NOTE Planet Ptaxius is pronounced Planet Tah-she-us.
NOTE Do not have to read everything, although that will help.
NOTE Reading the rules and the story are musts!
NOTE Sorry if it is lame and everything. Tell me what I can work on please as this is my first time making one. Actually I think its lame :tongue.gif: But I'll improve.. soon :tongue.gif:
Welcome! This is my first time making a role-play but I have taken part in others like LOST in minecraft, The Necro'Tyr, and Orchard. I do not have links to them, but they are located in Forums/Show Your Creation/Fan Art.
Also please note that I role-play on my iPhone and so I cannot reply as fast as you think, although I will be checking this thread VERY often since the RPs I am in take a while to get posts from others.
Also, for the applications, I want them really descriptive! I like reading, and if it isn't then your application will be denied. If you are unsure about the size then go and check the sizes of the applications in the RPs in here:
Forums > Show Your Creation > Fan Art
RULES
<1> No powergaming or godmodding! You cannot control other characters - First a warning, second a ban. An example of this 'Hope (my character) slaps Edmund (his character) and Edmund slaps him back'.
<2> Applications should be descriptive in every question it asks you. No one should have a short biography or a short description of it's appearance.
<3> Do not make your characters too over-powering as it can ruin the story many times. Same with objects.
<4> If I say an application is denied, it is denied. Although you have a second chance (also the last) to either improve it or completely start again.
<5> To confirm you have read the rules, put 'Diamonds' at the end of your application, or at the start. Doesn't matter. Make it visible.
<6> If a person is inactive for a week, he or she will be banned. Unless they have an appropriate excuse for their absence.
<7> If you want to talk to people, use OOC. OOC stands for Out of Character. The signs for OOC are (( OOC )) or OOC
<8> Insults, racism or any kind of 'bad' stuff will result in a ban. First a warning then a ban.
<9> Appropriate English grammar and spelling is a must. If English isn't your first language, then try your hardest. I do not care if your posts doesn't have any words that aren't simple, as I like to keep this as an easy to read role-play.
<10> My decision is final. I can also make stuff up in story. If needed or requested by.
<11> You can role-play with two characters, but I guarantee you, it will be hard!
<12> Double posting is not allowed. Even if the first post is one character and the second is the other. Only I can bump ( I will not be bumping too much )
$$$$$$ Making A Race Rule $$$$$$
<13> You cannot make a race that are like the Xans. Also you cannot make a race that are undead as they belong to Queen Alice. Make sure everything has a downside to it. And I can also change stuff in it. But the most important of all is to be creative. Make sure that it is NOT! I repeat NOT a job.
<14> Even though this is modern, guns are unfortunately not allowed.
=====
This is Mine Craft Related because if you want to dig dirt, you have to use a shovel. And MineCraft stuff like that. Cutting wood CAN make the tree float as Gravity isn't very strong in this new Earth. Also skeletons and zombies exist. Any suggestions? Post below.
===== Back Story
Earth has destroyed itself, only few hundreds of human beings are left. They must find a suitable planet soon or their existing will stop. Luckily most of the survivors are young people, that was an advantage to them...
Soon they found a planet very similar to earth. Very similar. It had green soft grass, lakes and rivers leading to small seas. People started to get excited, builders and architects started to plan about the city. There were some disadvantages though, there were monsters led by an evil ruler called Queen Alice.
When the city was built and everyone started working like they were supposed to in earth, scouters had been sent everywhere in case something aggressive lives near them. But sadly after a couple of months, only half of them came back with news. Creatures also lived in this planet, and to add to that, they all speak English! Some came back with news of the evil ruler and how they all think the scouters were taken and killed by them.. Fortunately not all of the creatures are bad, some good creatures fight. Queen Alice can convince anything to be on her side of the war except Xans. A war between Queen Alice and the Good Ones... Which one will win at the end? What do you think?
Everything is up to YOU to change what is happening!
=====
THE GOOD ONES
NOTE that applications only go in The Good Ones and not Queen Alice's side :smile.gif: Thanks
If you guys are interested, you get to either choose a race or make one yourself! There are many races in Planet Ptaxius.
