fight on so that the man's death was not in vain. I fight to survive...
Occupation: Day: Miner Night: Soldier
Can your character read or write? Yes, the man was fairly smart and taught me how to read and write, but I'm not very good at it...
Can your character mine? Yes
Can your character build? Yes, but I'm not amazingly good at it.
Can your character fight? Yes, I fight on for the man's memory.
Any special skills? No
Can you give me a short example of roleplay when you are in danger or when you are in deep pain?: "Run! The lava is coming down that hill!" I yelled as a gush of lava passed by me. Nearly burning my arm. Me and my two friends started sprinted towards a hill where we knew we would be safe. One of my friends was swallowed up by the lava. "NO!" I shouted, but I knew there was nothing I could do. So we ran on to a patch of trees, but the lava caught up. Desperately I grabbed on to a branch and hoisted myself up. "Grab onto a branch!" I yelled to my friend, they reached up and grabbed a branch, but the lava got their foot, it slowly engulfed them. I heard their dying screams as I watched them slowly burn and fall back down into the lava stream. But I had to go on. Quickly, i started jumping from branch to branch, nearly falling many times. Soon I made it to the hill and looked back to the graves of my two friends. "Goodbye" I whispered into the wind.
A screenshot of your skin: http://minecraft-skins.com/wp-content/u ... .51-PM.png
I couldn't put a screenshot in the post, so just copy and paste this and the image will pop up.
Other Information: There's not much else to say about me.[/quote]
Out-Of-Character:
Minecraft Account Name: Doraj9
How old are you? 12-15
Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Eastern Standard Time
What do you know about roleplaying? I know that you have a certain role to do (such as be a king, soldier, that kind of stuff), and you have to act like you would if this happened in real life. Also, you should be serious and not joke around a lot.
What do you expect this server will be like? I think that people will be teaming together and owning the robots! We have to work together to survive!
What is your past roleplaying experience? I have played Roblox before and done roleplay games there. Also, me and my brother would roleplay in games like Runescape.
Have you read the rules? Do you understand them and do you agreed with them?: Yes, i understand them and I agree with everything. They will make this server awesome since there won't be a bunch of idiots running around.
In-Character:
Character Name: Doraj
Background: I was just a baby when my diamond city was taken... A man came, rescued me, and took me into his home... I grew up slowly over the next years, most of the time on the run from robots with the man. But one day we were cornered by mutants... He fought them off while I ran away. My mind is so messed up from the radiation that I don't even remember his name, I can barely remember my name... or my past... Now I fight on so that the man's death was not in vain. I fight to survive...
Occupation: Day: Miner Night: Soldier
Can your character read or write? Yes, the man was fairly smart and taught me how to read and write, but I'm not very good at it...
Can your character mine? Yes
Can your character build? Yes, but I'm not amazingly good at it.
Can your character fight? Yes, I fight on for the man's memory.
Any special skills? No
Can you give me a short example of roleplay when you are in danger or when you are in deep pain?: "Run! The lava is coming down that hill!" I yelled as a gush of lava passed by me. Nearly burning my arm. Me and my two friends started sprinted towards a hill where we knew we would be safe. One of my friends was swallowed up by the lava. "NO!" I shouted, but I knew there was nothing I could do. So we ran on to a patch of trees, but the lava caught up. Desperately I grabbed on to a branch and hoisted myself up. "Grab onto a branch!" I yelled to my friend, they reached up and grabbed a branch, but the lava got their foot, it slowly engulfed them. I heard their dying screams as I watched them slowly burn and fall back down into the lava stream. But I had to go on. Quickly, i started jumping from branch to branch, nearly falling many times. Soon I made it to the hill and looked back to the graves of my two friends. "Goodbye" I whispered into the wind.
A screenshot of your skin: http://minecraft-skins.com/wp-content/u ... .51-PM.png
I couldn't put a screenshot in the post, so just copy and paste this and the image will pop up.
Other Information: There's not much else to say about me.
I will use (()) to ooc or I will get banned[/quote]
Denied!
I know you said you wouldn't tell us why we were denied, but could you make an exception and at least tell me, as I am new, for future applications to other servers?
