It's ok, just a few mistakes. You should have put Humans in what race you are, ethnicity is what human ethnic group you come from. So since you are starting in Ashburton I would think you want to be Casterian? Also, you can't make it "more" human. If you are human, it would have to be human completely. Unless you wish to be a halfling(Elf-human half-breed, falls under elven applications).
But, as it is these are very minor things and will be ok as long as you correct them in game. Accepted
Thanks for accepting. Yeah, I understand about the ethnicity now, I'll fix it in game, Also, what I meant by "more human" was that the skin I showed you was an elf, but I edited it to be a human. Just to let you know
ah, am sorry about that, ill change my application slighty to be living in the City Ashburton. Pardon my mistake I didnt know you couldnt live in the wilderness.
It's ok, just for the beginning we would like players to start in a town is all.
Why do you want to join the server?: It seems really intersting and i have been looking for a good server to make my home/main server
What do you want in a RP server?: I love medieval RP, and just the era itself with Kings, lords Knights and peasants, it makes for some good fun.
IC INFO:
Name: Bardalys
Age: 25
Town: Visahelm
Ethnicity: Adelbrechtens
Appearance: Somewhat tall, Dark Brown Hair,
Skin (Optional): (PlanetMinecraft appears to be down so i cannot get my skin)
Backstory (More than 5 sentences): Bardalys grew up on small farm in a tiny little village in a forgot little corner of the world. He spent most of his childhood working hard in the fields with his brother, Geoffrey. When Bardalys turned 17, and Geoffry 18, hey both decided to leave their home and venture out to find new opportunities in the lands of Darkahlen.
RP Example: Hail friend, how goes ye farm.
Q&A: Lore
1. What led the humans to the land of Darkahlen? a Disease that drove them from their original lands
2. What sparked the elven-human war? A band of Nomadic humans who attacked an elven settlement
3. What is the capitol of Assyria? I failed to see anything mentioning Assyria
4. What are the current ethnic groups? Casterians, Adelbrechtens, Tains
OOC INFO:
IGN:me7290
Age: 16
Location: California
Why do you want to join the server?: I want to join because i like to RP.
What do you want in a RP server?: I want a positive environment, and people who actually RP.
IC INFO:
Name: Geoffrey
Age: 26
Town: Visahelm
Ethnicity: Adelbrechtens
Appearance:
Skin (Optional):
Backstory (More than 5 sentences): Geoffrey grew up on small farm in a tiny little village in a forgot little corner of the world. He spent most of his childhood working hard in the fields with his brother, Bardalys . When Bardalys turned 17, and Geoffrey 18, they both decided to leave their home and venture out to find new opportunities in the lands of Darkahlen.
RP Example: Hail friend, how goes thy work?
Q&A: Lore
1. What led the humans to the land of Darkahlen?
Diseases and plagues
2. What sparked the elven-human war?
A human attack on an elven settlement.
3. What is the capitol of Assyria?
What is the velocity of a swallow?
4. What are the current ethnic groups?
Casterians, Adelbrechtens, Tains
Licentia & Locatio.
Why do you want to join the server?: I've been looking for a new RP server, since i've been playing on some RP servers before but all of them either shut or was just an bad server overall. This one seems really good tho, exept from the fact that you can't be a dwarf...
What do you want in a RP server?: I want nice staff, serious players and a fancy lore.
IC INFO:
Name: Golarmo
Age: 21
Town: Paisley
Ethnicity: Tain
Appearance: About 6 ft tall, dark green eyes and light-brown hair.
Skin (Optional):
Backstory (More than 5 sentences): Golarmo were raised up in a miners family, the sixth kid but the only one who survived the first years of life.
As he grew his father, who almost constantly worked in the mines, learned him yield a pickaxe. His mother who exept from cooking and cleaning also took care of a small farm did also learn him how to survive, only using dirt and some seeds, and lots of time of course. The father died like everyone does, and his wife followed him soon to the death.
Golarmo started to work in the mines like many other young men. He sold his mothers small farm, but spent all free time in the garden. Golarmo is waiting for a chance to impress on his Lord, longing to become a freeman and perhaps more.
RP Example:
The man in charge at the mines: I hereby announce that we need some miners tonight, so to everybody who wants to earn a extra coin, sign up here!
*Golarmo goes without hesitate and signs up for the night shift*
Q&A: Lore
1. What led the humans to the land of Darkahlen?
Terrible diseases and famine.
2. What sparked the elven-human war?
An human nomadic tribe attacked a elven settlement.
3. What is the capitol of Assyria?
... wait... Monthy Python?
