-OOC Information- -IGN:hartham- -Reason for joining-i love roleplay servers -Age-14
-IC Information- Character Name:hartham (i will not tell you his last name >:3D -Age-25 Character description: caucasian,weak in strength,and slightly insane (not fully.....yet) Biography:as a boy he was always was always the queer one looking through garbage cans,old buildings etc. for scrap. Why did he look for scrap you ask? To build machines of course! Which 99% of the time exploded.......anyway. His tinkering worried passer-byes which led for a new "policy" to take effect allowing for people of any age to go to jail if their crime is "severe" enough and that incuded our protagonist (or antagonist) but the sentancing still had to be done so he pleaded guilty because he really had no chance to have the case in his favour So he was sent to solitary confinement (that is why he is partially insane) and it felt like he was going to be in there forever but eventually came the day when he was 19 that he was released from confinement. But it was going to possibly rougher than confinement for 1 main reason. he was in jail. He could do only do the one thing he could think of.....continue with his crap machines (come on you had to be expecting that) but with a twist he sold his contraptions on the black market even though he had a rough time at first and has actually made a living (but not a good one) and is continually being chased by the cops ever since. So in summary he is a criminal who has experienced a very long solitary confinement and can barely make a living.
-OOC Information- IGN:jonah5 Reasonfor joining:i like rp servers and i want to learn more about tekkit so i thought this would be perfect Age:13 im mature but i dont have very good grammar
-IC Information- CharacterName:Jonah Age:18 Character description:jonah is fairly short and has brown hair with green eyes Biography:Jonah is a honest working kid he often helped his parents in their hardware store. he learned alot from taking care of the store he studyed that parts that they sold and learned almost everything about them. soon his parents kicked him out to start his own life so he came to republic city he had no idea what he wanted to do once he got there. all he knew was something about the city didnt seem right it seeed diffrent for the small town he was from in his hometown there were trees all over the place in this new place it was all buildings and concrete for miles. Jonah didnt like it but he supposed he would have to get used to it
I hope i get accepted i know my backstory isnt all that great but i think its ok sorry for grammar mistakes im not exactly the best at grammar but i doubt im the worst Reposted app with edits
You're going to need to try a little harder on writing a more detailed biography. Other then that everything is good.
This is an acceptable application, you'll receive a PM, ASAP about the server information.
Unfortunately this has been denied due to multiple number of reasons. First of all the application format is not complete as you left out the OOC Information section. Being a nuclear scientist would need you to go to the University beforehand so you wouldn't be able to start out as a Scientist. You also won't be allowed to have the last part of your application as this is a major powergame. You can't roleplay something that doesn't exist on the planet. Please re-write your application.
This is on the edge of acceptable, next time try a little harder. You'll receive a PM soon about the server information.
CAn someone officially add me as a police officer and pm the police station door codes? I have been accepted by prongs and have read the manual, he just hasnt been on to give me the codes and such.
CAn someone officially add me as a police officer and pm the police station door codes? I have been accepted by prongs and have read the manual, he just hasnt been on to give me the codes and such.
Unfortunately, that's all Prongs, so...please ask him. Don't think anyone can just do that for you without him.
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"If it's a fair fight, you planned it wrong" -Unknown
-IC Information- Character Name: Roxx Flare Age: 25 Character description: Green and Blue eyes, dark skin, black curly hair, broad shoulders, deep voice, Biography: When Roxx James Flare was young he was always picked on never excepted because of his dark coloured skin, eventually Roxx got so tired of the constant picking on he stole his fathers shot-gun and shot the boys. 10 years later now 20 years old Roxx was a hardcore gang member, in and out of jail by the hour but there was always this thing in him thats made him fascinated by minerals, alchemy and sciences. he slowly but surely started to lose his badass gang status for more of a passive science loving man, he got into a very good scientific college and became a nuclear scientist. during an experiment with a new freezing substance an accident occured in which the substance touched Roxx's skin causing him to freeze and stay trapped in ice until he was awoken....a man in the past he was, until they found him dusted and soaking 10 years later completely missing a nation against nation war which demolished the surrounding area and yet the ice had not a dent, nor scratch on it but it slowly melted within the 10 year span. He was completely oblivious to were he was it was almost as though everything was rebuilt into an alternate universe!
