Role-Play Exp.: Quite a bit (Haven't RP'd in a while, so my skills are a little rusty)
Why Us: Because all other servers are the same, this one was differnt, therefore interesting
Time You Can Dedicate: Depends on my school workload.
Have you played Assassin's Creed?: Yes, but not very often, I'm only on memory block 3(Damn School work)
IC
Name: Dante Megrory
Gender: Male
Age: 27
Fears: The Unknown
Personality: Dante is a douche to most, but if you really know him, he's a rather nice guy
Skills: Stealth, Stealing, and Parkour
Nickname (Optional): Shadowfoot
RP Example (Add Dialogue):
(Plot: Dante enlisted with a group of rich mercs for cash)
Group Leader: Alright we will make our frontal assault through the sewers, after that,
we blow a small hole in the wall, exposing an area where we are able to sneak in...
Wheres Dante?
Random Guy in group: I dunno... Wait where is my cash... WHERES DANTE AND WHERES MY CASH?!?!
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Dante grew up in an area near Rome. It wasn't
uncommon is the Megrory household for the mother and father to be arguing,
constantly refering to their only child as a mistake. During most of these
arguments, Dante would climb out his window and jump, roof top, to roof top.
To his lovers house, yes, Dante was only 15. But both, the girl he loved, and
himself knew that they would be together. At age 18, his sweetheart was charged
the assassination of her father, and important political figure. Dante was with
her and knew that it was only some man in a white cloak. So he hatched a plan
to break her out of jail and then run away. All it required was gold, which Dante
didn't have. So he stole it, from peoples pockets, homes. Any small change, Dante wanted needed, to break his love out of jail. When he began his plot to break his
love out of jail. He found that she had broken out and already ran away. What Dante
didn't know is that he knew of his plan and where he would run away too. Dante,
heart broken, ran the other direction. Dedicated, he vowed that he would find a
way to get her back. All it required was gold, which he didn't have...
Other
What is Roleplay?: When you act as someone else with a different ROLE.
What is Metagaming?: Using out of game info to affect how you play.
What is Powergaming?: Making an over powered character to give your team an unfair advantage.
What is Assassin's Creed?: A game where a group of scientists use DNA memory to gain an artifact
(Again, Memory Block 3)
Time You Can Dedicate:i can spend long time in weekends and some between it
Have you played Assassin's Creed?: yep the 2, revelations and now im playing the 3
IC
Name: Sir H
Gender: male
Age: 19
Fears: the high places and the assasains
Personality: strong, silent and very though
Skills: swordmaster, intelligence and good movement in weight armors
Nickname (Optional): H just H
RP Example (Add Dialogue): [a civilian runs to sir H] p-please an assasain appeared help us!, he killed my sister
H: ok i will be on my way just go search a safe place ok sir?
Civilian: o-ok
H: well sadly this is my life since my family got killed by assasains and i got adopted by the guard captain....
I WILL KILL EVERY ASSASAIN IN THE WORLD
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): when Sir H was still a kid he was having a normal boy life, one day he got back from the school
and he saw an assasain killing his fathers, he ran away and the guard captain found him, adopted him and trainned him for the duty.
The years passed and he now have 19 years and he still remember that assasain exactly, and he will not rest till he have his head
Other
What is Roleplay?: Is when you create a fiction character and you act like him, be him, etc
What is Metagaming?: is when you use your info that you character does not know but you know
What is Powergaming?: is when someone tries to control other character roles
What is Assassin's Creed?: Is a saga of games, assasains creed is well know for its exactly recreation of history
what it means? its not fiction its based on the real history
Role-Play Exp.: I have played a lot of roleplaying servers, but they were either too laggy or had only 1-3 people online at a time. Most of them did not seem interesting, but Assassin's Creep seems like a very good server. I love the Assassin's Creed series, and I own all the games.
Why Us: There are no other assassin's creed RPG minecraft servers that I can find and the OP was very interesting. I would love to play on this server and have Assassin's creed style RPG. I love parkour, and jumping across rooftops would be awesome.
Time You Can Dedicate:I can play a lot on the weekends, about 2-3 hours every day on the weekends, and maybe about 1 hour on the weekdays(-5 EST)
Have you played Assassin's Creed?
As I have said, I own all the games and have finished the campaign. It was very fun, and I loved to parkour/free run.
IC
Name: Cypher
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Fears: Torture, Tight spaces, Drowning
Personality: Friendly, outgoing, Wise, courageous
Skills: Archery, traps, close combat, freerunning
Nickname (Optional):
RP Example (Add Dialogue):
Cypher: But Brother, ... we need food and money. How.. How will we get it? The only way is to hunt, and you know I'm very good at that. We must go in the city, and sell a portion of our food. There's no point trying to find our way back, maybe after we have food and some money.
Skin (Link, picture, description):
Connor Kenway skin, but an edited face made by me. The face if bright peach, with blue eyes and brown hair.
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs):
When me and and my brother Zypher(My real brother will post an app for Zypher) were young, we liked exploring and making maps, although they were a bit, well, a lot different from the real terrain. We mastered our mapping skills at age 8, with a lot of practice. Then, we learned how to hunt in case our parents weren't home. I was better at using the bow, while my brother was better at just running or stealthly approaching an animal and just killing it with a close combat weapon. I learned how to set snares, while my brother learned how to fight with a real sword. After that, we loved climbing onto trees and jumping from branch to branch while hunting. We often raced each other. Zypher would jump down and kill the animal with one blow, while I would use my bow to take it down.
One day, when we were 18, we accidently left the hunting region our parents assigned us. We tried to turn back, but it seems we went the wrong direction. We had no idea where we were, we didn't have any compasses. After walking for a few hours, we saw some lights. We raced each other there, and it turned out to be a city/village.
Other
What is Roleplay?
Roleplay is when we act as a real or fake character. We talk like them, act like them, and make decisions. Another way to say it would be that we play a role.
What is Metagaming?
Metagaming is the use of information that is not part of the game to make in-game decisions. That means using guides or rulesbooks to have an unfair advantage.
What is Powergaming?
Powergaming is using unfair ways to win or be overpowered in a game. Controlling people might also be another way. It is also using mods or hacks to make the game unfair. Powergamers also try to level up faster by doing things that give higher xp, and skipping lower xp missions/quests.
What is Assassin's Creed?
Assassin's Creed is about assassins trying to prevent Templars from taking over the world. The templars want people to be united, and want the "Pieces/Apples of Eden" to do so. Desmond Miles, an modern day assassin goes through the Animus made by modern day Templars, to relive the lives of his ancestors so the templars can find apples of eden. Desmond escapes, and uses an Assassin made animus to find pieces of eden so that the Templars would not find them.
It is a free roam game, and has a lot of stealth and freerunning involved.
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Role-Play Exp.: Played lots of roleplaying servers
Why Us: I love Assassin's Creed and I have been looking for a RP server that was good. I love parkour and I think jumping around on buildings will be an exciting experience.
Time You Can Dedicate: Weekends- About 2-3 hours Weekdays- 1 hour
Have you played Assassin's Creed? Yes I own all games and I have finished all of it.
IC
Name:Zypher
Gender:Male
Age: 18
Fears: Torture, Tight spaces
Personality: Wise, Courageous,Brave
Skills: Close Combat, Archery, Sword Fighting, Freerunning
RP Example: "There is no way we are going to take down all those guards" says Charlie. "We won't know until we try." I reply and we charge.
Skin: An Assassin skin(Connor's suit) with an edited face. ( I can change it if you want me to)
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): When me and my brother,Cypher,( my real brother will post an app for Cypher)were small, we loved to climb trees and jump from branch to branch. We also loved making maps. We mastered our mapping skills at age 8 with years of practice. Then we learned how to hunt, in case our parents weren't home. My brother,Cypher, is really good at using a bow. I am good at using a close combat weapon and charging at my target. My favourite weapon is my sword. My brother learned how to use snares so we got more food. We often race each other to an animal and see who kills it first. I will just jump off the tree and kill the animal, while Cypher will use his bow.