4. What are the current ethnic groups?
Casterians Adelbrechtens
Tains
Licentia & Locatio
A pretty good application, but you did have some grammar and spelling errors, and yes, Monty Python.
The errors were very minor and I think you will do well. Accepted
Why do you want to join the server?: It seems really intersting and i have been looking for a good server to make my home/main server
What do you want in a RP server?: I love medieval RP, and just the era itself with Kings, lords Knights and peasants, it makes for some good fun.
IC INFO:
Name: Bardalys
Age: 25
Town: Visahelm
Ethnicity: Adelbrechtens
Appearance: Somewhat tall, Dark Brown Hair,
Skin (Optional): (PlanetMinecraft appears to be down so i cannot get my skin)
Backstory (More than 5 sentences): Bardalys grew up on small farm in a tiny little village in a forgot little corner of the world. He spent most of his childhood working hard in the fields with his brother, Geoffrey. When Bardalys turned 17, and Geoffry 18, hey both decided to leave their home and venture out to find new opportunities in the lands of Darkahlen.
RP Example: Hail friend, how goes ye farm.
Q&A: Lore
1. What led the humans to the land of Darkahlen? a Disease that drove them from their original lands
2. What sparked the elven-human war? A band of Nomadic humans who attacked an elven settlement
3. What is the capitol of Assyria? I failed to see anything mentioning Assyria
4. What are the current ethnic groups? Casterians, Adelbrechtens, Tains
Licentia & Locatio.
Very nice application. RP example is a little short though, it should be ok though. Accepted
OOC INFO:
IGN:me7290
Age: 16
Location: California
Why do you want to join the server?: I want to join because i like to RP.
What do you want in a RP server?: I want a positive environment, and people who actually RP.
IC INFO:
Name: Geoffrey
Age: 26
Town: Visahelm
Ethnicity: Adelbrechtens
Appearance:
Skin (Optional):
Backstory (More than 5 sentences): Geoffrey grew up on small farm in a tiny little village in a forgot little corner of the world. He spent most of his childhood working hard in the fields with his brother, Bardalys . When Bardalys turned 17, and Geoffrey 18, they both decided to leave their home and venture out to find new opportunities in the lands of Darkahlen.
RP Example: Hail friend, how goes thy work?
Q&A: Lore
1. What led the humans to the land of Darkahlen?
Diseases and plagues
2. What sparked the elven-human war?
A human attack on an elven settlement.
3. What is the capitol of Assyria?
What is the velocity of a swallow?
4. What are the current ethnic groups?
Casterians, Adelbrechtens, Tains
Licentia & Locatio.
I can see that you are brothers with the above application, which is pretty cool. Your application is ok, but again, the RP example is very short, and basically a small variation of the above application's RP example. Accepted
Why do you want to join the server?: Well ive never 'quite' seen a server exactly like this, i need a good server to join, lately ive been stuck with SR
What do you want in a RP server?: I want a server that will make me feel dedicated and immersed towards it, i want a server that wont let me down like previous servers.
IC INFO:
Name: Magneus Elnvarii
Age: 21
Town: Please tell me where i find the towns, im a little lazy today sorry :<
Backstory (More than 5 sentences): Magneus was born into a rather... strange family, his parents were stubborn and fought all the time, his grandmother lived with them too because his grandpa died and the other elves took away her property because she didn't have a job to pay it off, his parents have suggested divorce multiple times but haven't done so, they end up having sex and working it out, then an hour later they would start fighting again. Magneus had a pretty horrid life for the start of it, he was forced to work outside all day with farming and tending to his grandmother, he had taken a slight interest in magic and wanted to learn it, but he knew his parents wouldn't allow it, so he asked another elf to help him learn, he would secretly go away from the house to train with the man.
Magneus despised the humans so, he wished he knew enough magic to wipe then out, but Magneus knew that would be too hard for just him to do, he considered grouping up with a few of the local men to fight, but it was no hope.
Not too long from then his two parents died when a few humans were roaming the town, they were shouting offence's to the humans and so they were killed, his grandmother tried to raise him, but it wasn't too long for her as well before she passed, Magneus took it upon himself to find another family to live with, nobody wanted him in their family, but when he thought there was no hope for him to survive, his magic teacher brought him in, Magneus thought he was the nicest person there was in this town, he was given free lessons on magic and lived with him the rest of his life.
At the age of 20 Magneus decided to take off for himself, not knowing what might await him...