Choose:
Humans: Self Explanatory... Unless you're an alien! DUN DUN DUN DUNNNN!
Elves: Elves are human-like creatures only smaller than an average human. They are great with bows and have tiny squeaky voices. They are also sometimes hyper, and caring. Rarely gets angered. Although they are one of the stupidest, most dumbest races in Ptaxius.
Akuals: Akuals are creatures who dwell in the waters and in lands. They are incredibly great swimmers and can breathe underwater. Very tall, normal voices and they are herbivores. But Akuals are not allowed to touch weapons of any sorts and kinds. The way they attack, is through controlling water. (Water Bending if you are confused and a fan of The Last Airbender)
Xans: Xans are angels who only wants good and light. They are all pure and cannot mix blood with other species. Xans control magic. But they are very harsh to creatures, and they cannot help that. They care for stuff but can be harsh at times. Speaks deeply and has very different accents.
Pankips: Pankips are panda like creatures who often uses their drunkenness as a weapon. These creatures are very dangerous to their enemies, especially when drunk. Even if they are drunk, they will NOT attack an ally. If a Pankip is not drunk however, they use glass as their weapons. Anything that has glass in it. They love to be complimented but they hate to be hated. Pankips are bad at jobs which don't include liquids in it. Usually slow and fat, cute.
<<<<<<< Originally from MMORPG Dofus, Pandawa >>>>>>>
Wolverines: This race are dog like species which uses their claws in battle. These things are weak in sunlight but strong in moonlight. They are small and hairy, and they run faster than any races. These things love blood and meat.
Devilians: Devilians is a specie that looks very much like big green plum. Please search Devilians Priston Tale in google and go to images to see. These things are amazingly strong yet very dumb at solving problems.
Ifties: Four feet tall, with a lizard like body. They are basically orange or red, or both. They have a great sense of hearing and sights. But is bad at aiming and attacking. These have incredibly long tongues, which can kill a victim even with a single touch. But can only do that once a day.
Or make your own! Refer to Rule <3> and Rule <13> Post suggestions below if you have any.
QUEEN ALICE'S SIDE
NOTE that no one will apply for the bad side lol.
Almost half of every race (including the ones you make) belongs to Queen Alice. The creatures that belong to Queen Alice becomes half undead, to reduce the pain taken if attacked. She owns everything undead.
===== Classes:
Make your own or choose. Classes are also called jobs and everyone in Ptaxius has one. They all choose for themselves.
Knights or Warriors are close combat jobs. Spellcasters are the ones who casts spells Illusionists make hallucinations feel real, also makes it themselves Archers are the masters of bows Clerics are healers in other words Mechanician are people who deal with mechanics. They can use their creation to aid them in battle or in work Tricksters is a class who uses playing cards as a weapon, and these people are good at gambling and haggling. Lancer is a melee type. They use lances or spears usefully and well. Dancers willingly aid in both battles and home. In battles, they use their dancing props and change it to a blade of some sort, and dance with it, killing many. Treasure Hunters are jobs that usually gets rich. They usually use their coins as a weapon and throw it any enemies. Runecasters are magic users who buffs or debuffs their allies or enemies. Sentinels are jobs that protect the nature both spiritually and physically alike. Scouts are used to explore the area ahead or around. They usually carry a light sword to protect themselves.
Refer to Rule <13> if you are making. Post below if you have any suggestions.
===== Quick Description of Queen Alice and a small biography
Alice is a teenager, a teenage alien who looks perfectly like a human, known to be eighteen, who rules the undead. She has long brown hair, with eyes that seemed to be lost. Her lips so thin yet speaks thick words. She is terribly harsh to the Good Ones but caring and loving on hers. She rewards well, to those who help her even with one word. Queen Alice is definitely not a human, yet looks like one.