We hunted for a serveral years. At the age of 18, we accidentally left the hunting region our parent assigned us. We tried to find our way back, but we had no maps with us. We saw light and we raced each other there.
Other
What is Roleplay? Roleplay is when you act as a fake or real character. We have to think like them and act like them.
What is Metagaming? Metagaming is when players find out information that they are not suppose to know.
What is Powergaming? Powergaming is when you play a game for a long period of time, to have a unfair advantage. An example is when a player games for a long time trying to achieve something.
What is Assassin's Creed? Assassin's Creed is an game where you can free roam and you do other missions other than the main mission. You get to roam the maps. All Assassin's Creed games are about stopping the Templars *
I Have Been Temporarily Banned For Ten Years Because I Assumed Chauk Was Hiding Something. Explanation Please And I Just Learned I Have Been Banned For Bad Role-play And Repeated Use Of Meta Gaming Considering This Is The First Time I Logged On In Months. Give Me A Break
I Have Been Temporarily Banned For Ten Years Because I Assumed Chauk Was Hiding Something. Explanation Please
First, you started hunting the Assassin's because you caught a glimpse of their symbol and became inexplicably obsessed with it.
Second, you started to randomly run around town essentially stopping everyone you saw and asking "Job pl0x".
Third, you walked up to me and began asking strange questions that made no sense IC, then commented on my clothes being odd even though A: They were very civilian-esc, and B: Your clothes were in fact very similar. As well as thinking it strange for someone to lock their basement when they keep valuables in it.
Summary: Excessive meta-gaming and just a lot of generally terrible role play.
First, you started hunting the Assassin's because you caught a glimpse of their symbol and became inexplicably obsessed with it.
Second, you started to randomly run around town essentially stopping everyone you saw and asking "Job pl0x".
Third, you walked up to me and began asking strange questions that made no sense IC, then commented on my clothes being odd even though A: They were very civilian-esc, and B: Your clothes were in fact very similar.
Summary: Excessive meta-gaming and just a lot of generally terrible role play.
I Am Dearly Sorry That You Were wearing Clothes From 1775 And That i Was Looking For A Job To Get Florins to feed Myself Isnt Odd. And Im Dearly Sorry That My Character Was Wondering What A Symbol Meant That He Had Never Seen Before In His Life.If You Could Please Give Me One More Chance I Promise I Will Not Disappoint
I Am Dearly Sorry That You Were wearing Clothes From 1775 And That i Was Looking For A Job To Get Florins to feed Myself Isnt Odd. And Im Dearly Sorry That My Character Was Wondering What A Symbol Meant That He Had Never Seen Before In His Life.
It was "Young Ezio, Florentine Noble Attire" clothing. I.E. circa 1476
You were wandering around asking every person you saw for a job in an odd way.
The symbol is such an insignificant thing nobody would notice.
Now to add to the reasons: Arguing with staff, and being snotty about it.
I Am Dearly Sorry That You Were wearing Clothes From 1775 And That i Was Looking For A Job To Get Florins to feed Myself Isnt Odd. And Im Dearly Sorry That My Character Was Wondering What A Symbol Meant That He Had Never Seen Before In His Life.
Side note on what Chauck/MrMe said: It might just be me, however capitalizing the first letter of EVERY word you type bothers me, and seems quite unprofessional to others. Good grammar is important in roleplay, to help convey what you are saying, as well making yourself seem like a mature person. Not only this, but you acted quite unlike a citizen would. I'm not positive, however I believe citizens did not go up to random houses that they see with people in them banging on the windows asking for a job. Acting as a normal citizen would is also important considering the time period and atmosphere of the server. If your argument to the comment is he's starving or out of work, I doubt people would go to random houses. They would most likely ask people on the streets like the beggars in the game asking for money. Next, the meta. A few things were said OOC about Chauck and the assassins, and linking the symbol to him and no one else you met is indeed meta-gaming. I also am puzzled by you thinking that making a relatively smart-ass comment would do you any good. Arguing with those in power generally is a bad idea, especially when you have meta-gamed as well as role played improperly. I understand you may think you have valid reasoning for your actions, however we are a serious role play server and take meta-gaming, roleplaying, and other essential parts of a role play system quite seriously. Role playing isn't something for everyone. Some people just have to get used to it, and do something else.
It was "Young Ezio, Florentine Noble Attire" clothing. I.E. circa 1476
You were wandering around asking every person you saw for a job in an odd way.
The symbol is such an insignificant thing nobody would notice.
Now to add to the reasons: Arguing with staff, and being snotty about it.
After that smart-ass reply, no.
Im Afraid I was The One In The Florentine Ezio Attire. Describe Odd Way "Pardon Me Messer, Do You Have Any Work I Can Do?" Nobody would notice eh? Considering Italy At The Time Had Alot Of Symbols Most were Commonly Seen At The Time But The Assassins Crest Stands Out In My characters Point Of View Im Sorry I was Role Playing
Role-Play Exp.: Quite a bit (Haven't RP'd in a while, so my skills are a little rusty)
Why Us: Because all other servers are the same, this one was differnt, therefore interesting
Time You Can Dedicate: Depends on my school workload.
Have you played Assassin's Creed?: Yes, but not very often, I'm only on memory block 3(Damn School work)
IC
Name: Dante Megrory
Gender: Male
Age: 27
Fears: The Unknown
Personality: Dante is a douche to most, but if you really know him, he's a rather nice guy
Skills: Stealth and Stealing
Nickname (Optional): Shadowfoot
RP Example (Add Dialogue):
(Plot: Dante enlisted with a group of rich mercs for cash)
Group Leader: Alright we will make our frontal assault through the sewers, after that,
we blow a small hole in the wall, exposing an area where we are able to sneak in...
Wheres Dante?
Random Guy in group: I dunno... Wait where is my cash... WHERES DANTE AND WHERES MY CASH?!?!
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Dante grew up in an area near Rome. It wasn't
uncommon is the Megrory household for the mother and father to be arguing,
constantly refering to their only child as a mistake. During most of these
arguments, Dante would climb out his window and jump, roof top, to roof top.
To his lovers house, yes, Dante was only 15. But both, the girl he loved, and
himself knew that they would be together. At age 18, his sweetheart was charged
the assassination of her father, and important political figure. Dante was with
her and knew that it was only some man in a white cloak. So he hatched a plan
to break her out of jail and then run away. All it required was gold, which Dante
didn't have. So he stole it, from peoples pockets, homes. Any small change, Dante wanted needed, to break his love out of jail. When he began his plot to break his
love out of jail. He found that she had broken out and already ran away. What Dante
didn't know is that he knew of his plan and where he would run away too. Dante,
heart broken, ran the other direction. Dedicated, he vowed that he would find a
way to get her back. All it required was gold, which he didn't have...
Other
What is Roleplay?: When you act as someone else with a different ROLE.
What is Metagaming?: Using out of game info to affect how you play.
What is Powergaming?: Making an over powered character to give your team an unfair advantage.
What is Assassin's Creed?: A game where a group of scientists use DNA memory to gain an artifact
(Again, Memory Block 3)
((I fixed all mistakes in the App))
Be more specific in your role play EXP.
Try to give an estimation as to how much time you can dedicate.
Need more than one fear.
The eyes on your skin... Kind of weird me out. Try fixing them to be more... Normal.
Your character may not know of, or be affiliated with the Assassins or Templars in the application.
Power-gaming is off, and you should expand your Assassin's Creed definition. Try using google if you haven't played the game much.
You're missing something, read the OP.
Time You Can Dedicate:i can spend long time in weekends and some between it
Have you played Assassin's Creed?: yep the 2, revelations and now im playing the 3
IC
Name: Sir H
Gender: male
Age: 19
Fears: the high places and the assasains
Personality: strong, silent and very though
Skills: swordmaster, intelligence and good movement in weight armors
Nickname (Optional): H just H
RP Example (Add Dialogue): [a civilian runs to sir H] p-please an assasain appeared help us!, he killed my sister
H: ok i will be on my way just go search a safe place ok sir?
