RP Example (Add Dialogue): "All men die, but not all men truly live." "If this quote is true then why do we stand by and watch as our beloved city burns to the ground with unruly taxers and a wicked guards plotting on how to get the most money from us. The hard working men of this country labor over there fields just as women work hard to make his home pleasant to live in." "So i tell you revolt against these ungodly men and help the a pressed."
Skin (Link, picture, description): a blacksmith look
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): "My father, mother, and little sister were killed in a raid by bandits seeking to steel our stuff," "my father being the bravest tried to stop them but was slaughtered by a man with one eye and two fingers." "After i buried my family, I packed my few belongings and traveled to the nearest city in search for the one eyed man."
Fill out a full app.
Also make your backstory longer and less of a my parents died cliche.
You can't fear creepers, they are not in 14th century italy.
You must say your RP exp, saying "a bunch" makes us think you have none.
You're missing something, read the OP.
Role-Play Exp.:Skyrim, Dark souls, Asassins creed 2, brotherhood and revalations, Fallout 3 and New vegas
Why Us:I like RP servers and i've always wanted to try an Assassins creed server
Time You Can Dedicate:From 7-8Am and from 4-10PM (If i dont have homework) in Australian time
Have you played Assassin's Creed? As i said before I have Played from 2 to Revalations
IC
Name:Richado Dolino
Gender:Male
Age:34
Fears:Assassins (Not the order but just the average assassins, like ninjas) and jail
Personality:Richado is a man of few words, Hav no fear, he will fight a hord of guards if it came to it but he has had fear of the Silent killers hdding in the shadows but that dosent mean he won't be afraid to fight them
Skills:Close combat
Nickname (Optional):Richado
RP Example (Add Dialogue):A normal day in the city where Richado is in the market And is yelled at by a drunk.
"Hey you, yeah i am going to take you down," Yells the drunkard.
"Calm down you madman!" Replies Richado in a mad tone as he raises his fists ready to fight the drunk. The drunk man Swings the first blow hitting Richado in the face.
"Ah you bastersd!" Says Richard as he spits out blood. Richard topples the drunk easily for the dunk had little balance then he Punches the Drunkard in the face repetively until he knocked his opponent out.
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs):Richado Lived in an average part of Roam where it was a simple, for a short time. When Richado reached 10 he saw how crule the world was, Templar crulely enforcing their power onto the people and the Assassins killing people in the shadows. He was scared and spent his life trying to hide from all the bad things happening.
When Richado was 20 his brother was killed by bandits but it was in the shadows so Richado thought it was an assassin. At that moment somthing in Richado snaped, he wasent afraid of anything or anyone and he Started talking back to people, even the city guards Richado wasn't the best fighter but he would beat down people who pushed him around. Today he is still not afraid of anything but he has a strange reaction to Assassins.
Other
What is Roleplay? A type of game or activity that involes you being a Charecter and doing anything you want, within some Rules of the game
What is Metagaming? Metagaming is where you use OOC information for RP
What is Powergaming? Powergaming is where you make anything RP that is over powererd and somtimes unreal to the game.
What is Assassin's Creed? Assassins Creed is a game about a man named Desmond miles gets captured by the templars to relive a man named Altair to find the apple of Eden. After reliving the memories of Altair, Desmond Escapes to help the Assassins by reliving a man named Ezio Auditore to see where the Apple ended up. Durring the mission of reliving Ezio, Desmond Is messeged by a god from the past that he is to find sncient temples to save the world from destruction.
No assassins or templars in your backstory. After that re post your app and I'll grade it.
IGN: cjto1 Age: 11 Role-Play Exp.: I have played on a couple rp servers Why Us: I just love the topic of it Time You Can Dedicate: only 1-6 hours at the most maybe less Have you played Assassin's Creed? No but want to
IC
Name: Connor Theis Gender: Male Age: 12 Fears: SKELITINGS Personality:Nice and mean it depends Skills: assassinating and stealth Nickname (Optional): RP Example (Add Dialogue): "Do it" colin says "what if it dosent work" i reply He says "dont worry" i sneak behind someone and then i kill him. Skin (Link, picture, description): My skin is like Isrphile white color skin red eyes cookie monster hoodie and black pants.
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): i was a young boy when my poor city of rorickstead was attacked by a pack of the tholmer the guards said get in the cover of your house but i wanted to fight but as saw the frost troll come after me i ran they chased me throw the snowy biome as i see them comeing then i got away i swear to one day KILL THE THOLMER.
IGN: Moo_dog
Age: 12
Role-Play Exp: In Minecraft, very little, but in actual RPG's a lot
Why Us: I really want to try to do more Minecraft roleplaying and need a good server
Time you can dedicate: basically my whole summer, except for like 2 weeks
Have you played Assassin's Creed?: No
IC
Name: Samantha
Gender: Female
Age: 18
Appearance: Young but strong
Fears: Wild animals (bears and such), thieves
Personality: Strong willed but wise
Skills: Hiding, stealth, bow and arrow
Nickname (optional) : Sam
RP Ex: Sam set her right foot lightly on the hay, quickly notching an arrow and getting her bow ready. The leather on her shoes shone dully as she stepped into the street. Before she was noticed, she shot an arrow straight through the heart of the leader of a group of thieves counting coins after a widespread robbing. she melted into the shadows before any of the others could see her and they scattered.
Backstory: Samantha was only 7 when her father was killed in a robbing. She had been walking to the town to get food for the month when a man jumped out and attacked her father with a dagger. She had hidden in the corner of a nearby cart and watched as her father was stabbed when he refused to give the man the food money. They were poor enough as it was, that when she ran home crying to her mother, the only thing that crossed her mind other than the grief, was "How will we survive?"