-OOC Information- IGN:jonah5 Reasonfor joining:i like rp servers and i want to learn more about tekkit so i thought this would be perfect Age:13 im mature but i dont have very good grammar
-IC Information- CharacterName:Jonah Age:18 Character description:jonah is fairly short and has brown hair with green eyes Biography:Jonah is a honest working kid he often helped his parents in their hardware store. he learned alot from taking care of the store he studyed that parts that they sold and learned almost everything about them. soon his parents kicked him out to start his own life so he came to republic city he had no idea what he wanted to do once he got there. all he knew was something about the city didnt seem right it seeed diffrent for the small town he was from in his hometown there were trees all over the place in this new place it was all buildings and concrete for miles. Jonah didnt like it but he supposed he would have to get used to it
I hope i get accepted i know my backstory isnt all that great but i think its ok sorry for grammar mistakes im not exactly the best at grammar but i doubt im the worst Reposted app with edits
I believe this is acceptable. I will PM you the IP soon.
-IC Information- Character Name: Roxx Flare Age: 25 Character description: Green and Blue eyes, dark skin, black curly hair, broad shoulders, deep voice, Biography: When Roxx James Flare was young he was always picked on never excepted because of his dark coloured skin, eventually Roxx got so tired of the constant picking on he stole his fathers shot-gun and shot the boys. 10 years later now 20 years old Roxx was a hardcore gang member, in and out of jail by the hour but there was always this thing in him thats made him fascinated by minerals, alchemy and sciences. he slowly but surely started to lose his badass gang status for more of a passive science loving man, he got into a very good scientific college and became a nuclear scientist. during an experiment with a new freezing substance an accident occured in which the substance touched Roxx's skin causing him to freeze and stay trapped in ice until he was awoken....a man in the past he was, until they found him dusted and soaking 10 years later completely missing a nation against nation war which demolished the surrounding area and yet the ice had not a dent, nor scratch on it but it slowly melted within the 10 year span. He was completely oblivious to were he was it was almost as though everything was rebuilt into an alternate universe!
Denied, I require the OOC part of the Application.
-OOC Information-
IGN: zoq
Reason for joining: I like the role playing, And also tekkit is just boring if there is no one to show it off too
Age: 17
-IC Information-
Character Name: Dane
Age: 20
Character description: Dane is an overconfident man who dresses nice.
Biography: Hi i'm Dane, I was born into wealth. Though my dad was tough for he was not born into money, He worked hard to build his fortune. However now it is time for me to find a real job. You see my dad was involved in some less than legal business transactions. As a result my family was involved with criminals. My mom and father died in a "accident". His buisness was shut down due to the criminal activity, and his money taken by the thugs that killed him. So I am left with only a small amount of money. Money that I am using to go to school in republic city. Where I home to start my new life.
-OOC Information- IGN: remi112 Reasonfor joining: RP is my thing. It just is. Age: 14
-IC Information- CharacterName: Bjorn Snik Age: 23 Character description: Bjorn wears Brown Sweater, Jeans, Boots, and a scarf around his mouth. Has Black Hair, and Blue Eyes. Biography: Bjorn was born in a different city, Not applicable. Before he came to Republic City, he was a student in a run down school with weak kids, He usually felt stressed from all the popularity, and thats when he began drinking. When he left, he looked at himself as a bad person so he left his town, and went to Republic City. He came for fortune, to make something of himself, alone. His family was a pain in the ass, especially when he was drinking. But in between the time of his entry into Republic City, and his home town, he went to a rehabilitation center to clean up. He succeeded in tossing the sauce, and went to Republic City. What he experiences there could be corruption from his fame, or begging in the streets for money. We shall find out soon.
-OOC Information-
IGN:marboy1
Reason for joining:I have played on the 3 last servers you had, So I would love a modern one! And I also love tekkit
Age:14
-IC Information-
Character Name:John Reinfield
Age:29
Character description:He has brown hair, light blue eyes and beard....He often wears clothes that looks like a lab suit...But it's not.