Civilian: o-ok
H: well sadly this is my life since my family got killed by assasains and i got adopted by the guard captain....
I WILL KILL EVERY ASSASAIN IN THE WORLD
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): when Sir H was still a kid he was having a normal boy life, one day he got back from the school
and he saw an assasain killing his fathers, he ran away and the guard captain found him, adopted him and trainned him for the duty.
The years passed and he now have 19 years and he still remember that assasain exactly, and he will not rest till he have his head
Other
What is Roleplay?: Is when you create a fiction character and you act like him, be him, etc
What is Metagaming?: is when you use your info that you character does not know but you know
What is Powergaming?: is when someone tries to control other character roles
What is Assassin's Creed?: Is a saga of games, assasains creed is well know for its exactly recreation of history
what it means? its not fiction its based on the real history
Try to estimate how much time you can dedicate, in hours per day/week.
You need a real name. "Sir H" can be his nick name.
Your character can not know of, or be affiliated with the Assassins/Templars in the application. Therefore they cannot be a fear, if he does not know they exist.
In your personality... What is "Very though"? I'm assuming a typo, but it could be "thorough", "thoughtful" or anything like that. Just being sure.
You need a skin appropriate for the 15th century. This is the Renaissance, not the Dark Ages.
I have to deny your back story for the same reason as your fears. In the redo, please make a longer back story as well.
try expanding your last 3 definitions, and in meta/power-gaming, try to include examples so we know that you know what you're talking about.
Your missing something, read the OP.
Role-Play Exp.: Played lots of roleplaying servers
Why Us: I love Assassin's Creed and I have been looking for a RP server that was good. I love parkour and I think jumping around on buildings will be an exciting experience.
Time You Can Dedicate: Weekends- About 2-3 hours Weekdays- 1 hour
Have you played Assassin's Creed? Yes I own all games and I have finished all of it.
IC
Name:Zypher
Gender:Male
Age: 18
Fears: Torture, Tight spaces
Personality: Wise, Courageous,Brave
Skills: Close Combat, Archery, Sword Fighting, Freerunning
RP Example: "There is no way we are going to take down all those guards" says Charlie. "We won't know until we try." I reply and we charge.
Skin: An Assassin skin(Connor's suit) with an edited face. ( I can change it if you want me to)
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): When me and my brother,Cypher,( my real brother will post an app for Cypher)were small, we loved to climb trees and jump from branch to branch. We also loved making maps. We mastered our mapping skills at age 8 with years of practice. Then we learned how to hunt, in case our parents weren't home. My brother,Cypher, is really good at using a bow. I am good at using a close combat weapon and charging at my target. My favourite weapon is my sword. My brother learned how to use snares so we got more food. We often race each other to an animal and see who kills it first. I will just jump off the tree and kill the animal, while Cypher will use his bow.
We hunted for a serveral years. At the age of 18, we accidentally left the hunting region our parent assigned us. We tried to find our way back, but we had no maps with us. We saw light and we raced each other there.
Other
What is Roleplay? Roleplay is when you act as a fake or real character. We have to think like them and act like them.
What is Metagaming? Metagaming is when players find out information that they are not suppose to know.
What is Powergaming? Powergaming is when you play a game for a long period of time, to have a unfair advantage. An example is when a player games for a long time trying to achieve something.
What is Assassin's Creed? Assassin's Creed is an game where you can free roam and you do other missions other than the main mission. You get to roam the maps. All Assassin's Creed games are about stopping the Templars
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Be more specific in your role play EXP.
Need a last name.
Narrow down your skill set. You're giving your character essentially every basic skill. There has to be trade-offs. If you were busy training with a sword, when did you find the time to learn how to use a bow? And so on. Your character is young as well, making this even less likely.
Yes, change your skin. Your character can not know of, or be affiliated with the Assassins/Templars in the application, and so you cannot wear Assassin clothing.
Map making is not easy task. An 8 year old cannot master it.
You (and your brother) should consider redoing your back stories. You're essentially making yourselves Connor and his friend, Kanen'tó:kon. Try to be original.
Power-gaming is off, and your meta-gaming could use some work.
Role-Play Exp.: I have played a lot of roleplaying servers, but they were either too laggy or had only 1-3 people online at a time. Most of them did not seem interesting, but Assassin's Creep seems like a very good server. I love the Assassin's Creed series, and I own all the games.
Why Us: There are no other assassin's creed RPG minecraft servers that I can find and the OP was very interesting. I would love to play on this server and have Assassin's creed style RPG. I love parkour, and jumping across rooftops would be awesome.
Time You Can Dedicate:I can play a lot on the weekends, about 2-3 hours every day on the weekends, and maybe about 1 hour on the weekdays(-5 EST)
Have you played Assassin's Creed?
As I have said, I own all the games and have finished the campaign. It was very fun, and I loved to parkour/free run.
IC
Name: Cypher
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Fears: Torture, Tight spaces, Drowning
Personality: Friendly, outgoing, Wise, courageous
Skills: Archery, traps, close combat, freerunning
Nickname (Optional):
RP Example (Add Dialogue):
Cypher: But Brother, ... we need food and money. How.. How will we get it? The only way is to hunt, and you know I'm very good at that. We must go in the city, and sell a portion of our food. There's no point trying to find our way back, maybe after we have food and some money.
Skin (Link, picture, description):
Connor Kenway skin, but an edited face made by me. The face if bright peach, with blue eyes and brown hair.
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs):
When me and and my brother Zypher(My real brother will post an app for Zypher) were young, we liked exploring and making maps, although they were a bit, well, a lot different from the real terrain. We mastered our mapping skills at age 8, with a lot of practice. Then, we learned how to hunt in case our parents weren't home. I was better at using the bow, while my brother was better at just running or stealthly approaching an animal and just killing it with a close combat weapon. I learned how to set snares, while my brother learned how to fight with a real sword. After that, we loved climbing onto trees and jumping from branch to branch while hunting. We often raced each other. Zypher would jump down and kill the animal with one blow, while I would use my bow to take it down.
One day, when we were 18, we accidently left the hunting region our parents assigned us. We tried to turn back, but it seems we went the wrong direction. We had no idea where we were, we didn't have any compasses. After walking for a few hours, we saw some lights. We raced each other there, and it turned out to be a city/village.
Other
What is Roleplay?
Roleplay is when we act as a real or fake character. We talk like them, act like them, and make decisions. Another way to say it would be that we play a role.
What is Metagaming?
Metagaming is the use of information that is not part of the game to make in-game decisions. That means using guides or rulesbooks to have an unfair advantage.
What is Powergaming?
Powergaming is using unfair ways to win or be overpowered in a game. Controlling people might also be another way. It is also using mods or hacks to make the game unfair. Powergamers also try to level up faster by doing things that give higher xp, and skipping lower xp missions/quests.
What is Assassin's Creed?
Assassin's Creed is about assassins trying to prevent Templars from taking over the world. The templars want people to be united, and want the "Pieces/Apples of Eden" to do so. Desmond Miles, an modern day assassin goes through the Animus made by modern day Templars, to relive the lives of his ancestors so the templars can find apples of eden. Desmond escapes, and uses an Assassin made animus to find pieces of eden so that the Templars would not find them.
It is a free roam game, and has a lot of stealth and freerunning involved.
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Need a last name.
Same issue with the skills as your brother.
Same issue with the skin as your brother.
Exact same back story, and so again, same issue as your brother.
There's a small section of your power-gaming definition that has what we're looking for. There are a few definitions, and we're looking for a certain one.
IGN: teambuild79
Age:11
Role-Play: Not A lot
Why Us?: Because it looks like a good role playing server.