As it turns out, her mother was able to get a job washing clothes and shining shoes. This barely made ends meet, but they survived, but Samantha was always haunted by nightmares of thieves killing her along with her father. She swore she'd put an end to the thieves and so, as soon as she learned how to make a rough bow, she used sticks and started practicing.
Other
What is Role playing? Role playing is to become someone else. To make or use a character and completely be consumed by the story.
What is meta gaming? it is to use some form of knowledge from previous games or adventures or clues
What is power gaming? to completely ignore any sense of reality, for example your character punches once in the jaw and they are knocked out
What is Assassin's creed? Assassin's Creed is a game where you have to assassinate, plunder, escape from dungeons and steal
(I've never actually played but I know about it)
Do a little bit more research on assassins creed
Make the roleplaying example as if it were 2 or more people roleplaying on an RP server, not like a passage from a book.
You're missing something, read the OP.
WhyUs:Cause i am a fan of assassins creed, and this looks like a very fun server.
TimeYouCanDedicate:A few hours a day Have you played Assassin's Creed? A little bit.
IC
Name:Fabio viviani.
Gender:Male
Age:28
Fears: Templars. mosters. deep water. death. prison
Personality: Likes to mess around, and enjoys music. Has a good temper, and is athletic. also very smart, and makes a great thief, like robin hood. gives a lot of his money away to poor.
Skills: playing music. thieving. Running Assassination.
Nickname (Optional): (None)
RP Example (Add Dialogue):*walking down a busy street, and notices a rich man, having a conversation with a friend* rich man: "Wow, look at all these people, that are so poor" rich mans friend: "Yes they take up space, and are worthless" Me:: *walks up behind rich man, and reaches in his pockets, and steals his wallet* Rich mans friend: "THIEF THIEF! He stole you wallet! I will get him"
me: *runs, and hides, in an empty alley, waiting for him to come around* Rich mans friend: *walks around corner, and then a jump out and assassinate him*
Me: *hides body, and gives most of the money, to poor*
Skin (Link, picture, description):White skin, but pretty tan. blue eyes. About 6 feet, and 190 pounds, mostly muscle.
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs):When he was a kid, he had a very poor family, with a low paying job. once the taxes got raised, his family was kicked out of their home, and had to live on the streets. one day his dad, was going to work, and got fired. Then his dad and mom got very sick, and couldn't afford a doctor. so then he had to steal food, and money, for his parents to survive. one day,a group of rich people, saw them, and started making fun of him, and his parents, and threw rocks at them. his parents, were so weak, that one day, when the rich people threw rocks at them, it killed the parents, and the rich people just laughed.
So from that day forward, he decided, to steal from the rich, and sometimes kill, if necessary. and to make sure to help every single poor, and homeless person he could find, to avenge his family.
Sorry about the small text. i didnt mean to make it like that.
Other
What is Roleplay?is when you control a character, who goes on quests, gets a home, and a job, and stuff that normal people do, except on a game
What is Metagaming?it is use of out-of-game information,or resources, to affect your in-game decisions.
What is Powergaming? interacting with games, with the aim of maximizing progress, to a specific goal.
What is Assassin's Creed? It is a video game, where you avenge, your family, and friends
By assassinating targets
eOk, i wont be a lone thief. is this one FINALLY ok?
He told you to get rid of assassins and templars, yet templars are in your fears. NO ASSASSINS OR TEMPLARS IN YOUR BACKSTORY OR CHARACTER'S STARTING KNOWLEDGE.
Also you are missing something, read the OP.
WhyUs:Cause i am a fan of assassins creed, and this looks like a very fun server.
TimeYouCanDedicate:A few hours a day Have you played Assassin's Creed? A little bit.
IC
Name:Fabio viviani.
Gender:Male
Age:28
Fears: Templars. mosters. deep water. death. prison
Personality: Likes to mess around, and enjoys music. Has a good temper, and is athletic. also very smart, and makes a great thief, like robin hood. gives a lot of his money away to poor.
Skills: playing music. thieving. Running Assassination.
Nickname (Optional): (None)
RP Example (Add Dialogue):*walking down a busy street, and notices a rich man, having a conversation with a friend* rich man: "Wow, look at all these people, that are so poor" rich mans friend: "Yes they take up space, and are worthless" Me:: *walks up behind rich man, and reaches in his pockets, and steals his wallet* Rich mans friend: "THIEF THIEF! He stole you wallet! I will get him"
me: *runs, and hides, in an empty alley, waiting for him to come around* Rich mans friend: *walks around corner, and then a jump out and assassinate him*
Me: *hides body, and gives most of the money, to poor*
Skin (Link, picture, description):White skin, but pretty tan. blue eyes. About 6 feet, and 190 pounds, mostly muscle.
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs):When he was a kid, he had a very poor family, with a low paying job. once the taxes got raised, his family was kicked out of their home, and had to live on the streets. one day his dad, was going to work, and got fired. Then his dad and mom got very sick, and couldn't afford a doctor. so then he had to steal food, and money, for his parents to survive. one day,a group of rich people, saw them, and started making fun of him, and his parents, and threw rocks at them. his parents, were so weak, that one day, when the rich people threw rocks at them, it killed the parents, and the rich people just laughed.
So from that day forward, he decided, to steal from the rich, and sometimes kill, if necessary. and to make sure to help every single poor, and homeless person he could find, to avenge his family.
Sorry about the small text. i didnt mean to make it like that.