It all started when she was about to turn ten. Young Alice was nice then. She gave food to those who needed it, and shelter to animals. People thought she was abnormal, because the way she looked like. Her parents were scaly skinned with a tail that moves aimlessly. Alice and her parents were obviously spellcasters. Alice was insulted every day, and so when she turned eleven, she had changed. A nice mind changed to a terrible sadistic mind. She tried to find a magic spell that can turn things into undead things, unfortunately she succeeded. And made her enemies turn half undead, and the spell to be her slaves. Those two spells, are secret. The only one who knows the two is just her. She had made an army.
===== Application Forms:
Name:
Gender:
Age: (Characters aged seventeen and below are unacceptable)
Personality:
Appearance:
Race: Describe the race if you are making your own.
Equipment: Any weapons? Any foods? Any objects?
Class/Job: Describe the race if you are making your own.
Biography:
Want to say anything?
===
So basically the starters of the RP start in the finished city. And meet there.
=== Here is my application that I will use:
Name: Blink Smith
Gender: Male
Age: 23
Personality: The personality of Blink is like a normal caring human being. He has always been like that. Only when he gets angry or insulted by anything or anyone, he stays there. Still and quiet. Often he apologizes even though it wasn't his fault just to stop the fighting going on around. He rarely jokes as well. He is also smart and amazingly talented with flutes.
Appearance: He wears white clothes with a French hat which a human gave to him. Blink has red hair that is often spiked to the back. His eyes only show two green lumps of leaves. Blink being a herbivore, his teeth show nothing but white. As white as snow. He was quite tall for his age, and has an annoying voice. His hand also leaves scars from fights against Queen Alice's scouts and soldiers.
Race: Blink are one of the Xans.
Equipment: He uses magics to help him throughout his journeys. Also carries a backpack with a load of herbs and flasks to contain special potions. Also, a short double bladed sword in case and a short flute.
Class/Job: Cleric. He is also a Sentinel. But a cleric most of the time.
Biography: When he was a child, his parents used to tell him how Blink was special because he was smart and everything. He was taught by an elderly Xan who was known as Elder Boone. Boone taught him the powers of healing and how he could brew potions up even in the darkest times. When Blink aged 22, his teacher had died at the age of 91.
Blink mourned and mourned, until he decided to carry on the magics of healing. He had gone to journeys near and afar to get rare herbs, and to complete his teacher's art. When Blink did finish it, he also decided to pass it on to younger students. Young clerics of every race. 'If Boone was here, he'd be proud' he always said.
He also knows how to fight. Fighting is essential, in case a group of scouts that belong to the Queen attacks him. Blink uses a weird weapon because he wants to be different. He hired a craftsman to craft it for him. The weapon looked as if it was three-dimensional because there were two blades in one handle.
Once, he came across a wandering sentinel. A sentinel that belonged to Queen Alice. Blink hid himself well until he came closer. Close enough to hold him and kill him... but he stopped half way. And he directly looked at Blink and suddenly ran towards him. Blink had immediately taken his double bladed sword and readied for a battle.
Of course he won! As the sentinel didn't see the sword. Blink had asked him for why he joined Alice. And apparently, Blink found out that he was a master of swords. Alice convinced him to join her as she needs soldiers trained. And the sentinel didn't want to die, so he told Blink the secrets. Blink thanked him, and forgave him... And killed him to end his misery.
Want anything to add? YeahhhhhhNope.
============= Also include in your post that if English is your first or second language as it answers many questions lying ahead.
Sorry if my thread is a bit long :sad.gif: I just want to make it clear and interesting. Please apply. It will be fun so spread the word out!
Oi I found thread. Character names: Danielle Durren(Warrior) and Sara Hall(Defensive cleric). By PlasticSmoothie.
Yes.
(Edit) You want feedback? I shall give you le feedback.
Perhaps you could add a clear goal? Yes, we have a war it seems, but what do we, as players, want?
Perhaps also a bit more information on the dark side, it IS more fun when people join different sides! =D A tip to make people join the dark side is to give them coo--- Ahem, no, to give the dark side motives except for world domination, destruction of the world or whatever people make up. Make them able to be sympathized with. Remember that no-one is truly bad in their own eyes, from the dark side perspective the good guys seem like the bad. Why does Queen Alice do what she does? How about the people who support her?