Time You Can Dedicate: About 2 Hours
IC
Name: Rodney
Age: 20
Appearance: Only his mouth is visible, long white robes (Like a proper assassin)
Fears: getting Caught, when he is outnumbered, spiders
Personality: Sense of Humor, Social
Occupation: Assassin
Skills: stealth, speed, sword fighting
RP Example: Sorry but i don't know what that is
BackStory: I lived with my father until i was 10, i was never told how he died but my brother, Keith, looked after me until i was 16 then i was on the street because of an argument me and Keith had. A BIG argument. An assassin found me and took me to his home. He has been training me in sword fighting every day and night until Marco (the assassin) was sent of on a mission and got into deep trouble. I don't know how i knew but i ran as fast as i could and saved him from all those Templars. I became a proper assassin from then on.
OTHER
What is Role Play?
Role play is when you pretend to be a person or character.
What is Metagaming?
It is when you use out of game information to make in game decisions.
What is Power Gaming?
when you become overpowered and give your team an unfair advantage.
What is assassins creed?
You are Desmond who is a modern assassin who is in an assassin animus to make sure that the templars do not get the apple of eden.
It looks to me like you filled out your application based on another application from the beginning of the thread. The format has changed a bit, so reread the OP and redo the application.
Role-Play Exp.: I've played on 4 RP servers, easily 20 hrs+ on game play on each
Why Us: Because all other servers are the same, this one was different, therefore interesting
Time You Can Dedicate: 2-3 hours every other day
Have you played Assassin's Creed?: Yes, but not very often, I'm only on memory block 3(Damn School work)
IC
Name: Dante Megrory
Gender: Male
Age: 27
Fears: The Unknown, Death
Personality: Dante is a douche to most, but if you really know him, he's a rather nice guy
Skills: Stealth and Stealing
Nickname (Optional): Shadowfoot
RP Example (Add Dialogue):
(Plot: Dante enlisted with a group of rich mercs for cash)
Group Leader: Alright we will make our frontal assault through the sewers, after that,
we blow a small hole in the wall, exposing an area where we are able to sneak in...
Wheres Dante?
Random Guy in group: I dunno... Wait where is my cash... WHERES DANTE AND WHERES MY CASH?!?!
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Dante grew up in an area near Rome. It wasn't
uncommon is the Megrory household for the mother and father to be arguing,
constantly refering to their only child as a mistake. During most of these
arguments, Dante would climb out his window and jump, roof top, to roof top.
To his lovers house, yes, Dante was only 15. But both, the girl he loved, and
himself knew that they would be together. At age 18, his sweetheart was charged
the assassination of her father, and important political figure. Dante was with
her and knew that it was only some man in a white cloak. So he hatched a plan
to break her out of jail and then run away. All it required was gold, which Dante
didn't have. So he stole it, from peoples pockets, homes. Any small change, Dante wanted needed, to break his love out of jail. When he began his plot to break his
love out of jail. He found that she had broken out and already ran away. What Dante
didn't know is that he knew of his plan and where he would run away too. Dante,
heart broken, ran the other direction. Dedicated, he vowed that he would find a
way to get her back. All it required was gold, which he didn't have...
Other
What is Roleplay?: When you act as someone else with a different ROLE.
What is Metagaming?: Using out of game info to affect how you play.
What is Powergaming?: Making an over powered character to give your team an unfair advantage/ taking control
of other's characters
What is Assassin's Creed?: A game where a group of scientists(Templars) use DNA memory to gain artifacts
(Piece's of Eden) in order to get control of humanity
((I fixed all mistakes in the App, Also the Cloak on my skin is the cloak Dante wears to avoid being seen, it was not not modeled after the assassin's cloak))
* <-- I knew I forgot something
I suppose the skin is acceptable, if not a litte odd for a civilian... Though I'll just let you know right now: Skincraft isn't a very good editor
You still have the clear references to Assassins in your back story. My comment about Assassins in the review had absolutely nothing to do with your skin. I actually preferred your old skin; it was more like a civilian.
Power-gaming is still a bit off. There are a few definitions of the word, and we're looking for a certain one.
I suppose the skin is acceptable, if not a litte odd for a civilian... Though I'll just let you know right now: Skincraft isn't a very good editor
You still have the clear references to Assassins in your back story. My comment about Assassins in the review had absolutely nothing to do with your skin. I actually preferred your old skin; it was more like a civilian.
Power-gaming is still a bit off. There are a few definitions of the word, and we're looking for a certain one.
Oh, I now see how you think I was referencing the Assassins. Nah, what I meant was that a lunatic had snuck into the guys house and killed him.
But I can fix that. Oh and, how did you know I used SkinCraft?
OOC
IGN:FailMineman
Age:14
Role-Play Exp.: I've played on 4 RP servers, easily 20 hrs+ on game play on each
Why Us: Because all other servers are the same, this one was different, therefore interesting
Time You Can Dedicate: 2-3 hours every other day (Or every day, my school workload is lessening, new schedules and stuff like that)
Have you played Assassin's Creed?: Yes, but not very often, I'm only on memory block 3(Damn School work)
IC
Name: Dante Megrory
Gender: Male
Age: 27
Fears: The Unknown, Death
Personality: Dante is a douche to most, but if you really know him, he's a rather nice guy
Skills: Stealth and Stealing
Nickname (Optional): Shadowfoot
RP Example (Add Dialogue):
(Plot: Dante enlisted with a group of rich mercs for cash)
Group Leader: Alright we will make our frontal assault through the sewers, after that,
we blow a small hole in the wall, exposing an area where we are able to sneak in...
Wheres Dante?
Random Guy in group: I dunno... Wait where is my cash... WHERES DANTE AND WHERES MY CASH?!?!
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Dante grew up in an area near Rome. It wasn't
uncommon is the Megrory household for the mother and father to be arguing,
constantly refering to their only child as a mistake. During most of these
arguments, Dante would climb out his window and jump, roof top, to roof top.
To his lovers house, yes, Dante was only 15. But both, the girl he loved, and
himself knew that they would be together. At age 18, his sweetheart was charged
the assassination of her father, an important political figure. Dante was with
her and knew that it was only some lunatic who had studied her home.So he
hatched a plan to break her out of jail and then run away. All it required was gold,
which Dante didn't have. So he stole it, from peoples pockets, homes. Any small
change, Dante wanted needed, to break his love out of jail. When he began his plot
to break his love out of jail. He found that she had broken out and already ran away.
What Dante didn't know is that he knew of his plan and where he would run away too.
Dante, heart broken, ran the other direction. Dedicated, he vowed that he would find a
way to get her back. All it required was gold, which he didn't have...
Other
What is Roleplay?: When you act as someone else with a different ROLE.
What is Metagaming?: Using out of game info to affect how you play.
What is Powergaming?: Making an over powered character to give your team an unfair advantage/ taking control
of other's characters/playing with intent of maximizing progress for a certain goal.
What is Assassin's Creed?: A game where a group of scientists(Templars) use DNA memory to gain artifacts
(Piece's of Eden) in order to get control of humanity
Im Afraid I was The One In The Florentine Ezio Attire. Describe Odd Way "Pardon Me Messer, Do You Have Any Work I Can Do?" Nobody would notice eh? Considering Italy At The Time Had Alot Of Symbols Most were Commonly Seen At The Time But The Assassins Crest Stands Out In My characters Point Of View Im Sorry I was Role Playing
I am not a mod, only a whitelister, but it's clear to me that you are in the wrong, and defending yourself isn't going to help you get back onto the server at all.
Role-Play Exp.:None in minecraft, but plenty in other games. I love to role-play, it really gets me into the game and leaves me begging for more, acceptance to this server would be outstanding, for it seems to be quite interesting.
Why Us:I found this on a "top 10" forum page I watched the video they posted and it seemed amazing. The community, idea, and plugins seemed great and really made me want to join.
Time You Can Dedicate: 2-6 daily, I have plenty of time during the day and at night to play.
Have you played Assassin's Creed? A bit, I have watched plenty of videos and know the basics of it.
IC
Name: Vince (never revelas his last name, unless it gets me into the server )
Gender: Male
Age: 27
Fears: Prison, civilians getting in the way of completing a job.