Other
What is Roleplay?is when you control a character, who goes on quests, gets a home, and a job, and stuff that normal people do, except on a game
What is Metagaming?it is use of out-of-game information,or resources, to affect your in-game decisions.
What is Powergaming? interacting with games, with the aim of maximizing progress, to a specific goal.
What is Assassin's Creed? It is a video game, where you avenge, your family, and friends
By assassinating targets
eOk, i wont be a lone thief. is this one FINALLY ok?
No. And all you changed was your RP EXP section, which still tells me nothing.Oh, and DON'T YELL AT ME! >
Role-PlayExp.:I don't understand but i help a lot of servers if that's what you mean!!!
WhyUs:I only enjoy good servers and this looks great! TimeYouCanDedicate:It depends what dayHave you played Assassin's Creed? Yes im great at it.ICName:morbytogan (I hope that's ok). P.S. I'm English so i might spell things a bit diffrent.Gender:MaleAge:21Fears:SnakesPersonality:Small, strong and fast.Skills:Climbing, running and thievingNickname (Optional):morbyRP Example (Add Dialogue):[To other thieves] "We cant let them hide items, we will climb mountains, swim oceans run deserts but won't allow death or defeat!!" Skin (Link, picture, description):http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/120284/devil-dude/ A very keen devil!!!Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs):I have faced many close deaths and being found out. The Templar's are after me, following my every step but when they get too close I take their stuff and the run away at night. Leading a group is not easy so I don't really get disappointed when one dies because it's so common. I will not accept defeat and if it manages to come to that I will take the Templar's stuff. But priests on the other hand will be dead on sight!!! No one beats me!!!!!!!!* (I read all the rules multiple times.)
Fill out a full app.
Also make your backstory longer and less of a my parents died cliche.
You can't fear creepers, they are not in 14th century italy.
You must say your RP exp, saying "a bunch" makes us think you have none.
You're missing something, read the OP.
No assassins or templars in your backstory. After that re post your app and I'll grade it.
I already said to this... no. For many reasons.
Do a little bit more research on assassins creed
Make the roleplaying example as if it were 2 or more people roleplaying on an RP server, not like a passage from a book.
You're missing something, read the OP.
He told you to get rid of assassins and templars, yet templars are in your fears. NO ASSASSINS OR TEMPLARS IN YOUR BACKSTORY OR CHARACTER'S STARTING KNOWLEDGE.
Also you are missing something, read the OP.
Mine appears that it hasn't been reviewed. Some of the apps that were reviewed were posted after mine also.
Role-PlayExp.:Great. i have played savage realms, witch is a pretty hardcore RP
WhyUs:Because, you look like a great server, and i am a fan of the AC series.
TimeYouCanDedicate:a few hours a day.
Have you played Assassin's Creed? A small bit, but i have watched my brother play A LOT
IC
Name: Dally Day
Gender: Male
Age:26
Fears: Death. prison. Guards. taxes. his dad.
Personality: Funny, and likes to mess around a bit. Dislikes people that dislike him. Doesn't hold grudges, but will assassinate, too angry. LOVES MUSIC. He would make a great thief, but doesn't steal often.
Skills: Parkour. assassination. Piano. very fast.
Nickname (Optional): number 6
RP Example (Add Dialogue): Me: *see's a guard, beating up a civilian, for not paying, the EXTREMELY high taxes.* Guard says:, "Okay, Now. If you don't pay your taxes within , two weeks time, to the prison with you!" The man says: "you know i cant pay taxes, in two weeks! Please don't throw me in prison! i have a family!" The guard says: Well, you will miss your family, when you are behind bars!!!" *Evil laugh* Me: hey guard, he isn't going to be the man in trouble! *pulls out sword, and assassinates guard. Takes the money out of guards pockets, and gives half to the man, and says. "this will last you a for at least, a month"
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs):When Dally, was just 3, he was abused by his parents. He ran away, when he was 6, because he just couldn't handle it anymore. One day when he was on the streets, looking for food, three years later, when he was almost 10, his dad found him and gave him a horrible beating. Then later that night, he found his father, with a knife, planning to kill him. And that night, all his anger from all the abusing, piled up, and he did his last resort option. to kill his dad. then after he killed him he felt horrible. he felt so bad for killing his dad, even after all his dad did, to abuse him, he was sorry.
Then years later, when he was 19, the taxes were raised, and because of his bad job, one of the guards, came up to him and started beating him. he was trying to tell the guard that just one more week, and he could make it. the guard said, "sorry pal! You haven't been paying taxes for two months now. I wont give you anymore time. i'm taking you to prison, and tomorrow, you will be in the gallows, as an example of what happens, to not pay!" Early the next morning, the guard came in and said, " 1 more hour, and you will be in the rope!"I was in metal chains, and couldn't escape, but then i thought, maybe i could strangle, the guard, with the chains. one hour later, the guard came in, and you did the first thing that came to his mind. when he was , untying the chain, he slipped his hand out, and strangled the man, and said, " for now on, i will only kill when necessary, and only to help people"
Other
What is Roleplay? Roleplay, is where you have a character, and you control them, and they go on quests, get homes, and live Like, you want them to.
What is Metagaming? It is where you take use outside information, and apply it, to your in game self
What is Powergaming? Its when you do something 0n a game, that you cant do in real life
What is Assassin's Creed?Its where You are Ezio/ altiar/ desmond and your purpose is to destroy the templarsI
Role-PlayExp.:I don't understand but i help a lot of servers if that's what you mean!!!