But this is very good for a first RP, don't put yourself down like that =)
Sorry for the thread-moving Paper. Also NOTE that this is the preview. I will message you along with all the other members (if there are any) that it is open.
Posted 13 July 2011 - 10:59 PM
(I'd like to apply a race.)
Race name: callipsian
Appearance: These crab-people look like the top half of a fallout 3 mirelurk mixed with the bottom half of a lobster. They are stark white.
Skills: to make up for their lack of speed and the ability to swim, they are rather strong and can take a good deal of punishment. Their carapace is a mixed blessing on which it makes great natural armor, if it were to be pierced or even cracked, it would feel like they just swallowed a branding iron. They are uncomfortable on land at best. Aside from being a protective shell, it also insulates well, making deserts absolutely unbearable to them. They excel at underwater combat and being a general first line troop. They are also good at exploring flooded or submerged caverns and mines.
Behavior: they are cautious around newcomers at best. This is due to their history of being hunted and eaten by the races long ago. If they trust you they would happily go through hell to see your well being.
Diamonds
Habitat: they live both under and above the coldest parts of the ocean. The land that they do have control of is tundra and arctic.
Posted 13 July 2011 - 10:59 PM
(I'd like to apply a race.)
Race name: callipsian
Appearance: These crab-people look like the top half of a fallout 3 mirelurk mixed with the bottom half of a lobster. They are stark white.
Skills: to make up for their lack of speed and the ability to swim, they are rather strong and can take a good deal of punishment. Their carapace is a mixed blessing on which it makes great natural armor, if it were to be pierced or even cracked, it would feel like they just swallowed a branding iron. They are uncomfortable on land at best. Aside from being a protective shell, it also insulates well, making deserts absolutely unbearable to them. They excel at underwater combat and being a general first line troop. They are also good at exploring flooded or submerged caverns and mines.
Behavior: they are cautious around newcomers at best. This is due to their history of being hunted and eaten by the races long ago. If they trust you they would happily go through hell to see your well being.
Diamonds
Habitat: they live both under and above the coldest parts of the ocean. The land that they do have control of is tundra and arctic.
lol its funny, you use that callipsian idea every time.
NOTE Planet Ptaxius is pronounced Planet Tah-she-us.
NOTE Do not have to read everything, although that will help.
NOTE Reading the rules and the story are musts!
NOTE Sorry if it is lame and everything. Tell me what I can work on please as this is my first time making one. Actually I think its lame :tongue.gif: But I'll improve.. soon :tongue.gif:
Welcome! This is my first time making a role-play but I have taken part in others like LOST in minecraft, The Necro'Tyr, and Orchard. I do not have links to them, but they are located in Forums/Show Your Creation/Fan Art.
Also please note that I role-play on my iPhone and so I cannot reply as fast as you think, although I will be checking this thread VERY often since the RPs I am in take a while to get posts from others.
Also, for the applications, I want them really descriptive! I like reading, and if it isn't then your application will be denied. If you are unsure about the size then go and check the sizes of the applications in the RPs in here:
Forums > Show Your Creation > Fan Art
RULES
<1> No powergaming or godmodding! You cannot control other characters - First a warning, second a ban. An example of this 'Hope (my character) slaps Edmund (his character) and Edmund slaps him back'.
<2> Applications should be descriptive in every question it asks you. No one should have a short biography or a short description of it's appearance.
<3> Do not make your characters too over-powering as it can ruin the story many times. Same with objects.
<4> If I say an application is denied, it is denied. Although you have a second chance (also the last) to either improve it or completely start again.
<5> To confirm you have read the rules, put 'Diamonds' at the end of your application, or at the start. Doesn't matter. Make it visible.
<6> If a person is inactive for a week, he or she will be banned. Unless they have an appropriate excuse for their absence.
<7> If you want to talk to people, use OOC. OOC stands for Out of Character. The signs for OOC are (( OOC )) or OOC
<8> Insults, racism or any kind of 'bad' stuff will result in a ban. First a warning then a ban.