RP Example: Magneus sat in the corner of the inn as a strange human sat down next to him, his contact, "You got the money?" the man whispered to him, "Yes, now where is the secret cache of human weapons?" Magneus replied "First the money" the man retorted, Magneus handed over a smallish sack of money to the man, "Alright, their hiding place for the weapons is behind the big hill behind the inn, there is a guard there, you need to take him out and obtain the key to unlock the door to the room" the man said to him, Magneus nodded and took off leaving a tip at the front desk for his drink (Lets just say he had a drink)
Q&A: Lore
Cezdemorii’ Barkuarrefe Licentia & Locatio Boeraenne Varvas’kii Dezmorii’ Orai’stanne and um... halflings -.- (sorry that i copied and pasted them, i just didn't feel like learning them over and over)
1. Name each of the Elven ethnic groups in their native tongue.
Despite the collapse of the Elven Kingdom, the casting system continues to exist within the society of elves, which in turn hinders advancement of elves as individuals, as such preventing them from rising in social status.
2. What happened to the old ruling caste?
Why do you need a Q&A anyway? the lore just bores me, why would i need to know the taxonomic term for them?
3. What is the taxonomic term for Elves?
Um, Peanut butter
4. What is the average wind-speed velocity of an unladen swallow?
IGN: leblondieee .... 2. What happened to the old ruling caste?
Despite the collapse of the Elven Kingdom, the casting system continues to exist within the society of elves, which in turn hinders advancement of elves as individuals, as such preventing them from rising in social status.
@Everyone: You see, I quote this because Magneus copy & pasted it in his own app. It pisses me off even more because I actually helped leblondieee write her app. Maybe if the rest of Magneus's application wasn't cliché, insulting, and/or otherwise unlikable, I wouldn't be on the verge of ranting.
@AnarchyReigns: He wasn't lying about being lazy and he posted that the lore is s***. Do you mind pulling out a permaban on this twerp? Also, how much do you wanna bet he changes his app so he can say I was lying?
Of course, you could let him stay and repost. If you did that, I would counter it with rage comments; my expertise.
Why do you want to join the server?: Well ive never 'quite' seen a server exactly like this, i need a good server to join, lately ive been stuck with SR
What do you want in a RP server?: I want a server that will make me feel dedicated and immersed towards it, i want a server that wont let me down like previous servers.
IC INFO:
Name: Magneus Elnvarii
Age: 21
Town: Please tell me where i find the towns, im a little lazy today sorry :<
Backstory (More than 5 sentences): Magneus was born into a rather... strange family, his parents were stubborn and fought all the time, his grandmother lived with them too because his grandpa died and the other elves took away her property because she didn't have a job to pay it off, his parents have suggested divorce multiple times but haven't done so, they end up having sex and working it out, then an hour later they would start fighting again. Magneus had a pretty horrid life for the start of it, he was forced to work outside all day with farming and tending to his grandmother, he had taken a slight interest in magic and wanted to learn it, but he knew his parents wouldn't allow it, so he asked another elf to help him learn, he would secretly go away from the house to train with the man.
Magneus despised the humans so, he wished he knew enough magic to wipe then out, but Magneus knew that would be too hard for just him to do, he considered grouping up with a few of the local men to fight, but it was no hope.
Not too long from then his two parents died when a few humans were roaming the town, they were shouting offence's to the humans and so they were killed, his grandmother tried to raise him, but it wasn't too long for her as well before she passed, Magneus took it upon himself to find another family to live with, nobody wanted him in their family, but when he thought there was no hope for him to survive, his magic teacher brought him in, Magneus thought he was the nicest person there was in this town, he was given free lessons on magic and lived with him the rest of his life.
At the age of 20 Magneus decided to take off for himself, not knowing what might await him...
RP Example: Magneus sat in the corner of the inn as a strange human sat down next to him, his contact, "You got the money?" the man whispered to him, "Yes, now where is the secret cache of human weapons?" Magneus replied "First the money" the man retorted, Magneus handed over a smallish sack of money to the man, "Alright, their hiding place for the weapons is behind the big hill behind the inn, there is a guard there, you need to take him out and obtain the key to unlock the door to the room" the man said to him, Magneus nodded and took off leaving a tip at the front desk for his drink (Lets just say he had a drink)
Q&A: Lore
Cezdemorii’ Barkuarrefe Licentia & Locatio Boeraenne Varvas’kii Dezmorii’ Orai’stanne and um... halflings -.- (sorry that i copied and pasted them, i just didn't feel like learning them over and over)
1. Name each of the Elven ethnic groups in their native tongue.
Despite the collapse of the Elven Kingdom, the casting system continues to exist within the society of elves, which in turn hinders advancement of elves as individuals, as such preventing them from rising in social status.