WhyUs:I only enjoy good servers and this looks great! TimeYouCanDedicate:It depends what dayHave you played Assassin's Creed? Yes im great at it.ICName:morbytogan (I hope that's ok). P.S. I'm English so i might spell things a bit diffrent.Gender:MaleAge:21Fears:SnakesPersonality:Small, strong and fast.Skills:Climbing, running and thievingNickname (Optional):morbyRP Example (Add Dialogue):[To other thieves] "We cant let them hide items, we will climb mountains, swim oceans run deserts but won't allow death or defeat!!" Skin (Link, picture, description):http://www.minecraft...284/devil-dude/ A very keen devil!!!Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs):I have faced many close deaths and being found out. The Templar's are after me, following my every step but when they get too close I take their stuff and the run away at night. Leading a group is not easy so I don't really get disappointed when one dies because it's so common. I will not accept defeat and if it manages to come to that I will take the Templar's stuff. But priests on the other hand will be dead on sight!!! No one beats me!!!!!!!!* (I read all the rules multiple times.)
Role-PlayExp.:Great. i have played savage realms, witch is a pretty hardcore RP
WhyUs:Because, you look like a great server, and i am a fan of the AC series.
TimeYouCanDedicate:a few hours a day.
Have you played Assassin's Creed? A small bit, but i have watched my brother play A LOT
IC
Name: Dally Day
Gender: Male
Age:26
Fears: Death. prison. Guards. taxes. his dad.
Personality: Funny, and likes to mess around a bit. Dislikes people that dislike him. Doesn't hold grudges, but will assassinate, too angry. LOVES MUSIC. He would make a great thief, but doesn't steal often.
Skills: Parkour. assassination. Piano. very fast.
Nickname (Optional): number 6
RP Example (Add Dialogue): Me: *see's a guard, beating up a civilian, for not paying, the EXTREMELY high taxes.* Guard says:, "Okay, Now. If you don't pay your taxes within , two weeks time, to the prison with you!" The man says: "you know i cant pay taxes, in two weeks! Please don't throw me in prison! i have a family!" The guard says: Well, you will miss your family, when you are behind bars!!!" *Evil laugh* Me: hey guard, he isn't going to be the man in trouble! *pulls out sword, and assassinates guard. Takes the money out of guards pockets, and gives half to the man, and says. "this will last you a for at least, a month"
Skin (Link, picture, description) White skin, but pretty tan. deep blue eyes, and a pointy nose. is 180 pounds, and is 6'5 feet.
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs):When Dally, was just 3, he was abused by his parents. He ran away, when he was 6, because he just couldn't handle it anymore. One day when he was on the streets, looking for food, three years later, when he was almost 10, his dad found him and gave him a horrible beating. Then later that night, he found his father, with a knife, planning to kill him. And that night, all his anger from all the abusing, piled up, and he did his last resort option. to kill his dad. then after he killed him he felt horrible. he felt so bad for killing his dad, even after all his dad did, to abuse him, he was sorry.
Then years later, when he was 19, the taxes were raised, and because of his bad job, one of the guards, came up to him and started beating him. he was trying to tell the guard that just one more week, and he could make it. the guard said, "sorry pal! You haven't been paying taxes for two months now. I wont give you anymore time. i'm taking you to prison, and tomorrow, you will be in the gallows, as an example of what happens, to not pay!" Early the next morning, the guard came in and said, " 1 more hour, and you will be in the rope!"I was in metal chains, and couldn't escape, but then i thought, maybe i could strangle, the guard, with the chains. one hour later, the guard came in, and you did the first thing that came to his mind. when he was , untying the chain, he slipped his hand out, and strangled the man, and said, " for now on, i will only kill when necessary, and only to help people"
Other
What is Roleplay? Roleplay, is where you have a character, and you control them, and they go on quests, get homes, and live Like, you want them to.
What is Metagaming? It is where you take use outside information, and apply it, to your in game self
What is Powergaming? Its when you do something 0n a game, that you cant do in real life
What is Assassin's Creed?Its where You are Ezio/ altiar/ desmond and your purpose is to destroy the templars
TimeYouCanDedicate:only 1-6 at the most maybe less
Have you played Assassin's Creed? No but would like to
IC
Name: Connor Theis
Gender: Male
Age: 12
Fears: SKELITINGS
Personality: it depends nice to people who are nice mean to people who deserve it
Skills:stealth and good assissinateing
Nickname (Optional):
RP Example (Add Dialogue): "is it safe" i ask "yes of course" colin says i take a step back and jump screaming Ahhhhhhhh and land in hay
Skin (Link, picture, description): White skin with red eyes a cookie monster jacket and black pants.
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): i was a young boy when my family fo merchants moved nothing to do then one day we were attacked by guards of a political leader i ran as they took my brothers and mom dad they chased me for miels untile i got away i swear to become an assassine and get vengeance on the person who sent the guards after my family. hope u say yes to this one
As soon as you fill out an app and get accepted. Which I highly doubt will happen....There's one thing...well, two really. No assassins/templars in the app, and you need a last name. Otherwise, this app makes me happy. ^.^
This looks good, I guess. The one thing is, we have so many lone thieves already...try to avoid being a lone thief, people. Be a citizen or a lone bounty hunter. This app is fine though, minus the running assassination, and your role-play exp part of the OOC doesn't tell me anything.
Wait, what? (Thanks, btw)
I'm confused, what do you mean no Assassins or Templars? xD
RP Example (Add Dialogue): Guard: *Turns to another guard* "There has been a breach in the front wall. An unknown masked figured has been seen leaping through the castle wal-" Me: *jumps down on guard leaving him unconscious* *slashes other guard*
Guard 2: "Ugh!" *falls on the floor*
Me: *Leaps down wall and rolls to saftey*
Fortunato: "Ah, well isn't it little Mariano?"