<9> Appropriate English grammar and spelling is a must. If English isn't your first language, then try your hardest. I do not care if your posts doesn't have any words that aren't simple, as I like to keep this as an easy to read role-play.
<10> My decision is final. I can also make stuff up in story. If needed or requested by.
<11> You can role-play with two characters, but I guarantee you, it will be hard!
<12> Double posting is not allowed. Even if the first post is one character and the second is the other. Only I can bump ( I will not be bumping too much )
$$$$$$ Making A Race Rule $$$$$$
<13> You cannot make a race that are like the Xans. Also you cannot make a race that are undead as they belong to Queen Alice. Make sure everything has a downside to it. And I can also change stuff in it. But the most important of all is to be creative. Make sure that it is NOT! I repeat NOT a job.
<14> Even though this is modern, guns are unfortunately not allowed.
=====
This is Mine Craft Related because if you want to dig dirt, you have to use a shovel. And MineCraft stuff like that. Cutting wood CAN make the tree float as Gravity isn't very strong in this new Earth. Also skeletons and zombies exist. Any suggestions? Post below.
=====
Back Story
Earth has destroyed itself, only few hundreds of human beings are left. They must find a suitable planet soon or their existing will stop. Luckily most of the survivors are young people, that was an advantage to them...
Soon they found a planet very similar to earth. Very similar. It had green soft grass, lakes and rivers leading to small seas. People started to get excited, builders and architects started to plan about the city. There were some disadvantages though, there were monsters led by an evil ruler called Queen Alice.
When the city was built and everyone started working like they were supposed to in earth, scouters had been sent everywhere in case something aggressive lives near them. But sadly after a couple of months, only half of them came back with news. Creatures also lived in this planet, and to add to that, they all speak English! Some came back with news of the evil ruler and how they all think the scouters were taken and killed by them.. Fortunately not all of the creatures are bad, some good creatures fight. Queen Alice can convince anything to be on her side of the war except Xans. A war between Queen Alice and the Good Ones... Which one will win at the end? What do you think?
Everything is up to YOU to change what is happening!
=====
THE GOOD ONES
NOTE that applications only go in The Good Ones and not Queen Alice's side :smile.gif: Thanks
If you guys are interested, you get to either choose a race or make one yourself! There are many races in Planet Ptaxius.
Choose:
Humans: Self Explanatory... Unless you're an alien! DUN DUN DUN DUNNNN!
Elves: Elves are human-like creatures only smaller than an average human. They are great with bows and have tiny squeaky voices. They are also sometimes hyper, and caring. Rarely gets angered. Although they are one of the stupidest, most dumbest races in Ptaxius.
Akuals: Akuals are creatures who dwell in the waters and in lands. They are incredibly great swimmers and can breathe underwater. Very tall, normal voices and they are herbivores. But Akuals are not allowed to touch weapons of any sorts and kinds. The way they attack, is through controlling water. (Water Bending if you are confused and a fan of The Last Airbender)
Xans: Xans are angels who only wants good and light. They are all pure and cannot mix blood with other species. Xans control magic. But they are very harsh to creatures, and they cannot help that. They care for stuff but can be harsh at times. Speaks deeply and has very different accents.
Pankips: Pankips are panda like creatures who often uses their drunkenness as a weapon. These creatures are very dangerous to their enemies, especially when drunk. Even if they are drunk, they will NOT attack an ally. If a Pankip is not drunk however, they use glass as their weapons. Anything that has glass in it. They love to be complimented but they hate to be hated. Pankips are bad at jobs which don't include liquids in it. Usually slow and fat, cute.
<<<<<<< Originally from MMORPG Dofus, Pandawa >>>>>>>
Wolverines: This race are dog like species which uses their claws in battle. These things are weak in sunlight but strong in moonlight. They are small and hairy, and they run faster than any races. These things love blood and meat.
Devilians: Devilians is a specie that looks very much like big green plum. Please search Devilians Priston Tale in google and go to images to see. These things are amazingly strong yet very dumb at solving problems.