Biography:John grew up with his familly in Republic city, Be had a great relationship with his mother. She always had the breakfeast ready on the table when he woke up for school...But the downside of his familly was his father, he was always drunk. When his father were with friends, he always had someone home. So then it happend....One day, John's father had someone with him home...That man was a criminal. That man murdered John's mother...John was a teenager then, and was very angry......And since his mother was gone, and his father didn't want to live with John anymore...John ended up in Republic city all by himself, His main goal is to take down every criminals he can. But he got to join the police..He would do anything to join the police force...But he also got to get friends with people, so he cant be locked in his own room...Closed for everyone...The rest is up to John now.
((I didn't get it if you need to go to collage before you join the police, tell me if I have, and i will change i ))
Reason for joining: RP is always fun, also I love the big brother theme and
you don't see many modern servers that aren't overly unrealistic.
Age: 20
-IC Information-
Character Name: Sam Markson
Age: 21
Character description: Height: 5'9 Weight: 160 lbs Hair: Dirty Blonde;Short
Biography: Growing up in a lower middle-class family wouldn't have been the first choice
Sam would have made however he never complained about while growing up. His parents
toiling away to provide for him taught him to appreciate hard work. While only having a
highschool education and unable to afford college, Sam's options for work were very
limited so construction seemed like a good choice. Now moving out of the house and
searching for an apartment, Sam is expecting to get a city job and to learn to live on
his own. While he has respect for the government, there was always a nagging fear
brought about from his youth that the government watches every move of the people
and convicts them of crimes that shouldn't be punishable. Even though he never
directly recieved any abuse from the state or the police force, he witnessed it
and remembers it well.
-OOC Information-
IGN: zoq
Reason for joining: I like the role playing, And also tekkit is just boring if there is no one to show it off too
Age: 17
-IC Information-
Character Name: Dane
Age: 20
Character description: Dane is an overconfident man who dresses nice.
Biography: Hi i'm Dane, I was born into wealth. Though my dad was tough for he was not born into money, He worked hard to build his fortune. However now it is time for me to find a real job. You see my dad was involved in some less than legal business transactions. As a result my family was involved with criminals. My mom and father died in a "accident". His buisness was shut down due to the criminal activity, and his money taken by the thugs that killed him. So I am left with only a small amount of money. Money that I am using to go to school in republic city. Where I home to start my new life.
Personally, I'd give yourself a last name. Also not a fan of the first-person bio, but I guess there's really nothing wrong with the lore of it...so this is acceptable.
-OOC Information- IGN: remi112 Reasonfor joining: RP is my thing. It just is. Age: 14
-IC Information- CharacterName: Bjorn Snik Age: 23 Character description: Bjorn wears Brown Sweater, Jeans, Boots, and a scarf around his mouth. Has Black Hair, and Blue Eyes. Biography: Bjorn was born in a different city, Not applicable. Before he came to Republic City, he was a student in a run down school with weak kids, He usually felt stressed from all the popularity, and thats when he began drinking. When he left, he looked at himself as a bad person so he left his town, and went to Republic City. He came for fortune, to make something of himself, alone. His family was a pain in the ass, especially when he was drinking. But in between the time of his entry into Republic City, and his home town, he went to a rehabilitation center to clean up. He succeeded in tossing the sauce, and went to Republic City. What he experiences there could be corruption from his fame, or begging in the streets for money. We shall find out soon.
-OOC Information-
IGN:marboy1
Reason for joining:I have played on the 3 last servers you had, So I would love a modern one! And I also love tekkit
Age:14
-IC Information-
Character Name:John Reinfield
Age:29
Character description:He has brown hair, light blue eyes and beard....He often wears clothes that looks like a lab suit...But it's not.
Biography:John grew up with his familly in Republic city, Be had a great relationship with his mother. She always had the breakfeast ready on the table when he woke up for school...But the downside of his familly was his father, he was always drunk. When his father were with friends, he always had someone home. So then it happend....One day, John's father had someone with him home...That man was a criminal. That man murdered John's mother...John was a teenager then, and was very angry......And since his mother was gone, and his father didn't want to live with John anymore...John ended up in Republic city all by himself, His main goal is to take down every criminals he can. But he got to join the police..He would do anything to join the police force...But he also got to get friends with people, so he cant be locked in his own room...Closed for everyone...The rest is up to John now.