Me: *looks Fortunato dead in the eye with hatred* "I've come back for what is mine. Your act is unforgettable."
Skin (Link, picture, description): Dark hood, dark clothing, bright blue eyes
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Mariano Fillipi II came from a family of wealth and prosperity long before he was born. When he was a mere child, all of this was taken from him by those who had lived in jealousy of his parents. A man by the name of Fortunato Fillipi (Mario's uncle) murdered his parents in the night while Mariano watched in horror. Fortunato had lived in the shadow of Mariano's father for his whole life. After Fortunato had walked out of the room, Mariano took his parents in his arms for the last time. Suddenly, the guards burst through the door alongside Fortunato, then framing Mariano for his parents death.
Mariano fled from the kingdom that he had once known to be his home to a world of darkness and despair. Mariano was alone. There was no one left for him to go to. He now was a nuisance and enemy to his whole family. Driven by sadness, anger, and hatred, Mariano sought out to kill his uncle from the day of his parent's death.
Other
What is Roleplay? To act and speak as the character you are potraying.
What is Metagaming? The act of using previously known knowledge from a game for an advantage.
What is Powergaming? Doing things you cannot do in real life.
What is Assassin's Creed? A 3rd person RPG game where one carries out various acts assassinating, stealing, and escaping dangerous plunders.
TimeYouCanDedicate:only 1-6 at the most maybe less
Have you played Assassin's Creed? No but would like to
IC
Name: Connor Theis
Gender: Male
Age: 12
Fears: SKELITINGS
Personality: it depends nice to people who are nice mean to people who deserve it
Skills:stealth and good assissinateing
Nickname (Optional):
RP Example (Add Dialogue): "is it safe" i ask "yes of course" colin says i take a step back and jump screaming Ahhhhhhhh and land in hay
Skin (Link, picture, description): White skin with red eyes a cookie monster jacket and black pants.
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): i was a young boy when my family fo merchants moved nothing to do then one day we were attacked by guards of a political leader i ran as they took my brothers and mom dad they chased me for miels untile i got away i swear to become an assassine and get vengeance on the person who sent the guards after my family.
hope u say yes to this one
Fill out a full app, and you may not have assassins or templars in your backstory, fears, or rp example.
You're missing something, read the OP
You can't have assassinating as a skill, you are not an assassin.
Fix up your grammar.
You can't have a cookie monster skin.
Role-PlayExp.:Great. i have played savage realms, witch is a pretty hardcore RP
WhyUs:Because, you look like a great server, and i am a fan of the AC series.
TimeYouCanDedicate:a few hours a day.
Have you played Assassin's Creed? A small bit, but i have watched my brother play A LOT
IC
Name: Dally Day
Gender: Male
Age:26
Fears: Death. prison. Guards. taxes. his dad.
Personality: Funny, and likes to mess around a bit. Dislikes people that dislike him. Doesn't hold grudges, but will assassinate, too angry. LOVES MUSIC. He would make a great thief, but doesn't steal often.
Skills: Parkour. assassination. Piano. very fast.
Nickname (Optional): number 6
RP Example (Add Dialogue): Me: *see's a guard, beating up a civilian, for not paying, the EXTREMELY high taxes.* Guard says:, "Okay, Now. If you don't pay your taxes within , two weeks time, to the prison with you!" The man says: "you know i cant pay taxes, in two weeks! Please don't throw me in prison! i have a family!" The guard says: Well, you will miss your family, when you are behind bars!!!" *Evil laugh* Me: hey guard, he isn't going to be the man in trouble! *pulls out sword, and assassinates guard. Takes the money out of guards pockets, and gives half to the man, and says. "this will last you a for at least, a month"
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs):When Dally, was just 3, he was abused by his parents. He ran away, when he was 6, because he just couldn't handle it anymore. One day when he was on the streets, looking for food, three years later, when he was almost 10, his dad found him and gave him a horrible beating. Then later that night, he found his father, with a knife, planning to kill him. And that night, all his anger from all the abusing, piled up, and he did his last resort option. to kill his dad. then after he killed him he felt horrible. he felt so bad for killing his dad, even after all his dad did, to abuse him, he was sorry.
Then years later, when he was 19, the taxes were raised, and because of his bad job, one of the guards, came up to him and started beating him. he was trying to tell the guard that just one more week, and he could make it. the guard said, "sorry pal! You haven't been paying taxes for two months now. I wont give you anymore time. i'm taking you to prison, and tomorrow, you will be in the gallows, as an example of what happens, to not pay!" Early the next morning, the guard came in and said, " 1 more hour, and you will be in the rope!"I was in metal chains, and couldn't escape, but then i thought, maybe i could strangle, the guard, with the chains. one hour later, the guard came in, and you did the first thing that came to his mind. when he was , untying the chain, he slipped his hand out, and strangled the man, and said, " for now on, i will only kill when necessary, and only to help people"
Other
What is Roleplay? Roleplay, is where you have a character, and you control them, and they go on quests, get homes, and live Like, you want them to.
What is Metagaming? It is where you take use outside information, and apply it, to your in game self
What is Powergaming? Its when you do something 0n a game, that you cant do in real life
What is Assassin's Creed?Its where You are Ezio/ altiar/ desmond and your purpose is to destroy the templarsI
I read the rules:)
I think you passed by the specific thing you need to put in your app, read the OP once more.
Fix up power-gaming
Change around your roleplay definition a bit.
Fix up your grammar a little bit
Your skin. No.