Personality: Lively and fun out of work, deadly and fierce while on a job.
Skills: Climbing, Assassination.
Nickname (Optional): Ghost (leaves a small bussiness card with a hooded figure looking back, card is black, all it says on it is "ghost") only referred to by ghost to people who discover the after math of an assassination.
RP Example (Add Dialogue): Employer assigns an assasination job.
Employer: Bart, the tailor has been in some... mischief lately. He knows information that could shut our major supply depot's down. I want him... out of the picture, so to speak.
Vince: slow, or quick? and with what?
Employer: Garrot wire, do it fast and hide the body.
Vince: what's the payment?
Employer $5,000 now, five more when its done.
Vince: give me three days, and your problem will be gone.
I am looking for a new skin, this one is a bit strange, if I find a better one I will put it in. I will most likely be wearing all black leather most of the time, looking for more of a civillian looking skin so that I can keep my identity concealed. Edit: I found a new skin, its a man with a normal face, little scruff, brown eyes, he is a man wearing victorian clothing.
Skin (Link, picture, description):http://www.minecraft...0/dark-assasin/
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs):Raised in a family of assasins, Young Vince never had much time with his mother, or sisters. A family of five, vince being the youngest of three children and the only boy, he strived to make his father proud. after each mission, his father would take him out into the yard, shooting bows, fighting with wooden swords, and even showing him a how to use leather to create his own armor, and dye it black using the ink sacks form squids. When he was 15, Vince's father never came home. He waited for days but never heard word from him. A letter was sent to him, bearing his fathers name. It read, "Son, if you are reading this I have been killed or captured in action, this letter has been sent to you by my employer, and your future trainer. you will refer to him as your boss form here on. He will intruct you from here on. I am sorry son, I love you. sincerely, Your father."
Weeks past and no sign of the "Boss" showed, until one evening when Vince and his family were having dinner, and a knock on the door rung out. It was him, the boss, he took Vince and thanked his mother. That was the last he ever saw of this mother or sisters. He dedicated his like to his fathers work, and pledged to one day, take revenge on those who killed him father.
Other
What is Roleplay? Role playing is taking on the"role" of a different character. To act as though you yourself are in the game.
What is Metagaming? Metagaming is a term used to define any strategy, action or method used in a game which is from a game with a ruleset.
What is Powergaming? Powergaming is the form of playing a game with an aim of progressing or maximizing set goals.
What is Assassin's Creed? Assasins Creed is a historical-based action/assassin game, giving a beautiful free-world aspect to the game, taking on missions and ultimately, assassinating.
Oh, I now see how you think I was referencing the Assassins. Nah, what I meant was that a lunatic had snuck into the guys house and killed him.
But I can fix that. Oh and, how did you know I used SkinCraft?
OOC
IGN:FailMineman
Age:14
Role-Play Exp.: I've played on 4 RP servers, easily 20 hrs+ on game play on each
Why Us: Because all other servers are the same, this one was different, therefore interesting
Time You Can Dedicate: 2-3 hours every other day (Or every day, my school workload is lessening, new schedules and stuff like that)
Have you played Assassin's Creed?: Yes, but not very often, I'm only on memory block 3(Damn School work)
IC
Name: Dante Megrory
Gender: Male
Age: 27
Fears: The Unknown, Death
Personality: Dante is a douche to most, but if you really know him, he's a rather nice guy
Skills: Stealth and Stealing
Nickname (Optional): Shadowfoot
RP Example (Add Dialogue):
(Plot: Dante enlisted with a group of rich mercs for cash)
Group Leader: Alright we will make our frontal assault through the sewers, after that,
we blow a small hole in the wall, exposing an area where we are able to sneak in...
Wheres Dante?
Random Guy in group: I dunno... Wait where is my cash... WHERES DANTE AND WHERES MY CASH?!?!
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Dante grew up in an area near Rome. It wasn't
uncommon is the Megrory household for the mother and father to be arguing,
constantly refering to their only child as a mistake. During most of these
arguments, Dante would climb out his window and jump, roof top, to roof top.
To his lovers house, yes, Dante was only 15. But both, the girl he loved, and
himself knew that they would be together. At age 18, his sweetheart was charged
the assassination of her father, an important political figure. Dante was with
her and knew that it was only some lunatic who had studied her home.So he
hatched a plan to break her out of jail and then run away. All it required was gold,
which Dante didn't have. So he stole it, from peoples pockets, homes. Any small
change, Dante wanted needed, to break his love out of jail. When he began his plot
to break his love out of jail. He found that she had broken out and already ran away.
What Dante didn't know is that he knew of his plan and where he would run away too.
Dante, heart broken, ran the other direction. Dedicated, he vowed that he would find a
way to get her back. All it required was gold, which he didn't have...
Other
What is Roleplay?: When you act as someone else with a different ROLE.
What is Metagaming?: Using out of game info to affect how you play.
What is Powergaming?: Making an over powered character to give your team an unfair advantage/ taking control
of other's characters/playing with intent of maximizing progress for a certain goal.
What is Assassin's Creed?: A game where a group of scientists(Templars) use DNA memory to gain artifacts
(Piece's of Eden) in order to get control of humanity
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Back story doesn't make a whole lot of sense... I suppose it's not deniable, though.
You still have the same power-gaming definition as before. It's partially right. Just a small part.
Role-Play Exp.:None in minecraft, but plenty in other games. I love to role-play, it really gets me into the game and leaves me begging for more, acceptance to this server would be outstanding, for it seems to be quite interesting.
Why Us:I found this on a "top 10" forum page I watched the video they posted and it seemed amazing. The community, idea, and plugins seemed great and really made me want to join.
Time You Can Dedicate: 2-6 daily, I have plenty of time during the day and at night to play.
Have you played Assassin's Creed? A bit, I have watched plenty of videos and know the basics of it.
IC
Name: Vince (never revelas his last name, unless it gets me into the server file:///C:\Users\Dylan\AppData\Local\Temp\msohtmlclip1\01\clip_image002.gif )
Gender: Male
Age: 27
Fears: Prison, civilians getting in the way of completing a job.
Personality: Lively and fun out of work, deadly and fierce while on a job.
Skills: Climbing, Assassination.
Nickname (Optional): Ghost (leaves a small bussiness card with a hooded figure looking back, card is black, all it says on it is "ghost") only referred to by ghost to people who discover the after math of an assassination.
RP Example (Add Dialogue): Employer assigns an assasination job.
Employer: Bart, the tailor has been in some... mischief lately. He knows information that could shut our major supply depot's down. I want him... out of the picture, so to speak.
Vince: slow, or quick? and with what?
Employer: Garrot wire, do it fast and hide the body.
Vince: what's the payment?
Employer $5,000 now, five more when its done.
Vince: give me three days, and your problem will be gone.
I am looking for a new skin, this one is a bit strange, if I find a better one I will put it in. I will most likely be wearing all black leather most of the time, looking for more of a civillian looking skin so that I can keep my identity concealed.
Edit: I found a new skin, its a man with a normal face, little scruff, brown eyes, he is a man wearing victorian clothing.
Skin (Link, picture, description):http://www.minecraft...0/dark-assasin/
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs):Raised in a family of assasins, Young Vince never had much time with his mother, or sisters. A family of five, vince being the youngest of three children and the only boy, he strived to make his father proud. after each mission, his father would take him out into the yard, shooting bows, fighting with wooden swords, and even showing him a how to use leather to create his own armor, and dye it black using the ink sacks form squids. When he was 15, Vince's father never came home. He waited for days but never heard word from him. A letter was sent to him, bearing his fathers name. It read, "Son, if you are reading this I have been killed or captured in action, this letter has been sent to you by my employer, and your future trainer. you will refer to him as your boss form here on. He will intruct you from here on. I am sorry son, I love you. sincerely, Your father."
Weeks past and no sign of the "Boss" showed, until one evening when Vince and his family were having dinner, and a knock on the door rung out. It was him, the boss, he took Vince and thanked his mother. That was the last he ever saw of this mother or sisters. He dedicated his like to his fathers work, and pledged to one day, take revenge on those who killed him father.