2. What happened to the old ruling caste?
Why do you need a Q&A anyway? the lore just bores me, why would i need to know the taxonomic term for them?
3. What is the taxonomic term for Elves?
Um, Peanut butter
4. What is the average wind-speed velocity of an unladen swallow?
Alright, your grammar and spelling seem pretty good. Or it would be if I could tell what wasn't copied and pasted. The Q&A is there to show that you read the lore, it's ok if you copy and paste from the lore on the first page, but if your just ripping it off of other player's applications then it doesn't even matter. If the lore bores you, then why join this RP server? Declined
@AnarchyReigns: He wasn't lying about being lazy and he posted that the lore is s***. Do you mind pulling out a permaban on this twerp? Also, how much do you wanna bet he changes his app so he can say I was lying?
Of course, you could let him stay and repost. If you did that, I would counter it with rage comments; my expertise.
And no, I can't have someone perma-banned for their attitude and opinion. He is welcome to be lazy and like or dislike whatever he pleases, but he cannot get onto our server with it.
Listen here, im not wasting my time perfecting my friggen app just to get in a server i might not even like, you shouldn't force someone to read all the lore to get in, you can help them learn it if they need help with it, some people just don't get half the lore, and some people like me have a hard time reading it and can't remember any of it, my memory is horrible. You shouldn't punish for disabilities. I also don't know what the towns are so i HAD to rip off the town, and the old ruling caste? why does it matter, its not like im going to need that information every step of the rp. I'm an experienced Role player, i know what im talking about.
As Coastav said, then why the hell play on a RP server? Almost every RP server has a Lore..How would you know in what time the server is set, how the main towns have been built, and other stuff? If you hate lores, go find a server without a lore..kthxbai
Im fine with lore's, but lore's built that boringly are just... boring, you must make it fun for me to read or i don't feel like the server is worth wasting my time on. I know what time the server is set in, i don't know anything about the towns, but if you see you replied before i changed my post
Im fine with lore's, but lore's built that boringly are just... boring, you must make it fun for me to read or i don't feel like the server is worth wasting my time on. I know what time the server is set in, i don't know anything about the towns, but if you see you replied before i changed my post
Well, there is one city and two town/villages that are described as much as they could be. The server isn't even open yet so there really is nothing to describe until the players actually occupy the said city/town/village. So if you think the lore is boring, and you don't want to read it, then why join an RP server that has boring lore? It's an RP server and RP servers are about their lore. So if you don't care for the lore then don't care about the server. I'm sorry it wasn't more to your liking.
They are basically forcing you to, or you don't get in.
Im fine with lore's, but lore's built that boringly are just... boring, you must make it fun for me to read or i don't feel like the server is worth wasting my time on. I know what time the server is set in, i don't know anything about the towns, but if you see you replied before i changed my post
The lore isn't supposed to enthrall you and make you want to keep reading, it's purpose is to educate you on the time period and specifics of the server. Now to me it seems the lore does a damn good job of educating, so if you have any problems with the lore it's your problems not ours.
I wan't to join this server because it got all the things im looking for in a server, most of all the roleplay and the splending lore. Like every one else im also sick and tired of the scrubs from regular servers, so im looking forward to play and have fun with decent people.
The thing i want in a RP server, that is mainly a good story-line to start of with and ofc a good community with friendly people, im also looking forward for epic roleplay battles.
IC INFO:
Name: Reginald Windsor
Age: 36
Town: Town Paisley
Ethnic: Tain
Apperance: Looks like a warrior, a worn man of his age, in his mid thirties, always wear his old damaged armor.
I am Reginald Windsor, like my father, i was a warrior of Tain, in a young age i was taught of the art of combat and warfare. I became a great tactician and leader. So as i grew older i searched my fortune in Ashburton, i rose in rank and ended up as Commandor in the late end of the great war. I fought many battles, and slew many of unrelenting elves, i saw much death and destruction, but after all those years when the war was finaly over, i felt like i dint belong. So i chose to live in exile, i travled to the foreign towns near Tain and settled, trying to find my new place in this new world, forged in war and blood.
Thanks for accepting. Yeah, I understand about the ethnicity now, I'll fix it in game, Also, what I meant by "more human" was that the skin I showed you was an elf, but I edited it to be a human. Just to let you know
Please put a town not the wilderness!
We need people in towns not in the woods.
It's ok, just for the beginning we would like players to start in a town is all.
Server coming out anytime within the next yyeaaarr???