RP Example (Add Dialogue): Guard: *Turns to another guard* "There has been a breach in the front wall. An unknown masked figured has been seen leaping through the castle wal-" Me: *jumps down on guard leaving him unconscious* *slashes other guard*
Guard 2: "Ugh!" *falls on the floor*
Me: *Leaps down wall and rolls to saftey*
Fortunato: "Ah, well isn't it little Mariano?"
Me: *looks Fortunato dead in the eye with hatred* "I've come back for what is mine. Your act is unforgettable."
Skin (Link, picture, description): Dark hood, dark clothing, bright blue eyes
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Mariano Fillipi II came from a family of wealth and prosperity long before he was born. When he was a mere child, all of this was taken from him by those who had lived in jealousy of his parents. A man by the name of Fortunato Fillipi (Mario's uncle) murdered his parents in the night while Mariano watched in horror. Fortunato had lived in the shadow of Mariano's father for his whole life. After Fortunato had walked out of the room, Mariano took his parents in his arms for the last time. Suddenly, the guards burst through the door alongside Fortunato, then framing Mariano for his parents death.
Mariano fled from the kingdom that he had once known to be his home to a world of darkness and despair. Mariano was alone. There was no one left for him to go to. He now was a nuisance and enemy to his whole family. Driven by sadness, anger, and hatred, Mariano sought out to kill his uncle from the day of his parent's death.
Other
What is Roleplay? To act and speak as the character you are potraying.
What is Metagaming? The act of using previously known knowledge from a game for an advantage.
What is Powergaming? Doing things you cannot do in real life.
What is Assassin's Creed? A 3rd person RPG game where one carries out various acts assassinating, stealing, and escaping dangerous plunders.
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Fix up your power-gaming definition
Meta-gaming isn't only from other games
You can't have assassination as a skill, only assassins can, and you can't start as one. You can have stealth and fighting however.
So mez, do i have to write a whole new application, or just re post it? And i have to change skin. So, if i make my OOC better i pass?
I said the following: I think you passed by the specific thing you need to put in your app, read the OP once more. Fix up power-gaming Change around your roleplay definition a bit. Fix up your grammar a little bit Your skin. No.
Try and fix those in a repost of your app.
Role-PlayExp.:I have played skyrim, A different RP server. And Also online MMORPG's.
WhyUs:Because, you look like a great server, and i am a fan of the AC series.
TimeYouCanDedicate:around 2 hours a day.
Have you played Assassin's Creed? Not a lot, but i have seen my brother play through all of them.
IC
Name: Dally Day
Gender: Male
Age:26
Fears: Death. prison. Guards. taxes. his dad.
Personality: Funny, and likes to mess around a bit. Dislikes people that dislike him. Doesn't hold grudges, but will assassinate, too angry. LOVES MUSIC. He would make a great thief, but doesn't steal often.
Skills: Parkour. assassination. Piano. very fast.
Nickname (Optional): number 6
RP Example (Add Dialogue): Me: *sees a man, who cant pay taxes, And a guard beating him up* Guard: Sorry pal, Times up! To the gallows with you Man: Please don't! i have a wife and kids! I can pay if you give me just 1 more week! Guard: well, Your family will miss you, When you are dead! Me: " hey guard, let him go, or you will be the dead man" Guard: "Ha! You fool! I can kill you! Me: "Ok Try." *guard runs up, and tries to swing his sword at me, But i dodge it, and stab him in the chest*
Skin (Link, picture, description) http://www.minecraft.../adventurer-ii/ Looks like an adventurer, with white skin. Steve face. green eyes, And a blue/brown shirt.
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs):When Dally, was just 3, he was abused by his parents. He ran away, when he was 6, because he just couldn't handle it anymore. One day when he was on the streets, looking for food, three years later, when he was almost 10, his dad found him and gave him a horrible beating. Then later that night, he found his father, with a knife, planning to kill him. And that night, all his anger from all the abusing, piled up, and he did his last resort option. to kill his dad. then after he killed him he felt horrible. he felt so bad for killing his dad, even after all his dad did, to abuse him, he was sorry.
Then years later, when he was 19, the taxes were raised, and because of his bad job, one of the guards, came up to him and started beating him. he was trying to tell the guard that just one more week, and he could make it. the guard said, "sorry pal! You haven't been paying taxes for two months now. I wont give you anymore time. i'm taking you to prison, and tomorrow, you will be in the gallows, as an example of what happens, to not pay!" Early the next morning, the guard came in and said, " 1 more hour, and you will be in the rope!"I was in metal chains, and couldn't escape, but then i thought, maybe i could strangle, the guard, with the chains. one hour later, the guard came in, and you did the first thing that came to his mind. when he was , untying the chain, he slipped his hand out, and strangled the man, and said, " for now on, i will only kill when necessary, and only to help people"
Other
What is Role play? IS a game style, where you have a character, and try to get him upgraded, make him do quests,
What is Metagaming? It is where you take use outside information, and apply it, to your in game self
What is Powergaming? One form is the deliberate creation of optimal player character , with the aim of maximising the power the player wields in the game world by way of their avatar.
What is Assassin's Creed?Its where You are Ezio/ altiar/ desmond and your purpose is to destroy the templarsI
No.
Figure out why I'm not going to accept it.
Fill out a full app.
Also make your backstory longer and less of a my parents died cliche.
You can't fear creepers, they are not in 14th century italy.
You must say your RP exp, saying "a bunch" makes us think you have none.
You're missing something, read the OP.
No assassins or templars in your backstory. After that re post your app and I'll grade it.
I already said to this... no. For many reasons.
Do a little bit more research on assassins creed
Make the roleplaying example as if it were 2 or more people roleplaying on an RP server, not like a passage from a book.
