The great war had struck, and it hit the land hard.
once guns, bombs and lasers had been constructed in minecraft all hell broke loose.
it seemed as if everyone wanted to drive their nail into the ground.
In the end it was 2 opposing nations that had almost all of the power
the the democratic nation of aria and the communist state of grell
Aria believed in freedom and individuality, grell believed in sharing and equality.
both stated they had good moral but when it came down to it they both wanted one thing.
Money
both states are dead now, the people, those who lived in bomb shelters and those that survived both the bombs and radiation now live in a desecrated, barren world, in an unforgiving wasteland.
we start our story in the land of aria, land of the free, but is it now?
you decide.
Species:
Creeps , a mutation occurring in certain survivors of the bombs, having a certain x gene and being exposed to radiation and gunpowder have mutated these, used to be humans. they cannot explode but most non-creeps still are wary frightened and aggressive towards them. they can live long but painful lives
Humans, your basic evolved monkey. unless you believe in Christianity, then your basic child of god. a nice majority of them have survived the great war and now are inflicted with great confusion, some banding together and others going insane and become bandits and raiders.
they live short but exciting lives
Elves, pointy eared, possibly evolved from badgers or maybe they just exist magically.
elves are magic users, they have existed on the planet for some time, as long as humans.
they did not participate in the great war. humans aren't fond of them, sometimes thinking of them as arrogant and snotty. also live long lives.
(Species Combos are allowed)(talk to me if you want to be something else)
Application Example:
Name:Remnant
Race:Human
Alignment: lawful-Good
Weapons:(you'll find one in game. however small mêlée weapons are OK)
Tools:(insta-open doors or omnitools. swiss army knives are OK)Crowbar
Bio: He was born from from a shelter dweller and a descendant of the great war.
Having left his home town he now travels place to place helping people.
this is the start of his journey
(application doesn't have to be long but it does help to use spell check and to fix any grammar problems)
You have a good layout, but this isn't original. I haven't seen you in any roleplays, you have no original races, and your grammar is atrocious. It'd be nice to see you in a few roleplays first... also, there's another roleplay that's stayed in the top 10 posts for almost two weeks now, if you want apocalypse, go join it.
Name:Zode
Alignment: Chaotic Good (naturally good, but self serving at times)
Species:Creep-Human Hybrid
Weapon: Mulitool Blade
Tools:Radiation Tent(is it OK?) Multitool
Bio:Zode's parents didnt see the difference between creeps, and non-creeps. Zode was proof of that. However, his parents lost in a skirmish with an anti-creep activists, Zode is alone in the world. Searching for others similar to himself; Zode can, and will, do unthinkable things in pursuit of his unknown, ultimate goal.
You have a good layout, but this isn't original. I haven't seen you in any roleplays, you have no original races, and your grammar is atrocious. It'd be nice to see you in a few roleplays first... also, there's another roleplay that's stayed in the top 10 posts for almost two weeks now, if you want apocalypse, go join it.
It wouldn't be silly. Let the thread die then go join others. You have no experience, probably. And to be honest this whole thread is terrible. Compare it to others, and it is. Compare that guy's application to others such as Viral Beasts's.
Name:Zode
Alignment: Chaotic Good (naturally good, but self serving at times)
Species:Creep-Human Hybrid
Weapon: Mulitool Blade
Tools:Radiation Tent(is it OK?) Multitool
Bio:Zode's parents didnt see the difference between creeps, and non-creeps. Zode was proof of that. However, his parents lost in a skirmish with an anti-creep activists, Zode is alone in the world. Searching for others similar to himself; Zode can, and will, do unthinkable things in pursuit of his unknown, ultimate goal.
no multitool, bio is ok, toss the multitool and your in
.
It wouldn't be silly. Let the thread die then go join others. You have no experience, probably. And to be honest this whole thread is terrible. Compare it to others, and it is. Compare that guy's application to others such as Viral Beasts's.
you make life very depressing. still, i'll go for it. gotta learn somehow.
no, people telling me I suck, I should give up and go do diff. things is very depressing.
nonetheless I'll go for it. by the way, what is original nowadays?
Look around Fan Art for roleplays. If that's been used, then don't use that idea. Make several ORIGINAL species. Like, from other games.
I used,
gnoll,
imp,
angelican,
ghoul,
and aquah.