SOOO BOORREEDDD!!!!
IGN:me7290
Age: 16
Location: California
Why do you want to join the server?: I want to join because i like to RP.
What do you want in a RP server?: I want a positive environment, and people who actually RP.
IC INFO:
Name: Geoffrey
Age: 26
Town: Visahelm
Ethnicity: Adelbrechtens
Appearance:
Skin (Optional):
Backstory (More than 5 sentences): Geoffrey grew up on small farm in a tiny little village in a forgot little corner of the world. He spent most of his childhood working hard in the fields with his brother, Bardalys . When Bardalys turned 17, and Geoffrey 18, they both decided to leave their home and venture out to find new opportunities in the lands of Darkahlen.
RP Example: Hail friend, how goes thy work?
Q&A: Lore
1. What led the humans to the land of Darkahlen?
Diseases and plagues
2. What sparked the elven-human war?
A human attack on an elven settlement.
3. What is the capitol of Assyria?
What is the velocity of a swallow?
4. What are the current ethnic groups?
Casterians, Adelbrechtens, Tains
Licentia & Locatio.
A pretty good application, but you did have some grammar and spelling errors, and yes, Monty Python.
The errors were very minor and I think you will do well.
Accepted
Very nice application. RP example is a little short though, it should be ok though.
Accepted
I can see that you are brothers with the above application, which is pretty cool. Your application is ok, but again, the RP example is very short, and basically a small variation of the above application's RP example.
Accepted
Cezdemorii’ Barkuarrefe Licentia & Locatio Boeraenne Varvas’kii Dezmorii’ Orai’stanne and um... halflings -.- (sorry that i copied and pasted them, i just didn't feel like learning them over and over)
Despite the collapse of the Elven Kingdom, the casting system continues to exist within the society of elves, which in turn hinders advancement of elves as individuals, as such preventing them from rising in social status.
@AnarchyReigns: He wasn't lying about being lazy and he posted that the lore is s***. Do you mind pulling out a permaban on this twerp? Also, how much do you wanna bet he changes his app so he can say I was lying?
Of course, you could let him stay and repost. If you did that, I would counter it with rage comments; my expertise.
Alright, your grammar and spelling seem pretty good. Or it would be if I could tell what wasn't copied and pasted. The Q&A is there to show that you read the lore, it's ok if you copy and paste from the lore on the first page, but if your just ripping it off of other player's applications then it doesn't even matter. If the lore bores you, then why join this RP server?
Declined
And no, I can't have someone perma-banned for their attitude and opinion. He is welcome to be lazy and like or dislike whatever he pleases, but he cannot get onto our server with it.
Im fine with lore's, but lore's built that boringly are just... boring, you must make it fun for me to read or i don't feel like the server is worth wasting my time on. I know what time the server is set in, i don't know anything about the towns, but if you see you replied before i changed my post
Well, there is one city and two town/villages that are described as much as they could be. The server isn't even open yet so there really is nothing to describe until the players actually occupy the said city/town/village. So if you think the lore is boring, and you don't want to read it, then why join an RP server that has boring lore? It's an RP server and RP servers are about their lore. So if you don't care for the lore then don't care about the server. I'm sorry it wasn't more to your liking.
IGN: Lotharlionbane
Age: 17
Skype: Simon_achillius
Location: Denmark
I wan't to join this server because it got all the things im looking for in a server, most of all the roleplay and the splending lore. Like every one else im also sick and tired of the scrubs from regular servers, so im looking forward to play and have fun with decent people.
The thing i want in a RP server, that is mainly a good story-line to start of with and ofc a good community with friendly people, im also looking forward for epic roleplay battles.
IC INFO:
Name: Reginald Windsor
Age: 36
Town: Town Paisley
Ethnic: Tain
Apperance: Looks like a warrior, a worn man of his age, in his mid thirties, always wear his old damaged armor.
I am Reginald Windsor, like my father, i was a warrior of Tain, in a young age i was taught of the art of combat and warfare. I became a great tactician and leader. So as i grew older i searched my fortune in Ashburton, i rose in rank and ended up as Commandor in the late end of the great war. I fought many battles, and slew many of unrelenting elves, i saw much death and destruction, but after all those years when the war was finaly over, i felt like i dint belong. So i chose to live in exile, i travled to the foreign towns near Tain and settled, trying to find my new place in this new world, forged in war and blood.
Q & A
1. Disease and famine.
2. When a human tribe invade an elven settlement.
3. Nice monty pyton reference xD
4. Casterians, Adelbrechtens, Tains.