You're missing something, read the OP.
He told you to get rid of assassins and templars, yet templars are in your fears. NO ASSASSINS OR TEMPLARS IN YOUR BACKSTORY OR CHARACTER'S STARTING KNOWLEDGE.
Also you are missing something, read the OP.
Age:11
Role-Play Exp.:I don't understand but i help a lot of servers if that's what you mean!!!
Why Us:I only enjoy good servers and this looks great!
Mine appears that it hasn't been reviewed. Some of the apps that were reviewed were posted after mine also.
IGN:TeamAmerica7
Age:11
Role-PlayExp.:Great. i have played savage realms, witch is a pretty hardcore RP
WhyUs:Because, you look like a great server, and i am a fan of the AC series.
TimeYouCanDedicate:a few hours a day.
Have you played Assassin's Creed? A small bit, but i have watched my brother play A LOT
IC
Name: Dally Day
Gender: Male
Age:26
Fears: Death. prison. Guards. taxes. his dad.
Personality: Funny, and likes to mess around a bit. Dislikes people that dislike him. Doesn't hold grudges, but will assassinate, too angry. LOVES MUSIC. He would make a great thief, but doesn't steal often.
Skills: Parkour. assassination. Piano. very fast.
Nickname (Optional): number 6
RP Example (Add Dialogue): Me: *see's a guard, beating up a civilian, for not paying, the EXTREMELY high taxes.*
Guard says:, "Okay, Now. If you don't pay your taxes within , two weeks time, to the prison with you!"
The man says: "you know i cant pay taxes, in two weeks! Please don't throw me in prison! i have a family!"
The guard says: Well, you will miss your family, when you are behind bars!!!" *Evil laugh*
Me: hey guard, he isn't going to be the man in trouble! *pulls out sword, and assassinates guard. Takes the money out of guards pockets, and gives half to the man, and says. "this will last you a for at least, a month"
Skin (Link, picture, description) http://www.minecraft.../80232/ironman/ black, looks like iron man except black. red eyes red chest
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs):When Dally, was just 3, he was abused by his parents. He ran away, when he was 6, because he just couldn't handle it anymore. One day when he was on the streets, looking for food, three years later, when he was almost 10, his dad found him and gave him a horrible beating. Then later that night, he found his father, with a knife, planning to kill him. And that night, all his anger from all the abusing, piled up, and he did his last resort option. to kill his dad. then after he killed him he felt horrible. he felt so bad for killing his dad, even after all his dad did, to abuse him, he was sorry.
Then years later, when he was 19, the taxes were raised, and because of his bad job, one of the guards, came up to him and started beating him. he was trying to tell the guard that just one more week, and he could make it. the guard said, "sorry pal! You haven't been paying taxes for two months now. I wont give you anymore time. i'm taking you to prison, and tomorrow, you will be in the gallows, as an example of what happens, to not pay!" Early the next morning, the guard came in and said, " 1 more hour, and you will be in the rope!"I was in metal chains, and couldn't escape, but then i thought, maybe i could strangle, the guard, with the chains. one hour later, the guard came in, and you did the first thing that came to his mind. when he was , untying the chain, he slipped his hand out, and strangled the man, and said, " for now on, i will only kill when necessary, and only to help people"
Other
What is Roleplay? Roleplay, is where you have a character, and you control them, and they go on quests, get homes, and live Like, you want them to.
What is Metagaming? It is where you take use outside information, and apply it, to your in game self
What is Powergaming? Its when you do something 0n a game, that you cant do in real life
What is Assassin's Creed?Its where You are Ezio/ altiar/ desmond and your purpose is to destroy the templarsI
I read the rules:)
Re post it.
Very no.
Figure it out.
Age:12
Role-Play Exp.: have played on a couple
Why Us:i thought it was a cool theme
Time You Can Dedicate:only 1-6 at the most maybe less
Have you played Assassin's Creed? No but would like to
IC
Name: Connor Theis
Gender: Male
Age: 12
Fears: SKELITINGS
Personality: it depends nice to people who are nice mean to people who deserve it
Skills:stealth and good assissinateing
Nickname (Optional):
RP Example (Add Dialogue): "is it safe" i ask "yes of course" colin says i take a step back and jump screaming Ahhhhhhhh and land in hay
Skin (Link, picture, description): White skin with red eyes a cookie monster jacket and black pants.
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): i was a young boy when my family fo merchants moved nothing to do then one day we were attacked by guards of a political leader i ran as they took my brothers and mom dad they chased me for miels untile i got away i swear to become an assassine and get vengeance on the person who sent the guards after my family.
hope u say yes to this one
Wait, what? (Thanks, btw)
I'm confused, what do you mean no Assassins or Templars? xD
He means your character can't have knowledge of Assassins or Templars in the backstory, RP example, etc.
Maybe it's because I actually tried xD
*even more confused* (Sorry, I'm completely clueless)
So my character can't be an assassin...?
Your character can be an Assassin but they have to be recruited by the brotherhood. No one is allowed to start as one.
IGN: GreenLikeTea
Age:15
Role-PlayExp.: Good. I have played on a couple RP servers.
WhyUs: You seem to be a popular server and I'm looking for a unique Minecraft experience.
TimeYouCanDedicate: Any time of any day.
Have you played Assassin's Creed? Yes
IC
Name: Mariano Fillipi
Gender: Male
Age: 23
Fears: Guards
Personality: Stern, Angry, Mysterious
Skills: Hiding, Sliding, Climbing, Jumping, Trickery, Assassination.
