Wow..... very nice story very good it reminds me of a game I recently played oh way Minecraft and by the way very nice, descriptive words hte right words to use very very good.
believe it or not, this was for a class project to write a short story
If you didn't get an A, the teacher was a Creeper!
actually, i havent gotten a grade back yet, maybe she was so dumbfounded by it that she had to think of a grade HIGHER then A, or maybe she didnt read it yet, idk
Great story. The only thing I have to say is that the whole Dr. Leon and the nether with the ghast and herobrine part is out of those Minecraft songs on youtube :tongue.gif:. But besides that it is well constucted :smile.gif:.
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Great story. The only thing I have to say is that the whole Dr. Leon and the nether with the ghast and herobrine part is out of those Minecraft songs on youtube :tongue.gif:. But besides that it is well constucted :smile.gif:.
IM NOT PLAGERIZING!! i asked bobby for permission, and Leon Sysk is going to be a character later in the story. any other referances are simply a nod to the sources, i mean no harm
besides, if i were plagerizing, i wouldnt be here, plagerism pisses and off
wassat supposed to mean? i dont get it
hey! i asked him, if he lets people put his songs in vids, he wouldnt mind if someone used his song in a story
so you got nuttin on me
Oh I'm not attacking you. Just saying that originality is nice.
actually, i havent gotten a grade back yet, maybe she was so dumbfounded by it that she had to think of a grade HIGHER then A, or maybe she didnt read it yet, idk
Wait a minute.....
You are defiantly plagiarizing now.
i was going to update it showing my sources, you just did it for me
*PUSH*
Me: Heh heh heh.. >
IM NOT PLAGERIZING!! i asked bobby for permission, and Leon Sysk is going to be a character later in the story. any other referances are simply a nod to the sources, i mean no harm
besides, if i were plagerizing, i wouldnt be here, plagerism pisses and off
Math FTW
Minepedia is your friend.
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no, i got it from a minecraft video that got it from the half life series