Before I show you three pictures from my sketchbook I would like to introduce myself. I am 15 years of age and have had no out-of-school lessons on how to draw. I guess you could call me a self-taught artist(?).
Please take a look and tell me what I need to work on:
Lunar Connection.
Pencil & Colored Pencils.
Hands & Feet.
Pencil.
By the Bay.
Colored Pencils.
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I regret to inform you these are not great, amazing, or whatever, they're are beyond my grasp of a word that speaks how amazing this is for a self-taught artist. All-in-all, great work there buddy :biggrin.gif: Also check my PM :smile.gif:
I regret to inform you these are not great, amazing, or whatever, they're are beyond my grasp of a word that speaks how amazing this is for a self-taught artist. All-in-all, great work there buddy :biggrin.gif: Also check my PM :smile.gif:
At first I thought you were going to insult me but then I read the rest lol. Thank you so much! I'm going to begin drawing fan art for minecraft later, when I get access to my sketchbook.
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Great work, personally the 1st one is my favourite! I think if you wanted any constructive criticism I would have to say that you could improve on your perspective, and making the scene more realistic (unless you're going for an abstract feel). Also, again for the 3rd one, you should try not to use so many perfect straight lines? Apart from that great work, but try and improve on the 3D/Realistic aspect and also the shading with the colouring pencils.
Thank you so much, this really helps me a lot. Uhm for the third picture it was from school, we were given a blank illustration & our job was to color it. I will definitely work on perspective & realistic shading. Thanks again!
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I like them , I just find the first one meh-ish. It just feels weird that everything is grey and one thing is colored. Nicely done though!
Alright, yeah I thought that was a bit weird too.. I plan to take that piece & edit it to make it digital art instead of traditional, only when I get a bamboo tablet :happy.gif:
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I think the things you need to work on most are perspective and shading/ rendering. Right now the perspective is kinda skewed and that majorly effects how realistic and good in general a landscape drawing is. The shading isn't really shading at all, it's details (like wood texture) with smudged pencil over it. Work on using lines to actually render the depth and eventually you'll be able to smooth it out to proper shading. Keep at it, bro.
Perspective, Shading & Rendering is something i'll work on this school year. I'll try to challenge myself and do things worth looking at! Yeah sorry about that smudging that illustration was drawn a year ago so.. Thank you so much for your words they really help me on the long run! Once I get access to my sketchbook i'll definitely try my best.
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Please take a look and tell me what I need to work on:
Lunar Connection.
Pencil & Colored Pencils.
Hands & Feet.
Pencil.
By the Bay.
Colored Pencils.
Thank you very much! :smile.gif:
The first one is by far the interesting one.
I like the third one as well, very well gone.
Hope you take pride in your work. :wink.gif:
Why not? If I can do it i'll try my best!
Thank you I'll always try to. Thanks again!
I was hoping for quite a bit of criticism, nonetheless I appreciate the comment! :happy.gif:
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Oh sorry! Thanks for notifying me!
At first I thought you were going to insult me but then I read the rest lol. Thank you so much! I'm going to begin drawing fan art for minecraft later, when I get access to my sketchbook.
Thank you :smile.gif:
Thank you. Since you said 4/5 and it isn't a 5/5 would you like to tell me what I could work on?
Thank you so much, this really helps me a lot. Uhm for the third picture it was from school, we were given a blank illustration & our job was to color it. I will definitely work on perspective & realistic shading. Thanks again!
Alright, yeah I thought that was a bit weird too.. I plan to take that piece & edit it to make it digital art instead of traditional, only when I get a bamboo tablet :happy.gif:
Perspective, Shading & Rendering is something i'll work on this school year. I'll try to challenge myself and do things worth looking at! Yeah sorry about that smudging that illustration was drawn a year ago so.. Thank you so much for your words they really help me on the long run! Once I get access to my sketchbook i'll definitely try my best.