I know you said you wouldn't tell us why we were denied, but could you make an exception and at least tell me, as I am new, for future applications to other servers?
If you apply to rp server never think your the most powerful one or the most important one...
This is the onliest tips i will give you!
I know you said you wouldn't tell us why we were denied, but could you make an exception and at least tell me, as I am new, for future applications to other servers?
If you apply to rp server never think your the most powerful one or the most important one...
This is the onliest tips i will give you!
How did I mean that? I just wrote that story of how Elocc would act in danger as an example, I didn't mean to imply i was better than anyone, just to show my character's personality...
My tip, of the same variety, RPGs and Roleplaying are two very different things.
As for both of you: Your characters are Mary/Gary Sues. They both have no real flaws. ':l
Exactly! Ok this is the answer!
In real life i can fight, read and write, but i cant build or mine..
So thats what i meant with overpowered characters! Like better then others. I accept the background and all that other stuff only that you can fight,read/write....
I don't want to join the server anymore, the owner of it isn't the kind of person I like. He uses bad words a lot and is a bit strict. Have fun though!
Out-Of-Character:
Minecraft Account Name:MrKiller14
How old are you?-14
Time-Zone/Country of Residence: East Coast, United States
What do you know about roleplaying?- A lot I'm a pretty big fan, I know you have to be mature and and able to communicate.
What do you expect this server will be like?A recreation of fallout or a totally new awesome experience.
What is your past roleplaying experience?Other servers, 40k, video gams, and other general stuff.
Have you read the rules? Do you understand them and do you agreed with them?:I have read the rules and they seem reasonable and I agree with them.
In-Character:
Character Name:Mike
Background:Mike grew up in a slum wasteland town with his drunk of a mother. He always fended for himself and took what he needed when he needed it. His only friend was his pet dog sparky, a loyal companion. As he grew older he joined the Skull Bashers Merc group. Now its present time and hes the sergeant of an elite squad.
Occupation:
Can your character read or write?Only read on account of his lifestyle he barely had the time.
Can your character mine?Yes it was his partime job as a kid. It was the only way his family got by.
Can your character build?Yes, and very well, hes very expeirienced.
Can your character fight?Yes, Hes a mercanary.
Any special skills? Very experienced in combat and a great builder.
Can you give me a short example of roleplay when you are in danger or when you are in deep pain?: My leg! Damn holy creeper blew up and sent a piece of shrapnel into my thigh! I need help now! Hurry there's a few more and my rifles got no more ammo!
A screenshot of your skin:Normal working on finding one.
Other Information:No just, I will use (()) to ooc or i will get banned )
, but I really like the backround story. It's really creative and interesting.
Yeah, if I can't read, write, build, mine, and fight, this server just sucks! I don't want to join anymore. It is possible for some people to be able to do a lot of different things.
I think what the owner is trying to say is to balance out your characteristics. It feels as if your characters are 100% masters at everything they do, and all the techniques. Pick and choose some rather than have them be good at everything. They can build, but they can only use XXXX, or something along those lines. Your character can do those things, but can they do them perfectly? If they can, what's their reason for it?
Ok, but if I can only do certain things, then it's really boring still. And I said I'm a soldier/Miner. I think this isn't really the right server for me.
was denied anyway... I have no idea why, I just went and reread the entire first post, and couldnt find anything wrong, is it because we are new to minecraft?
Minecraft Account Name: Doraj9
How old are you? 12-15
Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Eastern Standard Time
What do you know about roleplaying? I know that you have a certain role to do (such as be a king, soldier, that kind of stuff), and you have to act like you would if this happened in real life. Also, you should be serious and not joke around a lot.
What do you expect this server will be like? I think that people will be teaming together and owning the robots! We have to work together to survive!
What is your past roleplaying experience? I have played Roblox before and done roleplay games there. Also, me and my brother would roleplay in games like Runescape.
Have you read the rules? Do you understand them and do you agreed with them?: Yes, i understand them and I agree with everything. They will make this server awesome since there won't be a bunch of idiots running around.