Other
What is Roleplay? Role playing is taking on the"role" of a different character. To act as though you yourself are in the game.
What is Metagaming? Metagaming is a term used to define any strategy, action or method used in a game which is from a game with a ruleset.
What is Powergaming? Powergaming is the form of playing a game with an aim of progressing or maximizing set goals.
What is Assassin's Creed? Assasins Creed is a historical-based action/assassin game, giving a beautiful free-world aspect to the game, taking on missions and ultimately, assassinating.
Thanks for reading my app. *
You do need a last name.
Your character may not know of, or be affiliated with the Assassins/Templars. Meaning, you pretty much have to redo your entire IC section, including the skin.
Meta/power-gaming definitions are wrong.
I am not a mod, only a whitelister, but it's clear to me that you are in the wrong, and defending yourself isn't going to help you get back onto the server at all.
I'm completely fine with him trying to defend himself; it's the smart-ass attitude with which he did it that ruined his chances.
IGN:FailMineman
Age:14
Role-Play Exp.: Quite a bit (Haven't RP'd in a while, so my skills are a little rusty)
Why Us: Because all other servers are the same, this one was differnt, therefore interesting
Time You Can Dedicate: Depends on my school workload.
Have you played Assassin's Creed?: Yes, but not very often, I'm only on memory block 3(Damn School work)
IC
Name: Dante Megrory
Gender: Male
Age: 27
Fears: The Unknown
Personality: Dante is a douche to most, but if you really know him, he's a rather nice guy
Skills: Stealth, Stealing, and Parkour
Nickname (Optional): Shadowfoot
RP Example (Add Dialogue):
(Plot: Dante enlisted with a group of rich mercs for cash)
Group Leader: Alright we will make our frontal assault through the sewers, after that,
we blow a small hole in the wall, exposing an area where we are able to sneak in...
Wheres Dante?
Random Guy in group: I dunno... Wait where is my cash... WHERES DANTE AND WHERES MY CASH?!?!
Skin (Link, picture, description):http://i1108.photobucket.com/albums/h405/NewbsLetter/Dante.png
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Dante grew up in an area near Rome. It wasn't
uncommon is the Megrory household for the mother and father to be arguing,
constantly refering to their only child as a mistake. During most of these
arguments, Dante would climb out his window and jump, roof top, to roof top.
To his lovers house, yes, Dante was only 15. But both, the girl he loved, and
himself knew that they would be together. At age 18, his sweetheart was charged
the assassination of her father, and important political figure. Dante was with
her and knew that it was only some man in a white cloak. So he hatched a plan
to break her out of jail and then run away. All it required was gold, which Dante
didn't have. So he stole it, from peoples pockets, homes. Any small change, Dante
wantedneeded, to break his love out of jail. When he began his plot to break hislove out of jail. He found that she had broken out and already ran away. What Dante
didn't know is that he knew of his plan and where he would run away too. Dante,
heart broken, ran the other direction. Dedicated, he vowed that he would find a
way to get her back. All it required was gold, which he didn't have...
Other
What is Roleplay?: When you act as someone else with a different ROLE.
What is Metagaming?: Using out of game info to affect how you play.
What is Powergaming?: Making an over powered character to give your team an unfair advantage.
What is Assassin's Creed?: A game where a group of scientists use DNA memory to gain an artifact
(Again, Memory Block 3)
((I fixed all mistakes in the App))
Age: 15
Role-Play Exp.: 3 servers, but they closed
Why Us: I like the assasains creed thematic
Time You Can Dedicate:i can spend long time in weekends and some between it
Have you played Assassin's Creed?: yep the 2, revelations and now im playing the 3
IC
Name: Sir H
Gender: male
Age: 19
Fears: the high places and the assasains
Personality: strong, silent and very though
Skills: swordmaster, intelligence and good movement in weight armors
Nickname (Optional): H just H
RP Example (Add Dialogue): [a civilian runs to sir H] p-please an assasain appeared help us!, he killed my sister
H: ok i will be on my way just go search a safe place ok sir?
Civilian: o-ok
H: well sadly this is my life since my family got killed by assasains and i got adopted by the guard captain....
I WILL KILL EVERY ASSASAIN IN THE WORLD
Skin (Link, picture, description): http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=k03fjm&s=6
It is a black old armor, he uses it everytime
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): when Sir H was still a kid he was having a normal boy life, one day he got back from the school
and he saw an assasain killing his fathers, he ran away and the guard captain found him, adopted him and trainned him for the duty.
The years passed and he now have 19 years and he still remember that assasain exactly, and he will not rest till he have his head
Other
What is Roleplay?: Is when you create a fiction character and you act like him, be him, etc
What is Metagaming?: is when you use your info that you character does not know but you know
What is Powergaming?: is when someone tries to control other character roles
What is Assassin's Creed?: Is a saga of games, assasains creed is well know for its exactly recreation of history
what it means? its not fiction its based on the real history
IGN: Andy6868
Age: 13
Role-Play Exp.: I have played a lot of roleplaying servers, but they were either too laggy or had only 1-3 people online at a time. Most of them did not seem interesting, but Assassin's Creep seems like a very good server. I love the Assassin's Creed series, and I own all the games.
Why Us: There are no other assassin's creed RPG minecraft servers that I can find and the OP was very interesting. I would love to play on this server and have Assassin's creed style RPG. I love parkour, and jumping across rooftops would be awesome.
Time You Can Dedicate:I can play a lot on the weekends, about 2-3 hours every day on the weekends, and maybe about 1 hour on the weekdays(-5 EST)
Have you played Assassin's Creed?
As I have said, I own all the games and have finished the campaign. It was very fun, and I loved to parkour/free run.
IC
Name: Cypher
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Fears: Torture, Tight spaces, Drowning
Personality: Friendly, outgoing, Wise, courageous
Skills: Archery, traps, close combat, freerunning
Nickname (Optional):
RP Example (Add Dialogue):
Cypher: But Brother, ... we need food and money. How.. How will we get it? The only way is to hunt, and you know I'm very good at that. We must go in the city, and sell a portion of our food. There's no point trying to find our way back, maybe after we have food and some money.
Skin (Link, picture, description):
Connor Kenway skin, but an edited face made by me. The face if bright peach, with blue eyes and brown hair.
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs):
When me and and my brother Zypher(My real brother will post an app for Zypher) were young, we liked exploring and making maps, although they were a bit, well, a lot different from the real terrain. We mastered our mapping skills at age 8, with a lot of practice. Then, we learned how to hunt in case our parents weren't home. I was better at using the bow, while my brother was better at just running or stealthly approaching an animal and just killing it with a close combat weapon. I learned how to set snares, while my brother learned how to fight with a real sword. After that, we loved climbing onto trees and jumping from branch to branch while hunting. We often raced each other. Zypher would jump down and kill the animal with one blow, while I would use my bow to take it down.
One day, when we were 18, we accidently left the hunting region our parents assigned us. We tried to turn back, but it seems we went the wrong direction. We had no idea where we were, we didn't have any compasses. After walking for a few hours, we saw some lights. We raced each other there, and it turned out to be a city/village.
Other
What is Roleplay?
Roleplay is when we act as a real or fake character. We talk like them, act like them, and make decisions. Another way to say it would be that we play a role.
What is Metagaming?
Metagaming is the use of information that is not part of the game to make in-game decisions. That means using guides or rulesbooks to have an unfair advantage.
What is Powergaming?
Powergaming is using unfair ways to win or be overpowered in a game. Controlling people might also be another way. It is also using mods or hacks to make the game unfair. Powergamers also try to level up faster by doing things that give higher xp, and skipping lower xp missions/quests.
What is Assassin's Creed?
