So while playing Minecraft and reading GhostG45's "The Altogether Rather Depressing Tales of Minecraft " My computer shut down. Got back on and saw I lost my best world on minecraft. However instead of being mad I saw this as a story. I began writing this and surprisingly took me not long I plan to update a new chapter every 2-7 days as I am rarely on the forums so do not expect many replies from me. I was inspired to write this by GhostG45
So..This is what minecraft would be seen as if written in a diary.
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Day 127:
Hahaha. I'm set. Whoever left me in the forest alone and with no memories can suck it, I got full diamond armour diamond tools, couple of farms for animals trees and even obsidian, and several obsidian teleporters, Hah that hellish place bows down to me now I ain't afraid of it no more. My main and best home in the huge cave full of chests and furnaces is awesome, it's where I woke up without my damn memories. Going through my portals I arrive at my sixth cave and currently starting to mine. I decided just to mine straight down with a bucket of water and several grilled porks.
Woah. My stuff..it's gone..Found only my diary in my backpack...everything is all gone..my diamond armour and pickaxe...It's GONE!
I thought I conquered this world.. I'm sitting here alone at the bottom of my mining hole.. no.. I conquered those pesky zombies, spiders, skeletons..the green suicide exploders and even the giant flying jellyfish in that hell world... I even have a pet slime... how can I get up..my hands? No I can't fashion a staircase up with my hands I'm 40 layers down in rock..I will not be beaten by a dark hole..
I tried to dig through the dirt to my left.. It wont go away.. I keep digging but it is still there... Crap I feel my mind fading... no... no... I think I'm going to black out... Who is that... There is a figure at the top... he's placing stairs, yes I'm gonna be saved..
Yes .I'll be saved... wait... no it can't be... I know him... I've seen him before... those white pale eyes.. I've seen them before... But where... he has a sword... He's not going to save me... He's so close... I know his name, but it can't be... MY GOD, IT'S HEROB-
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MY MINECRAFT NOVEL HERE!Oh god why does this still exist
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seriously how the can a man take a PIG and make THIS. Never leave this man alone with no logic and a computer
I think no.
No, no, no, no, no.
This?
This is... Well, I can't really say anything too bad for risk of being banned, but it's not too good.
Try making it less random, fixing the grammar mistakes and just rewriting it all.
Nobody likes a Herobrine story, no matter how well written it may be.
To give our children and future generations hope, we must destroy every child on Earth and never have any more. I have already started this misson, child numbers have been halved in my local district. Will you join the cause?
To give our children and future generations hope, we must destroy every child on Earth and never have any more. I have already started this misson, child numbers have been halved in my local district. Will you join the cause?
@Shawnyall Thanks I need the criticism.
This is the first stories I've ever written..ever. About the grammar I wanted it to not be perfect to make it more realistic as if it was written by an adventurer in a diary not typed on a computer by some kid...
The herobrine story.. meh I thought I'd add it for kicks. This may be the only time we will ever hear of Herobrine or it will become some epic saga of the Man vs Herobrine. I plan to make it as a diary of an average Minecraft player with some kicks. Besides I'm no J.K Rowling I didn't plan out the whole story when I wrote this. But trust me You'll see what I plan to make it into in the next chapter (It's night here and I'll finish it after school). But Herobrine well i'm going to take the audience's opinion about it +1 if wanted -1 if not
@Gamer The story has a basic plot of what I plan on doing. But going into specifics meh with that I'll just "go with the flow"
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MY MINECRAFT NOVEL HERE!Oh god why does this still exist
Quote from coalpup »
seriously how the can a man take a PIG and make THIS. Never leave this man alone with no logic and a computer
So..This is what minecraft would be seen as if written in a diary.
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Day 127:
Hahaha. I'm set. Whoever left me in the forest alone and with no memories can suck it, I got full diamond armour diamond tools, couple of farms for animals trees and even obsidian, and several obsidian teleporters, Hah that hellish place bows down to me now I ain't afraid of it no more. My main and best home in the huge cave full of chests and furnaces is awesome, it's where I woke up without my damn memories. Going through my portals I arrive at my sixth cave and currently starting to mine. I decided just to mine straight down with a bucket of water and several grilled porks.
Woah. My stuff..it's gone..Found only my diary in my backpack...everything is all gone..my diamond armour and pickaxe...It's GONE!
I thought I conquered this world.. I'm sitting here alone at the bottom of my mining hole.. no.. I conquered those pesky zombies, spiders, skeletons..the green suicide exploders and even the giant flying jellyfish in that hell world... I even have a pet slime... how can I get up..my hands? No I can't fashion a staircase up with my hands I'm 40 layers down in rock..I will not be beaten by a dark hole..
I tried to dig through the dirt to my left.. It wont go away.. I keep digging but it is still there... Crap I feel my mind fading... no... no... I think I'm going to black out... Who is that... There is a figure at the top... he's placing stairs, yes I'm gonna be saved..
Yes .I'll be saved... wait... no it can't be... I know him... I've seen him before... those white pale eyes.. I've seen them before... But where... he has a sword... He's not going to save me... He's so close... I know his name, but it can't be... MY GOD, IT'S HEROB-
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No, no, no, no, no.
This?
This is... Well, I can't really say anything too bad for risk of being banned, but it's not too good.
Try making it less random, fixing the grammar mistakes and just rewriting it all.
Nobody likes a Herobrine story, no matter how well written it may be.
~Victory is ours~
~Shawnyall~
JUMPING TO CONCLUSIONS NOW, ARE WE?
But yes, it isn't very good. Try actually giving your story a plot before you go ahead and improvise?
I know, right? Maybe it was Herobill, and he's getting a little tired of people confusing him for that nonexistent meme that needs to go away.
Exactly, but I was thinking Herobob.
This is the first stories I've ever written..ever. About the grammar I wanted it to not be perfect to make it more realistic as if it was written by an adventurer in a diary not typed on a computer by some kid...
The herobrine story.. meh I thought I'd add it for kicks. This may be the only time we will ever hear of Herobrine or it will become some epic saga of the Man vs Herobrine. I plan to make it as a diary of an average Minecraft player with some kicks. Besides I'm no J.K Rowling I didn't plan out the whole story when I wrote this. But trust me You'll see what I plan to make it into in the next chapter (It's night here and I'll finish it after school).
But Herobrine well i'm going to take the audience's opinion about it +1 if wanted -1 if not
@Gamer The story has a basic plot of what I plan on doing. But going into specifics meh with that I'll just "go with the flow"