In-Character:
Character Name: Doraj
Background: I was just a baby when my diamond city was taken... A man came, rescued me, and took me into his home... I grew up slowly over the next years, most of the time on the run from robots with the man. But one day we were cornered by mutants... He fought them off while I ran away. My mind is so messed up from the radiation that I don't even remember his name, I can barely remember my name... or my past... Now I fight on so that the man's death was not in vain. I fight to survive...
Occupation: Day: Miner Night: Soldier
Can your character read or write? Yes, the man was fairly smart and taught me how to read and write, but I'm not very good at it...
Can your character mine? Yes
Can your character build? Yes, but I'm not amazingly good at it.
Can your character fight? Yes, I fight on for the man's memory.
Any special skills? No
Can you give me a short example of roleplay when you are in danger or when you are in deep pain?: "Run! The lava is coming down that hill!" I yelled as a gush of lava passed by me. Nearly burning my arm. Me and my two friends started sprinted towards a hill where we knew we would be safe. One of my friends was swallowed up by the lava. "NO!" I shouted, but I knew there was nothing I could do. So we ran on to a patch of trees, but the lava caught up. Desperately I grabbed on to a branch and hoisted myself up. "Grab onto a branch!" I yelled to my friend, they reached up and grabbed a branch, but the lava got their foot, it slowly engulfed them. I heard their dying screams as I watched them slowly burn and fall back down into the lava stream. But I had to go on. Quickly, i started jumping from branch to branch, nearly falling many times. Soon I made it to the hill and looked back to the graves of my two friends. "Goodbye" I whispered into the wind.
A screenshot of your skin:
http://minecraft-skins.com/wp-content/u ... .51-PM.png
I couldn't put a screenshot in the post, so just copy and paste this and the image will pop up.
Other Information: There's not much else to say about me.[/quote]
I will use (()) to ooc or I will get banned
I just saw what you meant and sent out a new application with that in it.
I will use (()) to ooc or I will get banned[/quote]
Denied!
The Almighty Notch<The Holy Creeper
If you apply to rp server never think your the most powerful one or the most important one...
This is the onliest tips i will give you!
How did I mean that? I just wrote that story of how Elocc would act in danger as an example, I didn't mean to imply i was better than anyone, just to show my character's personality...
As for both of you: Your characters are Mary/Gary Sues. They both have no real flaws. ':l
Edit: And Doraj, you didn't read the first post fully. Re-read it, and then try re-applying after looking on your character.
Exactly! Ok this is the answer!
In real life i can fight, read and write, but i cant build or mine..
So thats what i meant with overpowered characters! Like better then others. I accept the background and all that other stuff only that you can fight,read/write....
Well, I'm giving up on the server, it seemed pretty cool at first, but this is just stupid.
Minecraft Account Name:MrKiller14
How old are you?-14
Time-Zone/Country of Residence: East Coast, United States
What do you know about roleplaying?- A lot I'm a pretty big fan, I know you have to be mature and and able to communicate.
What do you expect this server will be like?A recreation of fallout or a totally new awesome experience.
What is your past roleplaying experience?Other servers, 40k, video gams, and other general stuff.
Have you read the rules? Do you understand them and do you agreed with them?:I have read the rules and they seem reasonable and I agree with them.
In-Character:
Character Name:Mike
Background:Mike grew up in a slum wasteland town with his drunk of a mother. He always fended for himself and took what he needed when he needed it. His only friend was his pet dog sparky, a loyal companion. As he grew older he joined the Skull Bashers Merc group. Now its present time and hes the sergeant of an elite squad.
Occupation:
Can your character read or write?Only read on account of his lifestyle he barely had the time.
Can your character mine?Yes it was his partime job as a kid. It was the only way his family got by.
Can your character build?Yes, and very well, hes very expeirienced.
Can your character fight?Yes, Hes a mercanary.
Any special skills? Very experienced in combat and a great builder.
Can you give me a short example of roleplay when you are in danger or when you are in deep pain?: My leg! Damn holy creeper blew up and sent a piece of shrapnel into my thigh! I need help now! Hurry there's a few more and my rifles got no more ammo!
A screenshot of your skin:Normal working on finding one.
Other Information:No just, I will use (()) to ooc or i will get banned )
, but I really like the backround story. It's really creative and interesting.
EDIT: Oh, and, Mrk, re-read the first post. ;3