Assassin's Creed is about assassins trying to prevent Templars from taking over the world. The templars want people to be united, and want the "Pieces/Apples of Eden" to do so. Desmond Miles, an modern day assassin goes through the Animus made by modern day Templars, to relive the lives of his ancestors so the templars can find apples of eden. Desmond escapes, and uses an Assassin made animus to find pieces of eden so that the Templars would not find them.
It is a free roam game, and has a lot of stealth and freerunning involved.
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IGN:minecrafter6868
Age:13
Role-Play Exp.: Played lots of roleplaying servers
Why Us: I love Assassin's Creed and I have been looking for a RP server that was good. I love parkour and I think jumping around on buildings will be an exciting experience.
Time You Can Dedicate: Weekends- About 2-3 hours Weekdays- 1 hour
Have you played Assassin's Creed? Yes I own all games and I have finished all of it.
IC
Name:Zypher
Gender:Male
Age: 18
Fears: Torture, Tight spaces
Personality: Wise, Courageous,Brave
Skills: Close Combat, Archery, Sword Fighting, Freerunning
RP Example: "There is no way we are going to take down all those guards" says Charlie. "We won't know until we try." I reply and we charge.
Skin: An Assassin skin(Connor's suit) with an edited face. ( I can change it if you want me to)
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): When me and my brother,Cypher,( my real brother will post an app for Cypher)were small, we loved to climb trees and jump from branch to branch. We also loved making maps. We mastered our mapping skills at age 8 with years of practice. Then we learned how to hunt, in case our parents weren't home. My brother,Cypher, is really good at using a bow. I am good at using a close combat weapon and charging at my target. My favourite weapon is my sword. My brother learned how to use snares so we got more food. We often race each other to an animal and see who kills it first. I will just jump off the tree and kill the animal, while Cypher will use his bow.
We hunted for a serveral years. At the age of 18, we accidentally left the hunting region our parent assigned us. We tried to find our way back, but we had no maps with us. We saw light and we raced each other there.
Other
What is Roleplay? Roleplay is when you act as a fake or real character. We have to think like them and act like them.
What is Metagaming? Metagaming is when players find out information that they are not suppose to know.
What is Powergaming? Powergaming is when you play a game for a long period of time, to have a unfair advantage. An example is when a player games for a long time trying to achieve something.
What is Assassin's Creed? Assassin's Creed is an game where you can free roam and you do other missions other than the main mission. You get to roam the maps. All Assassin's Creed games are about stopping the Templars
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First, you started hunting the Assassin's because you caught a glimpse of their symbol and became inexplicably obsessed with it.
Second, you started to randomly run around town essentially stopping everyone you saw and asking "Job pl0x".
Third, you walked up to me and began asking strange questions that made no sense IC, then commented on my clothes being odd even though A: They were very civilian-esc, and B: Your clothes were in fact very similar. As well as thinking it strange for someone to lock their basement when they keep valuables in it.
Summary: Excessive meta-gaming and just a lot of generally terrible role play.
It was "Young Ezio, Florentine Noble Attire" clothing. I.E. circa 1476
You were wandering around asking every person you saw for a job in an odd way.
The symbol is such an insignificant thing nobody would notice.
Now to add to the reasons: Arguing with staff, and being snotty about it.
After that smart-ass reply, no.
Side note on what Chauck/MrMe said: It might just be me, however capitalizing the first letter of EVERY word you type bothers me, and seems quite unprofessional to others. Good grammar is important in roleplay, to help convey what you are saying, as well making yourself seem like a mature person. Not only this, but you acted quite unlike a citizen would. I'm not positive, however I believe citizens did not go up to random houses that they see with people in them banging on the windows asking for a job. Acting as a normal citizen would is also important considering the time period and atmosphere of the server. If your argument to the comment is he's starving or out of work, I doubt people would go to random houses. They would most likely ask people on the streets like the beggars in the game asking for money. Next, the meta. A few things were said OOC about Chauck and the assassins, and linking the symbol to him and no one else you met is indeed meta-gaming. I also am puzzled by you thinking that making a relatively smart-ass comment would do you any good. Arguing with those in power generally is a bad idea, especially when you have meta-gamed as well as role played improperly. I understand you may think you have valid reasoning for your actions, however we are a serious role play server and take meta-gaming, roleplaying, and other essential parts of a role play system quite seriously. Role playing isn't something for everyone. Some people just have to get used to it, and do something else.
When you redo, don't edit your old one. Repost.
Be more specific in your role play EXP.
Try to give an estimation as to how much time you can dedicate.
Need more than one fear.
The eyes on your skin... Kind of weird me out. Try fixing them to be more... Normal.
Your character may not know of, or be affiliated with the Assassins or Templars in the application.
Power-gaming is off, and you should expand your Assassin's Creed definition. Try using google if you haven't played the game much.
You're missing something, read the OP.
Try to estimate how much time you can dedicate, in hours per day/week.
You need a real name. "Sir H" can be his nick name.
Your character can not know of, or be affiliated with the Assassins/Templars in the application. Therefore they cannot be a fear, if he does not know they exist.
In your personality... What is "Very though"? I'm assuming a typo, but it could be "thorough", "thoughtful" or anything like that. Just being sure.
You need a skin appropriate for the 15th century. This is the Renaissance, not the Dark Ages.
I have to deny your back story for the same reason as your fears. In the redo, please make a longer back story as well.
try expanding your last 3 definitions, and in meta/power-gaming, try to include examples so we know that you know what you're talking about.
Your missing something, read the OP.
Be more specific in your role play EXP.
Need a last name.
Narrow down your skill set. You're giving your character essentially every basic skill. There has to be trade-offs. If you were busy training with a sword, when did you find the time to learn how to use a bow? And so on. Your character is young as well, making this even less likely.
Yes, change your skin. Your character can not know of, or be affiliated with the Assassins/Templars in the application, and so you cannot wear Assassin clothing.
Map making is not easy task. An 8 year old cannot master it.
You (and your brother) should consider redoing your back stories. You're essentially making yourselves Connor and his friend, Kanen'tó:kon. Try to be original.
Power-gaming is off, and your meta-gaming could use some work.
Need a last name.
Same issue with the skills as your brother.
Same issue with the skin as your brother.
Exact same back story, and so again, same issue as your brother.
There's a small section of your power-gaming definition that has what we're looking for. There are a few definitions, and we're looking for a certain one.
It looks to me like you filled out your application based on another application from the beginning of the thread. The format has changed a bit, so reread the OP and redo the application.
IGN:FailMineman
Age:14
Role-Play Exp.: I've played on 4 RP servers, easily 20 hrs+ on game play on each
Why Us: Because all other servers are the same, this one was different, therefore interesting
Time You Can Dedicate: 2-3 hours every other day
Have you played Assassin's Creed?: Yes, but not very often, I'm only on memory block 3(Damn School work)
IC
Name: Dante Megrory
Gender: Male
Age: 27
Fears: The Unknown, Death
Personality: Dante is a douche to most, but if you really know him, he's a rather nice guy
Skills: Stealth and Stealing
Nickname (Optional): Shadowfoot
RP Example (Add Dialogue):
(Plot: Dante enlisted with a group of rich mercs for cash)
Group Leader: Alright we will make our frontal assault through the sewers, after that,
we blow a small hole in the wall, exposing an area where we are able to sneak in...
Wheres Dante?
Random Guy in group: I dunno... Wait where is my cash... WHERES DANTE AND WHERES MY CASH?!?!
Skin (Link, picture, description):http://i1108.photobucket.com/albums/h405/NewbsLetter/Dante1.png
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Dante grew up in an area near Rome. It wasn't
uncommon is the Megrory household for the mother and father to be arguing,
constantly refering to their only child as a mistake. During most of these
arguments, Dante would climb out his window and jump, roof top, to roof top.