((I didn't get it if you need to go to collage before you join the police, tell me if I have, and i will change i ))
So. Many. Ellipses!
Anyway, the lore is fine, if a bit difficult to read to me, personally. And no, you don't have to go to the University to join the police.
Please...re-write it at least once, but the content of the backstory is most likely acceptable.
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"If it's a fair fight, you planned it wrong" -Unknown
-IGN:hartham-
-Reason for joining-i love roleplay servers
-Age-14
-IC Information-
Character Name:hartham (i will not tell you his last name >:3D
-Age-25
Character description: caucasian,weak in strength,and slightly insane (not fully.....yet)
Biography:as a boy he was always was always the queer one looking through garbage cans,old buildings etc. for scrap. Why did he look for scrap you ask? To build machines of course! Which 99% of the time exploded.......anyway. His tinkering worried passer-byes which led for a new "policy" to take effect allowing for people of any age to go to jail if their crime is "severe" enough and that incuded our protagonist (or antagonist) but the sentancing still had to be done so he pleaded guilty because he really had no chance to have the case in his favour So he was sent to solitary confinement (that is why he is partially insane) and it felt like he was going to be in there forever but eventually came the day when he was 19 that he was released from confinement. But it was going to possibly rougher than confinement for 1 main reason. he was in jail. He could do only do the one thing he could think of.....continue with his crap machines (come on you had to be expecting that) but with a twist he sold his contraptions on the black market even though he had a rough time at first and has actually made a living (but not a good one) and is continually being chased by the cops ever since. So in summary he is a criminal who has experienced a very long solitary confinement and can barely make a living.
Yes please.
IGN:jonah5
Reason for joining:i like rp servers and i want to learn more about tekkit so i thought this would be perfect
Age:13 im mature but i dont have very good grammar
-IC Information-
Character Name:Jonah
Age:18
Character description:jonah is fairly short and has brown hair with green eyes
Biography:Jonah is a honest working kid he often helped his parents in their hardware store. he learned alot from taking care of the store he studyed that parts that they sold and learned almost everything about them. soon his parents kicked him out to start his own life so he came to republic city he had no idea what he wanted to do once he got there. all he knew was something about the city didnt seem right it seeed diffrent for the small town he was from in his hometown there were trees all over the place in this new place it was all buildings and concrete for miles. Jonah didnt like it but he supposed he would have to get used to it
I hope i get accepted i know my backstory isnt all that great but i think its ok sorry for grammar mistakes im not exactly the best at grammar but i doubt im the worst
Reposted app with edits
im not the best at biographies
BUT i know how to stay incharacter
Unfortunately, that's all Prongs, so...please ask him. Don't think anyone can just do that for you without him.
"If it's a fair fight, you planned it wrong" -Unknown
Character Name: Roxx Flare
Age: 25
Character description: Green and Blue eyes, dark skin, black curly hair, broad shoulders, deep voice,
Biography: When Roxx James Flare was young he was always picked on never excepted because of his dark coloured skin, eventually Roxx got so tired of the constant picking on he stole his fathers shot-gun and shot the boys. 10 years later now 20 years old Roxx was a hardcore gang member, in and out of jail by the hour but there was always this thing in him thats made him fascinated by minerals, alchemy and sciences. he slowly but surely started to lose his badass gang status for more of a passive science loving man, he got into a very good scientific college and became a nuclear scientist. during an experiment with a new freezing substance an accident occured in which the substance touched Roxx's skin causing him to freeze and stay trapped in ice until he was awoken....a man in the past he was, until they found him dusted and soaking 10 years later completely missing a nation against nation war which demolished the surrounding area and yet the ice had not a dent, nor scratch on it but it slowly melted within the 10 year span. He was completely oblivious to were he was it was almost as though everything was rebuilt into an alternate universe!