Ifties: Four feet tall, with a lizard like body. They are basically orange or red, or both. They have a great sense of hearing and sights. But is bad at aiming and attacking. These have incredibly long tongues, which can kill a victim even with a single touch. But can only do that once a day.
Or make your own! Refer to Rule <3> and Rule <13> Post suggestions below if you have any.
QUEEN ALICE'S SIDE
NOTE that no one will apply for the bad side lol.
Almost half of every race (including the ones you make) belongs to Queen Alice. The creatures that belong to Queen Alice becomes half undead, to reduce the pain taken if attacked. She owns everything undead.
=====
Classes:
Make your own or choose. Classes are also called jobs and everyone in Ptaxius has one. They all choose for themselves.
Knights or Warriors are close combat jobs.
Spellcasters are the ones who casts spells
Illusionists make hallucinations feel real, also makes it themselves
Archers are the masters of bows
Clerics are healers in other words
Mechanician are people who deal with mechanics. They can use their creation to aid them in battle or in work
Tricksters is a class who uses playing cards as a weapon, and these people are good at gambling and haggling.
Lancer is a melee type. They use lances or spears usefully and well.
Dancers willingly aid in both battles and home. In battles, they use their dancing props and change it to a blade of some sort, and dance with it, killing many.
Treasure Hunters are jobs that usually gets rich. They usually use their coins as a weapon and throw it any enemies.
Runecasters are magic users who buffs or debuffs their allies or enemies.
Sentinels are jobs that protect the nature both spiritually and physically alike.
Scouts are used to explore the area ahead or around. They usually carry a light sword to protect themselves.
Refer to Rule <13> if you are making. Post below if you have any suggestions.
=====
Quick Description of Queen Alice and a small biography
Alice is a teenager, a teenage alien who looks perfectly like a human, known to be eighteen, who rules the undead. She has long brown hair, with eyes that seemed to be lost. Her lips so thin yet speaks thick words. She is terribly harsh to the Good Ones but caring and loving on hers. She rewards well, to those who help her even with one word. Queen Alice is definitely not a human, yet looks like one.
It all started when she was about to turn ten. Young Alice was nice then. She gave food to those who needed it, and shelter to animals. People thought she was abnormal, because the way she looked like. Her parents were scaly skinned with a tail that moves aimlessly. Alice and her parents were obviously spellcasters. Alice was insulted every day, and so when she turned eleven, she had changed. A nice mind changed to a terrible sadistic mind. She tried to find a magic spell that can turn things into undead things, unfortunately she succeeded. And made her enemies turn half undead, and the spell to be her slaves. Those two spells, are secret. The only one who knows the two is just her. She had made an army.
=====
Application Forms:
Name:
Gender:
Age: (Characters aged seventeen and below are unacceptable)
Personality:
Appearance:
Race: Describe the race if you are making your own.
Equipment: Any weapons? Any foods? Any objects?
Class/Job: Describe the race if you are making your own.
Biography:
Want to say anything?
===
So basically the starters of the RP start in the finished city. And meet there.
===
Here is my application that I will use:
Name: Blink Smith
Gender: Male
Age: 23
Personality: The personality of Blink is like a normal caring human being. He has always been like that. Only when he gets angry or insulted by anything or anyone, he stays there. Still and quiet. Often he apologizes even though it wasn't his fault just to stop the fighting going on around. He rarely jokes as well. He is also smart and amazingly talented with flutes.
Appearance: He wears white clothes with a French hat which a human gave to him. Blink has red hair that is often spiked to the back. His eyes only show two green lumps of leaves. Blink being a herbivore, his teeth show nothing but white. As white as snow. He was quite tall for his age, and has an annoying voice. His hand also leaves scars from fights against Queen Alice's scouts and soldiers.
Race: Blink are one of the Xans.
Equipment: He uses magics to help him throughout his journeys. Also carries a backpack with a load of herbs and flasks to contain special potions. Also, a short double bladed sword in case and a short flute.
Class/Job: Cleric. He is also a Sentinel. But a cleric most of the time.