Nickname (Optional): Mario
RP Example (Add Dialogue): Guard: *Turns to another guard* "There has been a breach in the front wall. An unknown masked figured has been seen leaping through the castle wal-"
Me: *jumps down on guard leaving him unconscious* *slashes other guard*
Guard 2: "Ugh!" *falls on the floor*
Me: *Leaps down wall and rolls to saftey*
Fortunato: "Ah, well isn't it little Mariano?"
Me: *looks Fortunato dead in the eye with hatred* "I've come back for what is mine. Your act is unforgettable."
Skin (Link, picture, description): Dark hood, dark clothing, bright blue eyes
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Mariano Fillipi II came from a family of wealth and prosperity long before he was born. When he was a mere child, all of this was taken from him by those who had lived in jealousy of his parents. A man by the name of Fortunato Fillipi (Mario's uncle) murdered his parents in the night while Mariano watched in horror. Fortunato had lived in the shadow of Mariano's father for his whole life. After Fortunato had walked out of the room, Mariano took his parents in his arms for the last time. Suddenly, the guards burst through the door alongside Fortunato, then framing Mariano for his parents death.
Mariano fled from the kingdom that he had once known to be his home to a world of darkness and despair. Mariano was alone. There was no one left for him to go to. He now was a nuisance and enemy to his whole family. Driven by sadness, anger, and hatred, Mariano sought out to kill his uncle from the day of his parent's death.
Other
What is Roleplay? To act and speak as the character you are potraying.
What is Metagaming? The act of using previously known knowledge from a game for an advantage.
What is Powergaming? Doing things you cannot do in real life.
What is Assassin's Creed? A 3rd person RPG game where one carries out various acts assassinating, stealing, and escaping dangerous plunders.
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Fill out a full app, and you may not have assassins or templars in your backstory, fears, or rp example.
You're missing something, read the OP
You can't have assassinating as a skill, you are not an assassin.
Fix up your grammar.
You can't have a cookie monster skin.
I think you passed by the specific thing you need to put in your app, read the OP once more.
Fix up power-gaming
Change around your roleplay definition a bit.
Fix up your grammar a little bit
Your skin. No.
Fix up your power-gaming definition
Meta-gaming isn't only from other games
You can't have assassination as a skill, only assassins can, and you can't start as one. You can have stealth and fighting however.
I said the following:
I think you passed by the specific thing you need to put in your app, read the OP once more.
Fix up power-gaming
Change around your roleplay definition a bit.
Fix up your grammar a little bit
Your skin. No.
Try and fix those in a repost of your app.
IGN:TeamAmerica7
Age:11
Role-PlayExp.:I have played skyrim, A different RP server. And Also online MMORPG's.
WhyUs:Because, you look like a great server, and i am a fan of the AC series.
TimeYouCanDedicate:around 2 hours a day.
Have you played Assassin's Creed? Not a lot, but i have seen my brother play through all of them.
IC
Name: Dally Day
Gender: Male
Age:26
Fears: Death. prison. Guards. taxes. his dad.
Personality: Funny, and likes to mess around a bit. Dislikes people that dislike him. Doesn't hold grudges, but will assassinate, too angry. LOVES MUSIC. He would make a great thief, but doesn't steal often.
Skills: Parkour. assassination. Piano. very fast.
Nickname (Optional): number 6
RP Example (Add Dialogue): Me: *sees a man, who cant pay taxes, And a guard beating him up*
Guard: Sorry pal, Times up! To the gallows with you
Man: Please don't! i have a wife and kids! I can pay if you give me just 1 more week!
Guard: well, Your family will miss you, When you are dead!
Me: " hey guard, let him go, or you will be the dead man"
Guard: "Ha! You fool! I can kill you!
Me: "Ok Try." *guard runs up, and tries to swing his sword at me, But i dodge it, and stab him in the chest*
Skin (Link, picture, description) http://www.minecraft.../adventurer-ii/ Looks like an adventurer, with white skin. Steve face. green eyes, And a blue/brown shirt.
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs):When Dally, was just 3, he was abused by his parents. He ran away, when he was 6, because he just couldn't handle it anymore. One day when he was on the streets, looking for food, three years later, when he was almost 10, his dad found him and gave him a horrible beating. Then later that night, he found his father, with a knife, planning to kill him. And that night, all his anger from all the abusing, piled up, and he did his last resort option. to kill his dad. then after he killed him he felt horrible. he felt so bad for killing his dad, even after all his dad did, to abuse him, he was sorry.
Then years later, when he was 19, the taxes were raised, and because of his bad job, one of the guards, came up to him and started beating him. he was trying to tell the guard that just one more week, and he could make it. the guard said, "sorry pal! You haven't been paying taxes for two months now. I wont give you anymore time. i'm taking you to prison, and tomorrow, you will be in the gallows, as an example of what happens, to not pay!" Early the next morning, the guard came in and said, " 1 more hour, and you will be in the rope!"I was in metal chains, and couldn't escape, but then i thought, maybe i could strangle, the guard, with the chains. one hour later, the guard came in, and you did the first thing that came to his mind. when he was , untying the chain, he slipped his hand out, and strangled the man, and said, " for now on, i will only kill when necessary, and only to help people"
Other
What is Role play? IS a game style, where you have a character, and try to get him upgraded, make him do quests,
What is Metagaming? It is where you take use outside information, and apply it, to your in game self
What is Powergaming? One form is the deliberate creation of optimal player character , with the aim of maximising the power the player wields in the game world by way of their avatar.
What is Assassin's Creed?Its where You are Ezio/ altiar/ desmond and your purpose is to destroy the templarsI
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I see, I edited it, hope it's better.