To his lovers house, yes, Dante was only 15. But both, the girl he loved, and
himself knew that they would be together. At age 18, his sweetheart was charged
the assassination of her father, and important political figure. Dante was with
her and knew that it was only some man in a white cloak. So he hatched a plan
to break her out of jail and then run away. All it required was gold, which Dante
didn't have. So he stole it, from peoples pockets, homes. Any small change, Dante
wantedneeded, to break his love out of jail. When he began his plot to break hislove out of jail. He found that she had broken out and already ran away. What Dante
didn't know is that he knew of his plan and where he would run away too. Dante,
heart broken, ran the other direction. Dedicated, he vowed that he would find a
way to get her back. All it required was gold, which he didn't have...
Other
What is Roleplay?: When you act as someone else with a different ROLE.
What is Metagaming?: Using out of game info to affect how you play.
What is Powergaming?: Making an over powered character to give your team an unfair advantage/ taking control
of other's characters
What is Assassin's Creed?: A game where a group of scientists(Templars) use DNA memory to gain artifacts
(Piece's of Eden) in order to get control of humanity
((I fixed all mistakes in the App, Also the Cloak on my skin is the cloak Dante wears to avoid being seen, it was not not modeled after the assassin's cloak))
* <-- I knew I forgot something
Better?
I suppose the skin is acceptable, if not a litte odd for a civilian... Though I'll just let you know right now: Skincraft isn't a very good editor
You still have the clear references to Assassins in your back story. My comment about Assassins in the review had absolutely nothing to do with your skin. I actually preferred your old skin; it was more like a civilian.
Power-gaming is still a bit off. There are a few definitions of the word, and we're looking for a certain one.
Oh, I now see how you think I was referencing the Assassins. Nah, what I meant was that a lunatic had snuck into the guys house and killed him.
But I can fix that. Oh and, how did you know I used SkinCraft?
OOC
IGN:FailMineman
Age:14
Role-Play Exp.: I've played on 4 RP servers, easily 20 hrs+ on game play on each
Why Us: Because all other servers are the same, this one was different, therefore interesting
Time You Can Dedicate: 2-3 hours every other day (Or every day, my school workload is lessening, new schedules and stuff like that)
Have you played Assassin's Creed?: Yes, but not very often, I'm only on memory block 3(Damn School work)
IC
Name: Dante Megrory
Gender: Male
Age: 27
Fears: The Unknown, Death
Personality: Dante is a douche to most, but if you really know him, he's a rather nice guy
Skills: Stealth and Stealing
Nickname (Optional): Shadowfoot
RP Example (Add Dialogue):
(Plot: Dante enlisted with a group of rich mercs for cash)
Group Leader: Alright we will make our frontal assault through the sewers, after that,
we blow a small hole in the wall, exposing an area where we are able to sneak in...
Wheres Dante?
Random Guy in group: I dunno... Wait where is my cash... WHERES DANTE AND WHERES MY CASH?!?!
Skin (Link, picture, description):http://i1108.photobucket.com/albums/h405/NewbsLetter/NormalAdventurer.png
(I changed back to my old Skin)
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Dante grew up in an area near Rome. It wasn't
uncommon is the Megrory household for the mother and father to be arguing,
constantly refering to their only child as a mistake. During most of these
arguments, Dante would climb out his window and jump, roof top, to roof top.
To his lovers house, yes, Dante was only 15. But both, the girl he loved, and
himself knew that they would be together. At age 18, his sweetheart was charged
the assassination of her father, an important political figure. Dante was with
her and knew that it was only some lunatic who had studied her home.So he
hatched a plan to break her out of jail and then run away. All it required was gold,
which Dante didn't have. So he stole it, from peoples pockets, homes. Any small
change, Dante
wantedneeded, to break his love out of jail. When he began his plotto break his love out of jail. He found that she had broken out and already ran away.
What Dante didn't know is that he knew of his plan and where he would run away too.
Dante, heart broken, ran the other direction. Dedicated, he vowed that he would find a
way to get her back. All it required was gold, which he didn't have...
Other
What is Roleplay?: When you act as someone else with a different ROLE.
What is Metagaming?: Using out of game info to affect how you play.
What is Powergaming?: Making an over powered character to give your team an unfair advantage/ taking control
of other's characters/playing with intent of maximizing progress for a certain goal.
What is Assassin's Creed?: A game where a group of scientists(Templars) use DNA memory to gain artifacts
(Piece's of Eden) in order to get control of humanity
*
Age: 15
Role-Play Exp.:None in minecraft, but plenty in other games. I love to role-play, it really gets me into the game and leaves me begging for more, acceptance to this server would be outstanding, for it seems to be quite interesting.
Why Us:I found this on a "top 10" forum page I watched the video they posted and it seemed amazing. The community, idea, and plugins seemed great and really made me want to join.
Time You Can Dedicate: 2-6 daily, I have plenty of time during the day and at night to play.
Have you played Assassin's Creed? A bit, I have watched plenty of videos and know the basics of it.
IC
Name: Vince (never revelas his last name, unless it gets me into the server
Gender: Male
Age: 27
Fears: Prison, civilians getting in the way of completing a job.
Personality: Lively and fun out of work, deadly and fierce while on a job.
Skills: Climbing, Assassination.
Nickname (Optional): Ghost (leaves a small bussiness card with a hooded figure looking back, card is black, all it says on it is "ghost") only referred to by ghost to people who discover the after math of an assassination.
RP Example (Add Dialogue): Employer assigns an assasination job.
Employer: Bart, the tailor has been in some... mischief lately. He knows information that could shut our major supply depot's down. I want him... out of the picture, so to speak.
Vince: slow, or quick? and with what?
Employer: Garrot wire, do it fast and hide the body.
Vince: what's the payment?
Employer $5,000 now, five more when its done.
Vince: give me three days, and your problem will be gone.
I am looking for a new skin, this one is a bit strange, if I find a better one I will put it in. I will most likely be wearing all black leather most of the time, looking for more of a civillian looking skin so that I can keep my identity concealed.
Edit: I found a new skin, its a man with a normal face, little scruff, brown eyes, he is a man wearing victorian clothing.
Skin (Link, picture, description):http://www.minecraft...0/dark-assasin/
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs):Raised in a family of assasins, Young Vince never had much time with his mother, or sisters. A family of five, vince being the youngest of three children and the only boy, he strived to make his father proud. after each mission, his father would take him out into the yard, shooting bows, fighting with wooden swords, and even showing him a how to use leather to create his own armor, and dye it black using the ink sacks form squids. When he was 15, Vince's father never came home. He waited for days but never heard word from him. A letter was sent to him, bearing his fathers name. It read, "Son, if you are reading this I have been killed or captured in action, this letter has been sent to you by my employer, and your future trainer. you will refer to him as your boss form here on. He will intruct you from here on. I am sorry son, I love you. sincerely, Your father."
Weeks past and no sign of the "Boss" showed, until one evening when Vince and his family were having dinner, and a knock on the door rung out. It was him, the boss, he took Vince and thanked his mother. That was the last he ever saw of this mother or sisters. He dedicated his like to his fathers work, and pledged to one day, take revenge on those who killed him father.
Other
What is Roleplay? Role playing is taking on the"role" of a different character. To act as though you yourself are in the game.
What is Metagaming? Metagaming is a term used to define any strategy, action or method used in a game which is from a game with a ruleset.
What is Powergaming? Powergaming is the form of playing a game with an aim of progressing or maximizing set goals.
What is Assassin's Creed? Assasins Creed is a historical-based action/assassin game, giving a beautiful free-world aspect to the game, taking on missions and ultimately, assassinating.
Thanks for reading my app. *
Back story doesn't make a whole lot of sense... I suppose it's not deniable, though.
You still have the same power-gaming definition as before. It's partially right. Just a small part.
You do need a last name.
Your character may not know of, or be affiliated with the Assassins/Templars. Meaning, you pretty much have to redo your entire IC section, including the skin.
Meta/power-gaming definitions are wrong.
I'm completely fine with him trying to defend himself; it's the smart-ass attitude with which he did it that ruined his chances.
Good to see there's still people looking after everything. ;w;
Spout's not working for me soooo I can't get on...
"The only place I wanna go; that's forward. Going back is a waste."
"Go back there, it's the only place people like you belong."
"Just don't come back."