Biography: When he was a child, his parents used to tell him how Blink was special because he was smart and everything. He was taught by an elderly Xan who was known as Elder Boone. Boone taught him the powers of healing and how he could brew potions up even in the darkest times. When Blink aged 22, his teacher had died at the age of 91.
Blink mourned and mourned, until he decided to carry on the magics of healing. He had gone to journeys near and afar to get rare herbs, and to complete his teacher's art. When Blink did finish it, he also decided to pass it on to younger students. Young clerics of every race. 'If Boone was here, he'd be proud' he always said.
He also knows how to fight. Fighting is essential, in case a group of scouts that belong to the Queen attacks him. Blink uses a weird weapon because he wants to be different. He hired a craftsman to craft it for him. The weapon looked as if it was three-dimensional because there were two blades in one handle.
Once, he came across a wandering sentinel. A sentinel that belonged to Queen Alice. Blink hid himself well until he came closer. Close enough to hold him and kill him... but he stopped half way. And he directly looked at Blink and suddenly ran towards him. Blink had immediately taken his double bladed sword and readied for a battle.
Of course he won! As the sentinel didn't see the sword. Blink had asked him for why he joined Alice. And apparently, Blink found out that he was a master of swords. Alice convinced him to join her as she needs soldiers trained. And the sentinel didn't want to die, so he told Blink the secrets. Blink thanked him, and forgave him... And killed him to end his misery.
Want anything to add? YeahhhhhhNope.
=============
Also include in your post that if English is your first or second language as it answers many questions lying ahead.
Sorry if my thread is a bit long :sad.gif: I just want to make it clear and interesting. Please apply. It will be fun so spread the word out!
That is decent.
No dice though.
Give a man a fish, and he'll be fed for a day.
But here are the members anyway :/
Owner:
vMpee { as Blink the Cleric/Sentinel }
Moderators:
Members:
PaperSmoothie { as Danielle the Warrior } and { Sara the Defensive Cleric }
Chuakid { as Kripton the Sentinel }
Yes.
(Edit) You want feedback? I shall give you le feedback.
Perhaps you could add a clear goal? Yes, we have a war it seems, but what do we, as players, want?
Perhaps also a bit more information on the dark side, it IS more fun when people join different sides! =D A tip to make people join the dark side is to give them coo--- Ahem, no, to give the dark side motives except for world domination, destruction of the world or whatever people make up. Make them able to be sympathized with. Remember that no-one is truly bad in their own eyes, from the dark side perspective the good guys seem like the bad. Why does Queen Alice do what she does? How about the people who support her?
But this is very good for a first RP, don't put yourself down like that =)
Kripton the Sentinel
EDIT:BTW, I may not be active, Im in primary 6(grade 6) and have PSLE this year. STUDDYYY
EDIT2: I see you took the Sentinel idea.
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(I'd like to apply a race.)
Race name: callipsian
Appearance: These crab-people look like the top half of a fallout 3 mirelurk mixed with the bottom half of a lobster. They are stark white.
Skills: to make up for their lack of speed and the ability to swim, they are rather strong and can take a good deal of punishment. Their carapace is a mixed blessing on which it makes great natural armor, if it were to be pierced or even cracked, it would feel like they just swallowed a branding iron. They are uncomfortable on land at best. Aside from being a protective shell, it also insulates well, making deserts absolutely unbearable to them. They excel at underwater combat and being a general first line troop. They are also good at exploring flooded or submerged caverns and mines.
Behavior: they are cautious around newcomers at best. This is due to their history of being hunted and eaten by the races long ago. If they trust you they would happily go through hell to see your well being.
Diamonds
Habitat: they live both under and above the coldest parts of the ocean. The land that they do have control of is tundra and arctic.
http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/774957-a-guide-to-realistic-roleplaying-by-osakasun/page__gopid__10268670#entry10268670
lol its funny, you use that callipsian idea every time.
and its obvious you didnt make any changes. You just copied and pasted it from a differnet roleplay you applied for hence the time date.
the 13th? this roleplay thread started on the 14th.
http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/774957-a-guide-to-realistic-roleplaying-by-osakasun/page__gopid__10268670#entry10268670