Each has their own individual talents, such as gnolls being sneaky yet resourceful, imps being crafty and smart, angelicans being very good magic users, ghouls being powerful fighters, and aquahs having a major talent for maneuvering in water.
Look around Fan Art for roleplays. If that's been used, then don't use that idea. Make several ORIGINAL species. Like, from other games.
I used,
gnoll,
imp,
angelican,
ghoul,
and aquah.
Each has their own individual talents, such as gnolls being sneaky yet resourceful, imps being crafty and smart, angelicans being very good magic users, ghouls being powerful fighters, and aquahs having a major talent for maneuvering in water.
lol, those aren't orignal, just more variety. look, I appreciate that your trying to help but I dont want to just let this die.
Hes trying to help you from making a fool of yourself, just saying. Hes a very talented and gifted person in the Roleplay community you should listen to him. Go read Chivalry is Dead, good read+ Rp experience!
well, if you dont mind helping we could make this better, my grammar may not improve immediately but I know it will eventually. if not I only ask that you delete your posts, if possible, and leave. this discussion isnt exactly going to help me gain members lol.
once guns, bombs and lasers had been constructed in minecraft all hell broke loose.
it seemed as if everyone wanted to drive their nail into the ground.
In the end it was 2 opposing nations that had almost all of the power
the the democratic nation of aria and the communist state of grell
Aria believed in freedom and individuality, grell believed in sharing and equality.
both stated they had good moral but when it came down to it they both wanted one thing.
Money
both states are dead now, the people, those who lived in bomb shelters and those that survived both the bombs and radiation now live in a desecrated, barren world, in an unforgiving wasteland.
we start our story in the land of aria, land of the free, but is it now?
you decide.
Species:
Creeps , a mutation occurring in certain survivors of the bombs, having a certain x gene and being exposed to radiation and gunpowder have mutated these, used to be humans. they cannot explode but most non-creeps still are wary frightened and aggressive towards them. they can live long but painful lives
Humans, your basic evolved monkey. unless you believe in Christianity, then your basic child of god. a nice majority of them have survived the great war and now are inflicted with great confusion, some banding together and others going insane and become bandits and raiders.
they live short but exciting lives
Elves, pointy eared, possibly evolved from badgers or maybe they just exist magically.
elves are magic users, they have existed on the planet for some time, as long as humans.
they did not participate in the great war. humans aren't fond of them, sometimes thinking of them as arrogant and snotty. also live long lives.
(Species Combos are allowed)(talk to me if you want to be something else)
Application Example:
Name:Remnant
Race:Human
Alignment: lawful-Good
Weapons:(you'll find one in game. however small mêlée weapons are OK)
Tools:(insta-open doors or omnitools. swiss army knives are OK)Crowbar
Bio: He was born from from a shelter dweller and a descendant of the great war.
Having left his home town he now travels place to place helping people.
this is the start of his journey
(application doesn't have to be long but it does help to use spell check and to fix any grammar problems)
Viral Beasts, the apocalypse roleplay.
Please, before you make a roleplay, participate in some.
Alignment: Chaotic Good (naturally good, but self serving at times)
Species:Creep-Human Hybrid
Weapon: Mulitool Blade
Tools:Radiation Tent(is it OK?) Multitool
Bio:Zode's parents didnt see the difference between creeps, and non-creeps. Zode was proof of that. However, his parents lost in a skirmish with an anti-creep activists, Zode is alone in the world. Searching for others similar to himself; Zode can, and will, do unthinkable things in pursuit of his unknown, ultimate goal.
I think i'll wing it, if it dies it dies but i've already started and to quit now would just be silly.
no multitool, bio is ok, toss the multitool and your in
.
you make life very depressing. still, i'll go for it. gotta learn somehow.
And you learn by joining other threads. Not by rushing in with no experience. That gets you made fun of.
nonetheless I'll go for it. by the way, what is original nowadays?
I used,
gnoll,
imp,
angelican,
ghoul,
and aquah.
Each has their own individual talents, such as gnolls being sneaky yet resourceful, imps being crafty and smart, angelicans being very good magic users, ghouls being powerful fighters, and aquahs having a major talent for maneuvering in water.
lol, those aren't orignal, just more variety. look, I appreciate that your trying to help but I dont want to just let this die.
I
Don't cry for it. Try any another newbie roleplay.
So why you said "My First Roleplay"?
???
PROFIT!