I believe this is acceptable. I will PM you the IP soon.
Denied, I require the OOC part of the Application.
IGN: zoq
Reason for joining: I like the role playing, And also tekkit is just boring if there is no one to show it off too
Age: 17
-IC Information-
Character Name: Dane
Age: 20
Character description: Dane is an overconfident man who dresses nice.
Biography: Hi i'm Dane, I was born into wealth. Though my dad was tough for he was not born into money, He worked hard to build his fortune. However now it is time for me to find a real job. You see my dad was involved in some less than legal business transactions. As a result my family was involved with criminals. My mom and father died in a "accident". His buisness was shut down due to the criminal activity, and his money taken by the thugs that killed him. So I am left with only a small amount of money. Money that I am using to go to school in republic city. Where I home to start my new life.
IGN: remi112
Reason for joining: RP is my thing. It just is.
Age: 14
-IC Information-
Character Name: Bjorn Snik
Age: 23
Character description: Bjorn wears Brown Sweater, Jeans, Boots, and a scarf around his mouth. Has Black Hair, and Blue Eyes.
Biography: Bjorn was born in a different city, Not applicable. Before he came to Republic City, he was a student in a run down school with weak kids, He usually felt stressed from all the popularity, and thats when he began drinking. When he left, he looked at himself as a bad person so he left his town, and went to Republic City. He came for fortune, to make something of himself, alone. His family was a pain in the ass, especially when he was drinking. But in between the time of his entry into Republic City, and his home town, he went to a rehabilitation center to clean up. He succeeded in tossing the sauce, and went to Republic City. What he experiences there could be corruption from his fame, or begging in the streets for money. We shall find out soon.
IGN:marboy1
Reason for joining:I have played on the 3 last servers you had, So I would love a modern one! And I also love tekkit
Age:14
-IC Information-
Character Name:John Reinfield
Age:29
Character description:He has brown hair, light blue eyes and beard....He often wears clothes that looks like a lab suit...But it's not.
Biography:John grew up with his familly in Republic city, Be had a great relationship with his mother. She always had the breakfeast ready on the table when he woke up for school...But the downside of his familly was his father, he was always drunk. When his father were with friends, he always had someone home. So then it happend....One day, John's father had someone with him home...That man was a criminal. That man murdered John's mother...John was a teenager then, and was very angry......And since his mother was gone, and his father didn't want to live with John anymore...John ended up in Republic city all by himself, His main goal is to take down every criminals he can. But he got to join the police..He would do anything to join the police force...But he also got to get friends with people, so he cant be locked in his own room...Closed for everyone...The rest is up to John now.
((I didn't get it if you need to go to collage before you join the police, tell me if I have, and i will change i ))
IGN: GoodleShoes
Reason for joining: RP is always fun, also I love the big brother theme and
you don't see many modern servers that aren't overly unrealistic.
Age: 20
-IC Information-
Character Name: Sam Markson
Age: 21
Character description: Height: 5'9 Weight: 160 lbs Hair: Dirty Blonde;Short
Biography: Growing up in a lower middle-class family wouldn't have been the first choice
Sam would have made however he never complained about while growing up. His parents
toiling away to provide for him taught him to appreciate hard work. While only having a
highschool education and unable to afford college, Sam's options for work were very
limited so construction seemed like a good choice. Now moving out of the house and
searching for an apartment, Sam is expecting to get a city job and to learn to live on
his own. While he has respect for the government, there was always a nagging fear
brought about from his youth that the government watches every move of the people
and convicts them of crimes that shouldn't be punishable. Even though he never
directly recieved any abuse from the state or the police force, he witnessed it
and remembers it well.
Personally, I'd give yourself a last name. Also not a fan of the first-person bio, but I guess there's really nothing wrong with the lore of it...so this is acceptable.
Acceptable.
Way. Too. Short.
So. Many. Ellipses!
Anyway, the lore is fine, if a bit difficult to read to me, personally. And no, you don't have to go to the University to join the police.
Please...re-write it at least once, but the content of the backstory is most likely acceptable.
"If it's a fair fight, you planned it wrong" -Unknown